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Hi, everyone. I'm new to this forum, but I'm not new to roleplaying. I've already hosted several RPs on Kongregate Forum Games Forum that could be considered "advanced" (I migrated here because I thought Kongregate FGF didn't have enough dedicated roleplayers), so I have a fair amount of experience in writing, worldbuilding, and roleplaying. This will be the first game that I host here, and I'll try to do it the same way I hosted games on Kongregate FGF and see if that works out. I apologize in advance if I inadvertently get anything wrong.

If I understand correctly, before making any game, I'm supposed to make an interest check thread in this section of the forum to see if people like the idea. So I'm going to put some information regarding the setting, gameplay, and character creation below. This information is going to be available in the game thread's OOC tab if enough people are interested to get the game going.

This game was hosted once in Kongregate FGF three years ago, by my friend @BCTheEntity, though it failed due to inactivity and BC’s lack of hosting experience back then. However, the idea was mine to begin with; I let BC host it because I was already hosting another game at the time. You can ask BC for confirmation if you want. Of course, this game won’t be exactly the same as the version BC hosted, since I’m changing many things to fix some of the problems that I believe BC’s version had that caused the game to fail.



Introduction


In a corner of the universe, far away from most other forms of intelligent life, was a blue planet that its inhabitants called Earth. In the wake of battles between eldritch beings of unspeakable power long since gone, billions of years ago, the first lifeforms arose from the turbulent magical energies raging across planet's surface. From magic they were born, and so they could command such energies of the world, through naught but the raw instincts of their nascent minds. Over the eons the planet's environments stabilized, and its inhabitants grew ever more complex, until there emerged the first species possessing true sapience - humanity.

Humans' intelligence came at the cost of raw physical power, compared to the ferocious predators roaming the wilderness. To ensure the survival of their species, the strongest of human mages tore rifts into the Sea of Chaos, a universe parallel to their own and the source of all magical energies, and created a vast structure that would eventually come to be called the Dweomerheart. The structure became the cornerstone of human societies of yore, for it channeled the Sea of Chaos's energies and systematically distributed them among human settlements, saturating the environment, such that virtually every human was born with or developed powers of magic. With such powers, the humans became the planet's dominant species, constructing expansive cities and spreading to every nook and cranny of Earth. But also with such powers, the humans often waged war among one another, for individuality inevitably led to conflict.

All changed when there came a powerful sorcerer-king who sought to unify the world. Whether he was sick of humans' constant warfare and suffering, or simply driven by pride and greed, no one knew. But everyone knew that he was mad, mad enough to use a forbidden ritual to become one with the Dweomerheart itself. With the incalculable powers he gained from the nexus of magic, the sorcerer-king brutally crushed any who stood in his way, and enslaved the planet to rule it with an adamantine fist, bringing with him unprecedented peace but oppression for centuries. Unwilling to live under the sorcerer-king's reign of terror, groups eventually rose to challenge him, many of them united against their common enemy. After nigh-unimaginable amounts of bloodshed and death, the sorcerer-king was slain, in a battle that devastated the entire planet. In the battle died all magic users of notable power, and with the sorcerer-king died the Dweomerheart. Humanity survived the cataclysm, but magic was lost.

Humans slowly began to rebuild their societies from the smouldering ruins. Without magic, they came to rely on technology, creating tools that could be used by anyone of sufficient skill. Over the next centuries, magic was forgotten altogether as technology developed, until the world resembled modern Earth in our real life.

But humans did not remember their lesson from the sorcerer-king. They once again waged war with one another. Weapons capable of ending all life were unleashed, reducing the planet to a wasteland a second time. Technologies, however, were not lost this time. The most elite of humanity poured all of their remaining resources to construct massive spaceships and leave Earth, while the other survivors were left to die.

And that was the branching point of the sides of Tech and Magi. Through some miracle of improbable chance, the ancient power of magic stirred to life again just as all hope seemed to be lost for those who remained on Earth, allowing them to rebuild a second time. The humans that escaped the planet ruthlessly perfected their technologies, aided by alien substances they found during their interstellar travels, developing cybernetics, mutations, and psionics that could rival true magic. The two sides would have forever gone their separate ways, until two centuries after the initial split, out of nostalgia the Tech side decided to reclaim the planet that they abandoned so long ago and thought to be barren still.

Suffice to say, neither of the two sides expected, or were pleased by, the other side's existence. And neither were willing to relinquish the planet that they felt was rightfully theirs.

