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Ok, I'm thinking I might have some time to check this out now haha.
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@Prince of Seraphs

As Orson Scott Card says, as long as one realizes the first draft of a piece is always tossable, the writer will do just fine. I don't mind a mass history overhaul or expanding Enchantment to all races, but the character's significance in society and arguably plot is that she has the best and broadest understanding of Enchantment. If the mechanics of Enchantment and Autumn land/society sit well with you, I don't mind revising and coordinating such details.

It is likely, then, that I would revise the race to Autumn Elves and eliminate its racial tie to enchantment. Forgoing all ancient history, however, I will need guidelines or at the very least suggestions for how an Autumn ruler came into power and what society would expect from her.
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There's nothing inherently wrong here but there are certain aspects that I need more details on. These are largely to do with the areas that were left purposefully vague. Horus' death, Yasha's age etc. Since you likely don't want those things to be public knowledge if you could please PM them to me that would be great.



What exactly differentiates the Rakshasas' primal form from its humaniod one? It seems they are almost identical save for a number of details with could just as easily be hidden with glamour.

@Prince of Seraphs, I am more than happy to assist in writing lore and detailing the Summer Court if you'd allow me.


I would be more than grateful if you would. Just so you know I have a tendency to take a concept and run with it so if I like a beginning you make by the time I finish with it might not be recognizable. Hope that's alright. Don't worry I'll credit you.
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I may throw my hat in as things are more fleshed out. It looks like there are some specific ideas you have towards things that aren't yet posted, but I'll be keeping an eye out for the opportunity when the dust settles.
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I may throw my hat in as things are more fleshed out. It looks like there are some specific ideas you have towards things that aren't yet posted, but I'll be keeping an eye out for the opportunity when the dust settles.


That about sums it up, some things I'm just not certain how to put into words. Posting OOC might have been a bit premature but I'll getting everything in there eventually.
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This is really intriguing and well thought out. I'm not sure if I'm gonna join or not, but I do think it's definitely worthy of a compliment or eight :P
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@yoshua171 Oh hello Yosh~
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Hiya Shy.
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This is really intriguing and well thought out. I'm not sure if I'm gonna join or not, but I do think it's definitely worthy of a compliment or eight :P


Well thought out might not be the best words to describe it given how many holes I need to fill in but thank you for the compliment. If this is something you decide you'd like to join we would be more than happy to have you.
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I can tell you've put a lot of thought into the setting even if not all of it has been put up for display just yet :)
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@Everyone I'm going to be offline for the next week or so. I live in a split level and the modem is located downstairs. About once a month it has to be reset cause its a really crappy modem. The guy downstairs went on vacation for the next week and the modem needs its monthly resetting now but he refused to grant the landlord access to his apartment unless he's present (which sort of defeats the purpose of the landlord coming to fix it) so until he gets back I'm not going to have any internet access save for what I can scare up at the occasional internet cafe. I'm writing this on my phone's wifi but I just got a text saying my data is about to expire so I can't do that anymore until my next cycle. I'll see you all in a week or so. If I'm lucky.
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Condolences for the internet troubles! I'll see if there isn't more I can flesh out about magic and such in the meantime.
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Hrmm I had a concept for a faerie, was originally going to go with Goblins, but does anyone know any types of fae that are known for getting into pacts and bargains? Im looking to make a Faerie merchant.

Maybe they are just called "Pactmakers" or something, I have a definite idea in mind, but need to tie it better to some folklore creature (unless I can tie it to folklore itself, rather than a specific being from it)
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Hrmm I had a concept for a faerie, was originally going to go with Goblins, but does anyone know any types of fae that are known for getting into pacts and bargains? Im looking to make a Faerie merchant.

Maybe they are just called "Pactmakers" or something, I have a definite idea in mind, but need to tie it better to some folklore creature (unless I can tie it to folklore itself, rather than a specific being from it)


That is for the most part fae or faeries in general. The idea of the infernal deal comes from old Irish and Welsh stories (it was transplanted onto demons when the Christian Church became dominant and wanted to discourage the practice of older faiths). A fae pactmaker would be less a type of a fae and more their occupation. Though making deals and collecting favors would be a way of life in the fae realm it is not inconceivable that someone would use it to make their primary living. It wouldn't require a special type of fae as words are binding and promises must be upheld.

Think of it like this, Rumpelstiltskin is the modern version of an old faery story.
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That is for the most part fae or faeries in general. The idea of the infernal deal comes from old Irish and Welsh stories (it was transplanted onto demons when the Christian Church became dominant and wanted to discourage the practice of older faiths). A fae pactmaker would be less a type of a fae and more their occupation. Though making deals and collecting favors would be a way of life in the fae realm it is not inconceivable that someone would use it to make their primary living. It wouldn't require a special type of fae as words are binding and promises must be upheld.

Think of it like this, Rumpelstiltskin is the modern version of an old faery story.


Hrm alright. I kinda had an Idea for fae that are born from special bargains, they exist because they are a natural legal consequence of ancient fae deals. These deals act as a truename for these "Pactborn" fae and they are very rarely speak of them for fear of it being used as leverage.
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