[OOC] Mutant Sanctuary 1

[KatherinWinter]

@Alwaysshe's approved.

[KatherinWinter]

@AlwaysRoxy and Issac aren't in front of a house. He is standing outside a mechanic's shop. kind of like this

[Always]

@KatherinWinter Oh sorry. I was going by the places down here. We have houses and such that are stores below and then above they have shitty ass apartments. They suck.

[KatherinWinter]

@Always We have apartments on top and under stores here but most aren't in bad shape. The places here would be rundown but functional. So Roxy's place would look more like this: Her shop would be in the bay and her apartment upstairs.

[Always]

@KatherinWinter Okay. Thank you for the clearification.

[JImFromTheOfice]

@KatherinWinter
Sorry I've been inconsistent with my posts. I've been sick the last few days and I've only started feeling better yesterday but my work had piled up although I've caught up fairly well. I'm going to try to get one post a day now if possible and I apologize for any inconvenience i've caused due to my low post count and overall lack of experience with RP.

[KatherinWinter]

@JImFromTheOfice Thank you for letting me know. I don't demand post once a day but it would be nice. If you can post atleast every couple of days I am happy.

[King Tai]

Name: Kamar(left) and Kaleem(right) Frazier
Age: 23 and 18
Mutation:
Kamar- His mutation is the use of creating Psychic constructs. User can change psychic energy into tools, objects, weapons and other items. Construct structural strength may be limited by the users will.

Kaleem- His mutation is self replication or duplication/copying. User can instantly and perfectly replicate themselves. The max numbered amount of clones that can be made currently is 10 at a time. More than that will cause a strain to the original's body. If a clone dies, they turned to dust. And between the clones, they have a hive mind.

Bio: Kamar and Kaleem were both raised by their great aunt after the death of their mother and father from a car accident. Something that's been difficult for both Kamar and Kaleem but even more so for the older brother since Kaleem was too young to remember them. For the most part, the two were raised in a loving environment by their aunt who is a Lieutenant for the police department.

This took a change after the accident for Kamar when his mutation first awakened. He was teased and mad fun of by his peers about his parents' death. This led to his quick temper and triggered his powers and caused injury to several of the antagonizing students. Of course, this led to Kamar getting into trouble. His aunt found the hard he was a mutant but just a late bloomer. When Kamar got in trouble, his aunt, knowing the procedures, had to get a collar for Kamar since he was 16, until he learn to control his ability. It wasn't until a few years later that Kaleem didn't awaken his power until he was 16 himself in a near death situation.

Since Kamar have come into age and his aunt retired from the force, she later passed away from a brain aneurysm, leaving the brothers to care for themselves. But now that they were living in the sanctuary, Kamar was going to have to learn to content with his powers just like his younger brother while trying to live with others like them.

@KatherinWinter

[Wyvin]

Appearance: Small and slim in stature at only 4' 5", with a light gray body covered in small, fine scales which are hard to see but smooth to the touch. A round head carries two large protrusions which can only be ears, though they look like fins. A black hole at the base of these "ears" confirms the first to be true. The head also sports two large solid-colored blue eyes, and no visible nose. A small shark-like fin adorns the back of the torso, which leads into a large tail similar to that of a thresher/zebra shark, and almost as long as the rest of the body. The front limbs appear normal enough, besides the fingers on the end being webbed, while the legs are anything but normal, bending backwards to look more the hind legs of a dog or a cat than a human(with webbed toes, and she's still bipedal).

Name: Kyara Siphron

Age: 17

Mutation: Kyara feels more at home in the water than on land because of her mutation making her almost more fish than human. She is able to breathe normally underwater, and can swim fairly fast. She also has a water body, being able to turn into a liquid and seemingly melt into water or just become a puddle without an outside source of water. In this form though, she is only able to navigate within bodies of water and cannot propel her liquid self anywhere outside of them(a puddle of Kyara on dry land can't move by itself). This mutation makes her body dehydrate faster than normal, so she likes to stay near bodies of water, and normally carries water bottles.

