[OOC] Sundering Artifice

[AlternateMan]

Also, at least a little bit of backstory would be appreciated. Then I think you may be good to go.

[Psi Force]

@AlternateMan Hopefully it's good now.

[AlternateMan]

@Psi Force
Welcome aboard, Psi!
I apologize for the long road we've walked to get here.

[Dark Cloud]

@AlternateMan Duly noted, I will tone back her dialogue and incorporate your idea. Honestly just spent last two days trying to get CS's done for multiple RP's. I'll probably fully be done before Christmas or on Boxing Day. Or today if I can manage.

[Psi Force]

Can't wait to RP my character! :D

[AlternateMan]

@Psi Force Now post it on the cs section >;]

[Dark Cloud]

Dumb Lady with Big Sword

Name: Yumi Shimi

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Appearance

Appearance:

Personality: Soft-spoken and a little dumb, Yumi isn't really the smartest Sunderer but she certainly is one of the most optimistic people within Fidelis. Yumi doesn't talk very well and she is quite a klutz with anything besides her giant sword for some reason. She isn't all that organized with her thoughts and often just says whatever she thinks or just says random things that have nothing to do with the current conversation.

Background: Yumi's father raised her by himself ever since his wife died shortly after she gave birth to Yumi from an unknown illness. Her father Hiyoshi decided to remain single and raise Yumi on his own, During the years prior to the robots attacking he had high hopes for his daughter's future as a career woman bound for success but had his hopes dashed as his daughter was to put it bluntly, dumber than a doorknob. He started showing up home less going out to drink until he forgot where he was.

Subsequently he died trying to engage a robot in a fist fight and so Yumi swore:

"I'm gowna kill all da wobots"

Little did she know her fathers death was actually an elaborate elimination in order for the government to receive a highly valuable test subject like Yumi for free. So the government allowed her to be taken care of by research scientists that offered to help her in exchange for helping in their experimentation of cybernetics on the human brain.Yumi later participated in the experimentation of cybernetics upon the human brain, where she was fitted with an implant on the back of her skull. The testing proved successful yet not without a cost, because of the type of cybernetic and what it can do it caused slight brain damage in the part of the brain that helps a person reason and make logical decisions. Upon testing she nearly killed an entire research team but was luckily tranquilized before she could hurt them. The implant was improved yet the affect never changed. So now she exists within the Sunderers as a frontliner to fight the robotic threat to Fidelis's safety yet why? The answer is because the government views her as an asset to the cities safety and even though she is incredibly stupid allowed her to become a Sunderer.

Powers:

• Superhuman Strength: Yumi was born with superhuman strength that allows her to lift anything lighter than a smart car, allowing her to use the oversized sword she carries around with her.
• Berserker Mode: The cybernetic implant in Yumi's head taps into the part of the brain that produces dopamine and adrenaline, and allows her to enter an enraged state that greatly enhances her endurance allowing her to take more damage but at the cost of losing the ability to differentiate between friend or foe.

Equipment: Yumi owns a 5 and a half foot long greatsword that is about 1 inch thick towards the hilt and half an inch thick at the tip of the blade. Has a cybernetic implant that halos her head that taps into her adrenaline allowing her to enter a frenzied state and ignore damage for a short period. Wears black shorts with one legging and a white dress shirt with a small black tie.

@Blackmist16

Alright how's it look now?

[PPQ Purple]

I won't be able to contribute much until the big day is done. As in until the weekend. But ideas are brewing. Right now I am thinking a girl with super speed, blond, good looking, science oriented, uses and mixes her own explosives and possibly even builds gadgets and stuff for the rest of us or tweaks our weapons or something. Not sure about the last bit. Hence me posting in hopes of input. But definitively like the girl in love with bombs.

[AlternateMan]

*angry IED noises*
But do keep in mind that intense superspeed like The Flash or something won't be allowed.

[Dark Cloud]

@AlternateMan What did you mean by 'chip' found with her sword?

[AlternateMan]

The chip as in the brain implant
it was found with the sword together

[Dark Cloud]

@AlternateMan Oh, kay thanks for clearing that up.

[Dark Cloud]

@AlternateMan Also is there anything else I need to expunge about her background?

[AlternateMan]

I think that's pretty good, I'll wait for BC to return.

[Dark Cloud]

@AlternateMan Dos Vadania Comrade.

[PPQ Purple]

*angry IED noises*
But do keep in mind that intense superspeed like The Flash or something won't be allowed.

@AlternateMan

I am not sure how fast the flash is. But I know he can like bend space and time and crap and that's far from what I want.
I was basically thinking of a character that can dash from cover to cover avoiding a hail of bullets all cool style to get in close. And when she is close you expect such a character to draw a sword or SMG or something and just rip the enemy appart. But nope. Magnetic mine. Stick one of those suckers on the poor bots and jump away as they pop. Also like if we ever get to fight a giant robot she'd like wallrun up the thing leaving mines as she goes. :)

[AlternateMan]

@Blackmist16 Yumi is good to go.

@PPQ Purple Ah hah. I get it. Nice concept.

[Psi Force]

Psi Force is present!

[AlternateMan]

Ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[Dark Cloud]

Could someone do me a favor and post my CS in the CS tab as a place holder, I'm going to be a little busy today.