UNIVERSAL ™ iCheck [OC superhero Build-A-Universe]

[Lmpkio]

@The Kid Lantern I posted it there in the CS did I not?

[Omega Man]

Yeah I edited my last post when I noticed LOL. Thought I remembered everyone who'd posted so far without looking back...

~KL~

[Lmpkio]

@The Kid Lantern Np. But yeah I posted mine there just as the thread was created so yay lol

[Carlsberg]

@The Kid Lantern

I never got any feedback on my CS, was just wondering if there was anything I could do? I saw that the vigilante slot was filled, is there anywhere else I can fit the character in?

[Weird Tales]

Where is everyone?

[Omega Man]

@The Kid Lantern

I never got any feedback on my CS, was just wondering if there was anything I could do? I saw that the vigilante slot was filled, is there anywhere else I can fit the character in?

@Carlsberg

When I was going through the sheets I liked the character but didn't realize how many vigilante applicants we had. Once the IC begins we're bound to have a few dropouts, then we could work her into the RP if you're still game.

~KL~

[Carlsberg]

@The Kid Lantern

sounds good :)

[Weird Tales]

WIP

Archetype: The Evil Monarch
Name: Zakkar
Alias: The Abominable Snow King
Age: 166
Powers:
Superhuman strength: Snow King can lift twenty tons.

Ice Manipulation: This power allows him to create and manipulate ice. For attacks he can fire off blasts of frost that freeze targets as well as shoots shards of ice to impale enemies. For defense Zakkar can create walls and barriers of super thick ice, which is extremely effective against blunt and piercing damage, and he can even form ice plating on his body to make armor.

Cold Empowerment: The colder the environment around him gets the more powerful he becomes. His maximum so far is ten times his normal superhuman strength.

Blizzard Machine: he has a magical device that can change the weather of a city size area and hit it with a large blizzard. The machine takes five hours for the effects to really hit hard and it can be destroyed, but Zakkar can make more if needed.

Weaknesses: extreme heat can drain him of his strength and make him vulnarable. Fire is almost like kryptonite to him and will slowly weaken him. Oil is also bad for him as well, which is why he plans to destroy oil refineries.
Alignment: villain
Personality: Cunning, humorous, ambitious, merciless and cold
Appearance:

BRIEF Bio:
Storylines: to conquer the world and make everything winter 24/7
Notes: [anything else you need to tell us?]

[Jotunn Draugr]

Archetype: The Evil Monarch
Name: Dave
Alias: My boss
Age: 65
Powers: Being an asshole
Weaknesses: Vacations
Alignment: villain
Personality: full, of, nothing, but, shit
Appearance: Best left to the imagination

[Lord Wraith]

Archetype: The Evil Monarch
Name: Dave
Alias: My boss
Age: 65
Powers: Being an asshole
Weaknesses: Vacations
Alignment: villain
Personality: full, of, nothing, but, shit
Appearance: Best left to the imagination

@Jotunn Draugr

Quality sheet there.

[knighthawk]

SO I have some ideas, but i'd like some opinions before getting started:
Demi-God/Goddess
My current idea is a child of Hades as a private investigator or police officer who deals with crimes of a regular or supernatural nature with his ability to talk with the dead. Seeing and speaking with the dead can evolve over time to commanding the dead as telepathy often does shift from passive to persuasive. If I can do this without stepping on toes, he might become something like constantine or ghostrider.

Feral Man/Woman [Wolverine, Tigra, Beast]
I was pondering a blend of anthro furry with street fighter as a ki-using warrior.


Big Man/Woman [Hulk, She Hulk, Thing]
Trying to play with tropes, I was looking at a medical dwarf anthropologist who found Thor's magical belt Megingjörð and the iron gloves Járngreipr. When worn, he gains a fantastic surge in size and strength to go from merely 4 feet tall to 12 feet high and well muscled.


mind you, these are merely the broadest of brush strokes and there is much more to refine, I just don't want to invest hours in and find out the spot was already filled.

[Jotunn Draugr]

I was pondering a blend of anthro furry

@knighthawk

Oh god! Burn it with fire!

[Zebra]

Might get an app up in a bit for the big guy, will think over a few ideas.

[Zebra]

Big Man

Archetype: Big Man
Name: Abelardus "Abe" Nerva
Alias: Caligula
Age: 25
Powers:

• Superhuman Strength - Believed to be the strongest man on Earth, although this has yet to be tested.
• Superhuman durability - His skin is stronger than steel, and most conventional weapons wont work on him.
• Superhuman speed - While not nearly as fast as most other heroes with this power, Abe still exceeds olympic level in his speed.
• Voice bombs - Abe has the ability to channel his inner energy through his voice and create 'voice bombs'. These usually take the form of missiles, precise beams of energy capable of blowing up a small house. However, they are not the full extent of his power as he is able to make numerous different kinds of bombs depending on how much energy he puts into it.

Weaknesses:

• Rhodium is his main weakness. It is the cause of the scar travelling up his mouth. It weakens and burns him when it touches him.
• Water. Abe is too heavy to actually be buoyant in any sense. He is able to use his superior length strength to jump out of water, but this only extends so far and if no one comes to save him he would surely drown in deep enough water.