That is the current state of the world. Though not at outright war yet, the sides of Tech and Magi have reached an impasse with their negotiations, several months after their initial meeting. A multitude of factions exist within each side, all of them having conflicting motives and goals. Skirmishes between various groups are fought almost daily. The world is in a state of cold war, and the future is more uncertain than ever before.

You live in this uncertain world. But you have the potential to shape the future, for you are powerful, more powerful than many of those around you. But with this power, what future will you bring?



Game Overview


This game is intended to be a mostly freeform RP, where the plot is determined by the players’ collaborative effort. As the GM, I will play the game using my own characters, but I will not be directly responsible for the main storyline. Both the Tech and Magi sides have multiple smaller factions within them, as previously mentioned, and it will be up to the players to create these factions and construct a plot from their interactions and conflicts. For this reason, each player is allowed to create as many characters and factions as he wants, within reason, though each still must be approved by me. Since this is a serious, “advanced” RP, please don’t create more characters or factions than you can handle.

The special features of the Magi and Tech sides are listed below.



For all characters, Magi and Tech, a character’s raw power level is independent of the versatility of his abilities. Raw power is slowly increased through training and experience, while versatility depends on the character’s skill. There exists training that can increase both raw power and skill, but that doesn’t mean the two are directly correlated.

To prevent any ability from being overpowered, all abilities are subject to limitations described in section 2.2 of the document describing magic.

No character can start with both Magi and Tech abilities. Theoretically, there’s nothing preventing a character from having abilities from both sides, but the two sides simply haven’t been in contact with each other for long enough for anyone to have gained any meaningful abilities from the other side. During the game, a character may obtain abilities from the other side; it’s just that no character can start with abilities from both sides.



Signup Sheets


In this game, each player can create an unlimited number of characters and factions. The character and faction signup sheets will be included below.





So that's my game idea. What do you guys think? I hope it's not too long of a read, given the standards of advanced RPs here.
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Interest piqued. You've got quite the comprehensive document linked up there - give me a bit to peruse it, and we'll see if I can't toss out a character sheet or two.
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I'll bite. Give me some time, though; I'll probably have to make a character ground-up for this, which means I have to concept it out, and do designs, and such.

I'll probably hurry if this gets a lot of traffic, though.
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Well, I already PMed you, so I'm obviously interested. I hope a few more people join - especially excited if another lesbian character enters the frey. ^.-

Edit: Added the first character ... I don't care if it's an interest check, gosh darn it!~
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Ana Hunt

The Stormwind


Side: Tech

Sex: Female (Before mutation; Male)

Age: 27

Race: Mutant (Cat Human) / Psion

Personality: Ana is a tad more playful than other fighters or warriors, however she can easily be serious when the situation calls for it. She is a kind and friendly, but rather cautious about people getting closer to her - or rather cautious as to believe they really do care, though she will give anyone willing to try, a chance. She can be picky about her loyalty, but once given, it must be broken with a heinous act of harm or betrayal of some kind. Otherwise, as social as she is, she is still an introvert so it can take some time to get to know her.

Though she often keeps the fact to herself, she had been a transwoman before the mutation had happened. Now that her body matches her inner image, she is quite satisfied with life, though sometimes she can have minor hiccups because she wasn't raised as a female. Beyond this, she is still attracted to other females however it's more based on an emotional level, making her demisexual and homosexual at the same time.

Faction: Military - Employee, but not a direct member of the service.

Biography: Ana grew up in a male body and sadly had to deal with pretending to be a man, though many of her classmates thought of her as a "homosexual man." To top this, her father died early from a car wreck, leaving only herself and her mother. It wasn't until later and through many heart breaks, loneliness, and confusion that she discovered and finally accepted who she really was. It was at this point that she saved the money to undergo a xenogen injection by teaching martial arts (most of her clients being military) - after all it was common knowledge that mutations and abilities were formed around personality and experiences, so it seemed the easiest way to have a female body. Even if it didn't work, she figured getting surgery was easy enough.

Well, to her glee, it worked. In fact it worked far better than she could've ever imagined. Not only did the mutation cause her body to switch over to the proper sex, but gave her cat-like traits which she adored like no one could understand. Though unexpectedly, her abilities took on a mix between her outward appearance and her skills in martial arts and made her exceedingly more powerful in hand-to-hand combat. This combination of mutation and psionic energy was surprising since she had never knows her parents to be psions. Since her closeness with the military, she was offered a job on the spot to help as a training instructor after seeing first hand her new abilities. Since the age of 22, she has worked most of her time growing her abilities and using her knowledge in combat to design new techniques and even teaches some members of the mutant division of the military.

