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"We became an Apprentice to a Magic Master of another world?!?!?!?"

This roleplay is as the name entails all about the journey of a group of 5 or less kids (14-16 in age), as they become the apprentice of a magic user. They will grow from knowing nothing about magic, to becoming masters. A very long journey where they have to deal with many hardships.

The roleplay first starts in modern times, these kids have most likely ran away from home for one reason or another. They have been running around until they found their first Clue. This clue was the starting point that magic existed, something that only people with the talent to perceive magic can find. By following these clues these kids find their way to a slightly run down shop in the alley of some random city. From there they meet the shop keeper, who ends up taking them on a long and hard journey as his apprentices. To a whole new world.







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Alright, here we are.

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WIP

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@TheWindel

Still need some Spell names for your spells and a 3 word or so chant.

@Rune_Alchemist
Accepted

@XxLyraxX
You need to rework one or two of your spells to make them sound actually like spells, along with making them names and small 3 word chants. Also change 'Telekinesis' within your talent into Neutral Magic. Neutral magic will hold spells like Telekinesis, Telepathy, Detection, Cleaning etc....

@Zahir
Your spells still sound bit like abilities. 'Controlling Plants to Move' and 'Bending Sun rays' like I said before, spells tend to do a specific action, this action isn't one that can changed into something different. 'Controlling Plants to Move' isn't a simple action spell.

@sassy1085
Let me know when your character is finished.
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@olcharlieboi

You actually want Spell names? Eh, I'll make something later.
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@olcharlieboi Well, I modified the spells to seem more like spells and not actions.
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Note to my roleplayers, won't be back on until Saturday, internet is down, phone doesn't have much in terms of data.
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@Zahir @TheWindel @Empress @sassy1085 @XxLyraxX @Rune_Alchemist
I'm Back everyone, internet is back up and running, turns out it was the cable that was the problem -_- it was chewed on by our dogs so we had to get it replaced, then I had to do things on the modem because of stuff I had to do when troubleshooting it beforehand with the people on the phone.

@Zahir
They are actual spells now so that is good, accepted.

@Empress
Get spell names and small chants for each spells and you'll be accepted, I will state for future spells atlest in terms of conjuration, they can't be a 'summon anything that fits in this category'. In other words like your 'Summon any small bronze object' Summoning spells for both conjuration and summoning tend to target one thing at a time. There are 'Group Summoning' which summons multiple things at a time but they fit in a specific way.
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P.S. to everyone, since we have exactly only 6 people really I will end up accepting everyone, simply as soon as their CS' fit the roleplay.
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@olcharlieboi Thank you!!

As well that sucks your dogs chewed on the cord. Hope it gets fixed/replaced soon enough so you don't have anymore problems.
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@Zahir
It's already back up when I made that post man lol, only way to make good posts is with my computers since my phone doesn't like it when I'm sitting on something for so long, it tends to go 'NO' and either just kicks me off, or crashes the app in a slow process, and where is everyone :(.
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@olcharlieboi Oh, I thought you were using somebody Else's internet or something and just telling us. And that sucks. A reason I don't like spending money on phone's because they always hate me. . . (reason I don't gotta phone) lol!

Everyone's dead. . . No, I don't know where everyone went.
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@Zahir
I live in the country so kind of no one around me let alone any internet really lol.

@TheWindel @Zahir @Empress @sassy1085 @XxLyraxX @Rune_Alchemist
Sound off! see who is still here and wish to participate.
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@olcharlieboi

Here and present.
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@olcharlieboi Here still :) .
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@sassy1085 @Empress @Rune_Alchemist @Zahir
so only 4 of the 6 remain.. can't be helped I guess. I know Windel has withdrawn, they sent me a PM stating so, while idk anything with Lyra, and only two have their characters ready.

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Try to finish your first draft sometime soon please sassy.

@Empress
You only really need is some kind of chant for each spell.
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