Tungsten
Alignment: Hero, or though he's more of an anti-hero than anything.
Personality: [5 words best describing your character]
Appearance: [pic or description]
BRIEF Bio:
Storylines: [What do you have in mind for your character?]
Notes: [anything else you need to tell us?]

Unfinished, revising right now so I'll finish it in a little bit.

[knighthawk]

Demigod

Archetype:
Demigod
Name:
Mortimer Hero
Alias:
Mortician
Age:
28
Powers:
The ability to communicate with the dead. The more recent, the easier to communicate.
0-24 hours: Lots of panic and confusion as the death is so recent and they are frantic for help. It is difficult but not impossible to solve the simple crimes most easily in this small window.
24-72 Hours: More confusion than panic as they are coming to grips with being 'invisible' and probably seeing their dead body for more than a day. These are the most reasonable to deal with and can remember the most details of their life.
72-168: These are much of the last days he can communicate with the dead at the moment as the connection to them and the beyond becomes wispy and out of focus. This is most often single word sentences and pointing.
168+: If the ghost is still around at all, he is usually limited to psychometric impressions until his powers improve.
[improvement]
After enough time (or to measure up with others) his powers can grow from conversing to commanding and commanding to conscripting. Pulling up the dead from the ground or forcing them back in if someone else raised them.
Weaknesses:
He is a beacon to other ghosts, often leading him to unpleasant conversations at inopportune times.

His power is constantly 'on' meaning his disruptions vary from seeing people in various stages of fading to mental flashes if he pulls out a a dining chair a man choked to death in.
Alignment:
[hero]
Personality:
Clean, Distant, Inquisitive, Kinetic, Thoughful.
Appearance:

BRIEF Bio:
"I see dead people..."
Supposedly born to a librarian for the city and a doctor who lost her license over painkiller prescriptions so had to settle for being a mortician. His father always suspected the boy was not his for a significant reason, he was too good looking. Mortimer's father was a portly pockmarked man who enjoyed his port too much. By thirteen he was already taller than his old man and clearly of finer features. His or not, he was loved the same and carried the family name until his thirteenth birthday when the visions started. Flickers and flashes here or there made him think he was going nuts until he started getting pills to take. When one pill did not work, he took two, then four, then he met his real father.
Some say no two people see the underworld the same way as no two people live the same way. As well read as he was as a librarians child, he did not expect anything as palatial as he was shown; a Greek temple of all black marble with golden veins. There sitting on a throne was a well muscled man who had a scale on one armrest and an abacus on the other.
"This is a responsibility you are not yet ready for. You have not lost your mind, but you have lost your will. I grant you strength to return to the living and understanding of your new power."
He awoke from what was a 5 year coma from the overdose; leaping from 13 to 18 was a traumatic shift in body and mind but he put his renewed vigor to the effort and not only cut through the classes he missed out on but sharpened his skill with the recently dead in his mothers work. From catching up to graduating in only 3 years, he was 21 with his GED when he became a police officer, feeling that was the best way to use his powers to get information from the dead and have the power to persecute criminals to their full justice. That was 7 years ago, he made homicide detective after five and been an investigator for two years now.

Storylines: I can see him becoming a 'spirit detective' for a supernatural group in the city or else a collector of wayward souls for his dad until he takes over the family business.
Some items i'd like to see him get is his dad's helm of darkness and a pen he can use to give the dead a chance to deliver a final message that keeps them tied here before being collected.
Notes: [anything else you need to tell us?]

Feral

Archetype:
Feral
Name:
Gregor Liam
Alias:
Goldmane
Age:
27
Powers:
Martial arts: He was trained in the Shaolin art of the black tiger by his mother before he was 10. After he gained his powers, he adjusted the style to take full advantage of his anatomy.
Ki-manipulation: He as the ability to gather his overwhelming natural energy and release it in elemental blasts and attacks that defy the normal realm of physics that tap on the edge of magic.
Feline physiology:
Weaknesses:
With heightened senses, he is vulnerable to sensory overload, a simple flash-bang can leave him down for minutes rather than seconds.
Alignment: [hero or villain, or walking the line]
Personality: [5 words best describing your character]
Appearance:

BRIEF Bio:
Storylines: [What do you have in mind for your character?]
Notes: [anything else you need to tell us?]

[Jotunn Draugr]

@The Kid Lantern

Heads up, we've got new recruits here! Please, please, please no furries XD

[Omega Man]

We've already got a pretty full cast ATM with 14 players and characters. Can't accept any sheets from new applicants till we have a dropout or two...

~KL~

[Weird Tales]

@The Kid Lantern are my villain's powers fine?

[Omega Man]

@The Kid Lantern are my villain's powers fine?

@Weird Tales

Making a yeti or Sasquatch for an enemy would be fine, but giving them a machine capable of freezing an entire city is too much. Idk where the evil monarch archetype came from either lol

You can make minor villains who don't need a character sheet to face your hero. The only ones who need a CS are the ones who will be added to the sandbox.

~KL~

[Weird Tales]

<Snipped quote by Weird Tales>

Making a yeti or Sasquatch for an enemy would be fine, but giving them a machine capable of freezing an entire city is too much. Idk where the evil monarch archetype came from either lol

You can make minor villains who don't need a character sheet to face your hero. The only ones who need a CS are the ones who will be added to the sandbox.

~KL~

@The Kid Lantern

I plan for him to have henchmen and the blizzard machine is too make him a threat, it is breakable.