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One last quick question: Are we free to create islands/culture among the give/take 300 islands? I have an idea for a character, but I'd like to create some context for why she is who and how she is, so I was just wondering.


Oh yeah, of course. I kind of intended for people to create their own home islands/cultures, since I both don't want to make a gigantic list of 300 culturally unique islands, and since that'd be a bitch for someone to read and then pick somewhere to be from.
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Perfect. Alright, I got a pretty solid idea then. Also, if possible, I'd like to swap my element reservation to Light; I think it suits what I have in mind a lot better. Sorry for that - Didn't have as concrete of an idea before. oAo
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Perfect. Alright, I got a pretty solid idea then. Also, if possible, I'd like to swap my element reservation to Light; I think it suits what I have in mind a lot better. Sorry for that - Didn't have as concrete of an idea before. oAo


No worries! Switching your reservation to light then.
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Now I'm the only one with Earth again. Sad :/

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Now I'm the only one with Earth again. Sad :/

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Really starting to notice a trend here of people looking way younger than actually are.

The idea of an incredibly valuable, but inhospitable mining town is interesting, and I like that you worked how valuable the island is into how the 13 would operate with such a valuable territory. I probably should have said something about Dhiroms to clarify though, that, compared to the other races, they have relatively similar lifespans, with even 100 years being an accomplishment for them. I know dragon races usually have increased longevity, but I was kinda iffy on that. Age doesn't seem to be a huge factor for her backstory though, so I hope this change doesn't impact her super hard.

Also whoa, cannibalism. I can definitely see her being placed into Solitary, and, given that this is the equivalent of Guantanamo Bay for the 13 Heads, there might have even been some torture involved. Though, not quite everyone is in Solitary. Being honest, I don't mind the idea of her killing an inmate and potentially like say, biting an ear or a finger off and eating it, but guards would likely step in before she could get a major filling. Just super minor stuff, though.

I couldn't help but laugh at the idea of Hamtaro's JP voice actress being a tough as nails dragon woman. Or QT's VA. Edits pending, she's good to go for the Character tab.
Also prepare for some big titties to pop up just about everywhere.
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Changes made, though I will say that I knew I should've asked about Dhirom lifespans. I wanted her to be teenaged this whole time, but the reason I had her age as high as I initially did was to cover for typical dragonic longevity, and not effectively make her a newborn instead.
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Changes made, though I will say that I knew I should've asked about Dhirom lifespans. I wanted her to be teenaged this whole time, but the reason I had her age as high as I initially did was to cover for typical dragonic longevity, and not effectively make her a newborn instead.


She's good to go!



All this plane talk made my head hurt. I'm no engineer, but it sounds pretty good, and it isn't really overpowered in any way for an airship to go fast. I dig the attention to detail you put into every aspect of the sheet, and created a very useful hub island in Omphalos. No doubt he'll be useful, as he could fit the Akula on a larger airship to deploy if the crew gets into a firefight between ships. Go ahead and move him to the Character tab.
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Welp, here she is. Tweaked some stuff, but nothing major. I didn't expand massively on anything in particular because I tend to feel a little trapped inside a role if I define it too much. I hope this works. :) If not, however, I'll happily change stuff and add to it!

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Really starting to notice a trend here of people looking way younger than actually are.


@The Irish Tree There's no island old men, that's why.
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While she talks a big game about herself, Satirra has her insecurities; most of which revolve around her being around women with superior body figures. She refuses to get over how female Draphs always seem to be blessed in the T&A department, and it irritates her to no end. There's no way that Satirra can hope to compete with a Draph when it comes to naturally acquired buxom; that, she can accept, albeit begrudgingly. If a woman of another race proves to have larger assets, however, she will never live it down. Her breast consciousness is so extreme that even if another woman might have a similar bust to her own, she won't hesitate to cop a feel just to be sure; if they don't feel any heavier, then she'll breathe a sigh of relief, but if they do...


I can already tell that Homura and Satirra will be the best of friends.
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@The Irish Tree There's no island old men, that's why.



YOU WRONG AS HELL! SOIYA!

Welp, here she is. Tweaked some stuff, but nothing major. I didn't expand massively on anything in particular because I tend to feel a little trapped inside a role if I define it too much. I hope this works. :) If not, however, I'll happily change stuff and add to it!



I love the idea of a warrior culture that embodies positive aspects, rather than simply strength and violence. LUCHADORS ARE COOL!
Backstory works well, as I can see members of the 13 Heads being into gambling on such an event. I don't have any complaints, though I had a funny thought that since they no doubt HAD to confiscate her mask, that she would probably have to make a new one out of some material before she gets her's back.

Go ahead and pop her into the Character Tab!
She's gonna love the dumb JRPG clothes NPCs will have.
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I ONLY JUST REALIZED THAT THAT CHARACTER IS A LUCHADOR OH MY GOD. This RP just got 20 times more awesome.
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This blitzball playing fuck is polishing YOUR balls, and basically? You're STUPID. Click here to find out more!


Putting memes aside for the moment, I like the athletic spin on a character like this, as rather than a straight projectile user, he spikes fucking darkness balls at people. Zildartz is a cool island, and I like that you spun the Grifters in a logical way, that people making sure the Junta don't get goods may not all necessarily be benevolent and purehearted.

I can see Zweite breaking up his faction of Grifters, especially since in spite of their benevolence, they very much operated within "illegal" territories. He's accepted, and good to go!
Also were you only going to be water to make a Blue Balls joke?

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Well worth the wait, too. I feel like she'll stand out a lot from her wealthy background, and her island seems like the kind of place one of the 13 Heads would LOVE to have a vacation home in. Gimmicks are fine, and the overall background is fine too, though Ziggurat is less of a normal sort of prison, and more of a "Fantasy Guantanamo Bay". I'm not saying she wouldn't go there, but I feel like you could mention that her father pulled some strings, called in a favor from one of the 13, and had her explicitly put there to keep silent with no hope of escape.

Overall, I like her. Pending the aforementioned slight edit, she's good to go!
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I love the idea of a warrior culture that embodies positive aspects, rather than simply strength and violence. LUCHADORS ARE COOL!
Backstory works well, as I can see members of the 13 Heads being into gambling on such an event. I don't have any complaints, though I had a funny thought that since they no doubt HAD to confiscate her mask, that she would probably have to make a new one out of some material before she gets her's back.

Go ahead and pop her into the Character Tab!
She's gonna love the dumb JRPG clothes NPCs will have.


Oof, good call. She just summoned a giant bud around her head to keep her face from being exposed until she scrambled together a substitute. Beware, friends, Bella will be pissed upon the start of the roleplay, for her Mask(TM) was desecrated.

I ONLY JUST REALIZED THAT THAT CHARACTER IS A LUCHADOR OH MY GOD. This RP just got 20 times more awesome.


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Also were you only going to be water to make a Blue Balls joke?


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