Bio: Tested at birth, Kyara had always been the misfit of the family. Her two older siblings and her father tended to avoid her, with only her mother seeming to care for her well-being, or even wanting her to stay. As she grew older, she spent more and more time away from home and away from school, with her appearance bringing ridicule from the nastier children of the town. Though she knew that most of the children understood and didn't hate her, she pushed herself away from them and became increasingly shy and wary. For business reasons, their family had to move away. Having to move into a new house in a large city, Kyara at 14 years old didn't know if she could handle the new place, and sure enough, the city had nasty children in much larger quantities. Cornered and afraid, there came a moment when she had to leave. As a runaway she was hard to find being able to shelter in any body of water, and as soon as she was found, her parents decided she was too much trouble to keep. The new mutant couple she was given to were Sera and Cyrus Siphron, Sera with the ability to understand animal body language and communication and Cyrus with the ability of knowing the exact measurements of substances. A very nice couple, they worked as a Veterinarian and a Chef respectively inside of the sanctuary. She has a hard time around other people, trusts cautiously and likes to feel free.

[KatherinWinter]

@Wyvin I am all for characters having dark pasts. But there are a couple of problems with your characters bio. First there is no way the documentation of her existence could be destroyed in the fire. One this is 2040, documentation like that would be in several places (hospital, Social security, mutant registration, schools, doctors, ect.)
I have no problem with her living on the run for a couple of years. But once she collared she would be given to a mutant couple to live with until she was 18 or ready to live on her own. That couple would be very carefully chosen. They would want her to live with them.

[Wyvin]

@KatherinWinter Okay, I edited it, sorry for that. Also, this is my first time roleplaying so sorry for the inevitable future mistakes.

[KatherinWinter]

@Wyvin That's better. She is approved. If you have questions don't hesitate to ask.

[King Tai]

@KatherinWinter

Finished bio

[KatherinWinter]

@King Tai Sorry! Somehow I forgot to respond to your post. Only thing you need to change is the collar. All mutants get collars at sixteen or when they test positive for the x gene

[King Tai]

@KatherinWinter

It's alright, I'm used to being neglected :P jk. But I adjusted it. Hopefully it's okay but if I need to change anything else, let me know.

[KatherinWinter]

@King TaiI try not neglect or forget people but sleep and I haven't been friends lately. They are approved move them in.

[King Tai]

@KatherinWinter I know, I'm just teasin' lol

and alright

[KatherinWinter]

@Always I have a serious problem with your post. Nothing in your character's bio indicates she should be this jaded. You either need to change her bio or the post.

[Always]

@KatherinWinter I was paring it with her anger for the world in a way. It is talking about when she was younger with her temper when she said she tried to be nice, and then it goes on about how she stopped when she realized that it wasn't worth it. It has to do with the fact she heard her foster parents fighting a lot, and just things she has seen. It is not suppose to be jaded its that she lost hope for good to come from good.

" Being nice get's you no where in this world. " She yawned, and shook her head. "Trust me I have tried countless times and all it did is get me used." Like said, she saw them argueing and working most her life. It wasn't fair, and when she did try to get close it got her no where so she left. Basically symbolizes something she likes

Which would you want to be the toy or the user?" This is more of talking about living in the actual human world and being pushed here by her parents. It symbalizes the government and that basically if there going to treat her like shit she is going to treat everyone like it too which can tie into her temper.

[/color] Eyeing Roxy up and down, rolling her eyes. She held her wrist with her hand.
"You still have hope for this world, but I lost mine long ago. There is no in between. You are used, the user, or the savior." She looked Roxy up and down.

"You are a savior but with every hero their light only lasts so long. Sure I would love to be different, better than human, but as long as we live here, where we have nothing it is not possible." This is just her watching through the window and is just something she thought about when she was bored, because she hasn't been too social with people.

She sighed shrugging. She remembered when she was that naive, but it was over now. "Everyone learns at some point. I'm not saying it's right. I know it's not, but there is no point to change it. " zLike said throughout her life her kindness hasn't made any situation better than it was before.

I can change it yea, but the words have meanings just not the way you were thinking. Her bio says what happened but not really how certain things affected her.

[KatherinWinter]

@AlwaysI get that you didn't include everything. I prefer you dont. I appreciate you explained your post. I can't say that ypur character wouldn't feel that way. Im going to give @JImFromTheOfice a chance to respond before Roxy shows Demetry why its a bad idea to talk like that to her.