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@Fat Boy Kyle Long as those guidelines are met, then I guess he's fine.

But, regarding his dynamics, you don't have to put NPCs in there - that's mostly for relations with other characters.
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@Fat Boy Kyle Oh yeah, another concern that comes to mind is the fact that he can't exactly die. Whenever his host dies, he can just expel his parasites and inhabit another.
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@Mr Allen Jyay for a shitty character;

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@Fat Boy Kyle Oh yeah, another concern that comes to mind is the fact that he can't exactly die. Whenever his host dies, he can just expel his parasites and inhabit another.


He's certainly able to cheat death more than most, but there's still plenty of ways to kill him:
  • Extreme conditions (e.g. really hot conditions or really cold conditions) will kill the parasites. So setting him on fire ought to do the job!
  • The parasites can starve when they are left without a host; so you could just kill Odin by making sure he dies in an air-tight room. Or make sure those fighting him are wearing hazard masks.
  • There's bound to be various chemicals and medicines which can kill him.
  • He can't eject mid-merge, so during the long merge process he's completely vulnerable. So unless he dies in a one-on-one fight with no one else around, this actually means he's still fairly screwed if he tries to merge in or after a fight.
  • Degenerative diseases and mental illness can screw him over.


To be honest though, I think that this character could perhaps be a bit too contentious. I think I'll withdraw the CS. No hard feelings I hope :)
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To be honest though, I think that this character could perhaps be a bit too contentious. I think I'll withdraw the CS. No hard feelings I hope :)


It's all good, bruh. I was just concerned about a few things. I mean, Odin is a cool idea, but idk if it'd work in a roleplay (especially one like this). On the other hand, I hope you're not withdrawing from the RP itself. lol

You're free to submit another character.
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@FernStone What a terrible character.

Accepted.
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@Mr Allen JWhy thank you :P
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I mean, Odin is a cool idea, but idk if it'd work in a roleplay (especially one like this).


Thats a concern I share, which is why I withdrew him. Moreover, i don't think I'm a good enough writer to make a character like that work haha.

I'll certainly submit another CS if I have any ideas for one
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Thats a concern I share, which is why I withdrew him. Moreover, i don't think I'm a good enough writer to make a character like that work haha.

I'll certainly submit another CS if I have any ideas for one


I'll provide you with help/good ideas if necessary.
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I'm going to work on another post.
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@Acid@Alkali Want to do my amazing writing exercises while I come up with more.

While I take too damn long to write up the first IC post (Because I still play too many vidya games), bide your time with some character exercises!

  • Provide a quote of your character describing their own morality.
  • Someone is getting mugged/assaulted in an alleyway! What does your character do?
  • Your character has invited someone to dinner, where will they go?

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@tsukune I just thought of something; Malik and Haruka could become homies.
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How about this guy? I named him Sparkles - that means you have to accept him.


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@Fat Boy Kyle Pretty good, I actually like this character. Only thing I want to note is that, while his power is fairly on the low end, I think he does need a weakness more than "can blind other people." lol

So here are my probably retarded suggestions! 1). Since he'll be giving off a bit of energy when he shoots light, he should get burned by it (even if it's slightly) due to the energy build up. 2). You didn't mention if Asuma could get blinded by his own light.

Also, anyone can interact with Malik, or any of my other characters - I'm really desperate for some interaction.
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@Fat Boy Kyle Pretty good, I actually like this character. Only thing I want to note is that, while his power is fairly on the low end, I think he does need a weakness more than "can blind other people." lol


Fair haha

Any better now?

p.s. Is there anyone who my character should or is likely to know? That's not me failing to read through the OOC and CSs probably, it's just that there's a lot of information lol
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@Fat Boy Kyle I'm not particularly fond of overheating weaknesses because they rarely come up in Roleplays. lol

But, the radiation weakness is cool with me, he's accepted.

As for who he could know... I'm not precisely sure. I know he asked to be a RAVEN, but I don't know that he would know Cindy without raising a fuss with RAVEN. Meifeng was in other places for awhile (Like for a few years) before returning to Baybridge - then she left again.

But, we can say he works at the same cafe as Jennifer does (I gave it one of the stupidest names I could think of - Thanks-a-Latte) and use that as a way for them to know each other.
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I kinda want to do a collab with Cindy and any of the other RAVENS.
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@Fat Boy Kyle If you want an idea of how to introduce Asuma, give me a shout.
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I'm going to finish the other NPC sheets for the rest of Diana's group later.



Oh and here's Makoto since she'll play a part.

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@Fat Boy Kyle We could possibly do something with Asuma and Lihua in the meantime. Or someone else.
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