However her life after the injection hasn't all been rainbows and butterflies. She still finds it hard to find love, but she tries her best to be positive and spends her time trying not to think about how lonely she really is. Her mother also passed a few years ago due to a new aggressive type of cancer, leaving her with no family.

Skills: First and foremost, she is an extremely talented and skilled hand-to-hand combatant. Many would argue her skill is on a high expert or master level of expertise. Most of her other skills come from natural innate ability rather than training - unlike her martial skill. These include being very organized, quick learning, able to understand complex ideas, and puzzle-solving.

Abilities
Cat Traits: Beyond the obvious cat eyes and tail she's developed through the mutation, her sense of smell, hearing, and sight has improved as least three-fold.
High Strength: Her mutation has given her the ability to display a noticeable amount of high strength, despite her frame. It's not beyond her ability to punch through solid stone unscratched.
Very High Grace: Both in terms of smooth movements and raw agility, her new mutations have given her leaps and bounds in this area as one might expect from a cat-like mutation. She can easily allure on-lookers with movements that are almost akin to dancing in battle and her agility allows her to avoid and slip through attacks that might otherwise singe others - like a fireball.
Extreme Reflexes: Her ability to react and read her opponents is likely what she is most known for. It is a rarity for someone to land a solid blow on her, so much that even scratching her is a victory is some men's eyes. Though not impossible to bypass, she can usually land twenty blows to her opponent's single blow.
Psionic Field: Psionite has had an interesting effect on her mutated form. Though her psionics are limited in scope, they seem to have grown increasingly more powerful in a much shorter time than most others. This is one of two forms, in which she can erect an almost skin-tight force field that is very powerful but very limited in how long it can be maintained. Normally it can only be used for a single battle and takes roughly two days to restore the specific energy/mana used for this technique.
Speed Burst: Her second form of psionics though unlike her first, this can be used for causal traveling as well as battle situations. This ability differs from those with traditional super speed in three ways: it is at least four times as fast as any recorded 'speedster' however due to it's speed, one has to exit this state before attacking and finally it tends to drain energy/mana at an extremely high speed so it can only be used in bursts - however the unique mana it does use, tends to regenerate almost as fast as it's used.

Possessions
• A heart necklace with the name 'Ana' on it. It was given to her by her mother before she passed away from a new form of cancer.
• Lightly coated cybernetic martial outfit, simply adapted to withstand the speeds and force of her abilities.

Other / Fun Facts
• She always had a cat-like personality, so loves to curls into the laps of loved ones.
• Her cat mutation stopped her from having ovaries, so she doesn't have periods or experience heat.
• She loves tuna, maybe a bit more than she should.
• Ana actually has the ability to purr.
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Definitely interested in this. But then you already knew that, JS, so this is basically just a bump post. Pay attention to this guy's games, folks, they're good things; certainly, I'll be creating both a faction and a character for this when the game thread proper comes round, so if anybody is interested in joining somebody else's faction, do PM me.
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This seems like it could be fun! I kinda feel bits and pieces of a character starting to come together already. If there's enough interest, I'll submit a character sheet! My character is most likely going to be on the magic side of things (unless I decide to go in a different direction) so I'll be looking to join a fraction of that nature. Also, I'm pretty sure he'll be homosexual also, so Lydyn won't be the only one ;)
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I will probably keep an eye on this, and possibly join in the future but right now I'm busy worldbuilding of my own to give my players more to draw on.

Though its a really nice looking concept, I'll be snooping around now and then :P
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This seems like it could be fun! I kinda feel bits and pieces of a character starting to come together already. If there's enough interest, I'll submit a character sheet! My character is most likely going to be on the magic side of things (unless I decide to go in a different direction) so I'll be looking to join a fraction of that nature. Also, I'm pretty sure he'll be homosexual also, so Lydyn won't be the only one ;)


Oh no, don't say he!~ Haha, that is very cool though, to see a male homosexual. Then again we are allowed multiple characters so if Ana doesn't hit it off with any player characters, I can always just make an NPC and play out my romance there. ^.^ So glad this is getting more interest!~
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Oh no, don't say he!~ Haha, that is very cool though, to see a male homosexual. Then again we are allowed multiple characters so if Ana doesn't hit it off with any player characters, I can always just make an NPC and play out my romance there. ^.^ So glad this is getting more interest!~


Haha, sorry! ^_~ But yea, I think it'll be fun and although our characters won't be romantically interested in each other, it'd be fun to RP together, even though they're probably on opposing sides! O_O
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As a bystander can I just comment your characters sexual orientation shouldn't be their defining plot. It's what I got from what I read and I'm not the GM so hey, what do I know. But Straight Chars don't revolve around solely being straight and that isn't their defining trait so it should work both ways.

I mean he may do things differently but from roleplays, especially with the likes with this scope shouldn't hinge upon romance too heavily or they'll end up seeming corny.
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Well that's certainly your opinion, but we all play our characters as we see fit, don't we? ^.^ I am a hopeless romantic in real life, so that often translates to my personas, but I don't see why that is something to look down on. The only part of why I focus on the sexual orientation is because in my real experience with role-plays, it's hard to find others [as in characters who share the same orientation]. That just seems to be the culture from what I've learned.

Don't assume just because it's a bit sad that I can't have my characters do and be other things. Also I might add that I've mentioned her sexuality and wanting love only a total of two or three times in the entirety of her profile, so how you came to the conclusion that's all her identity is about confuses me - and yes, it is a bit offensive to me that without even knowing me or my role-play style that you decided to somewhat rudely judge my characters and my ability to role-play and even so in public.

Please, if you must judge or assume, do it in PMs, so it's easier to correct in a private setting. Thank you. ^.^
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Well that's certainly your opinion, but we all play our characters as we see fit, don't we? ^.^ I am a hopeless romantic in real life, so that often translates to my personas, but I don't see why that is something to look down on. The only part of why I focus on the sexual orientation is because in my real experience with role-plays, it's hard to find others [as in characters who share the same orientation]. That just seems to be the culture from what I've learned.

Don't assume just because it's a bit sad that I can't have my characters do and be other things. Also I might add that I've mentioned her sexuality and wanting love only a total of two or three times in the entirety of her profile, so how you came to the conclusion that's all her identity is about confuses me - and yes, it is a bit offensive to me that without even knowing me or my role-play style that you decided to somewhat rudely judge my characters and my ability to role-play and even so in public.

Please, if you must judge or assume, do it in PMs, so it's easier to correct in a private setting. Thank you. ^.^


It's what I got from what I read
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I said things from what I saw, I didn't read everything. I call things as I see them, I wasn't judging you personally. I call things as I see them, if you want to take offense that isn't my fault I don't dish out anything offensive or rude, and I didn't say your characters defining plot WAS their sexuality and wish for relationships. I gave a recommendation.
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Then ... read my whole profile next time? Jumping to conclusions isn't very healthy or appreciated (in my case anyways). You're making assumptions based on only part of the truth / profile. You may have not intended rudeness, but you can't say you're not being rude when I thought you were being rude ... (O.o) The receiver is whom decides if you're being rude to them or not. We're all from different cultures, backgrounds, beliefs, and upbringings. If you go to South Korea and pat someone's head, it's considered rude - sure, you didn't mean anything by it and you didn't think you were being rude, but ... you were, to them.

In either case, I'm glad you didn't intend to be rude and I am thankful for you having good intentions on trying to assist us as role-players. So no hard feelings!~ \(^.^)/

Edit: Also going to bed, so I hope this moves along by the time I'm awake again!~ :D
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As a bystander can I just comment your characters sexual orientation shouldn't be their defining plot. It's what I got from what I read and I'm not the GM so hey, what do I know. But Straight Chars don't revolve around solely being straight and that isn't their defining trait so it should work both ways.


I disagree with this. Heterosexuality is seen as the norm, and there exist a number of people who are prejudiced against homosexuality. Depending on the amount of education received, a homosexual character may grow up confused and conflicted about his or her gender identity and sexual orientation, not to mention potentially having to deal with homophobia. I think it's entirely feasible to have a character's central conflict revolve around his or her sexuality, if said sexuality is something different from the norm.

I mean he may do things differently but from roleplays, especially with the likes with this scope shouldn't hinge upon romance too heavily or they'll end up seeming corny.


I also disagree with this. Whether a romance is corny or not depends on how well it's written, not the fact that it's a romance in a Cold War-esque setting. I'm a hopeless romantic too, and I plan to write a romance between a Magi character and a Tech character. If you personally find it corny regardless of how well-written it is, I can hardly do anything about that. But I certainly don't mind a character focused on romance, and no one else has complained so far either.

Also, according to the forum rules, if you're not participating in a forum game, you're advised to refrain from posting just to give critique.

If you are not a participant in an RP or an interest check, but are merely there to critique the thread, you should probably not be posting. Trolling threads is one of those things that the mods come down heavily and we are interpreting that liberally because actions that discourage people from posting interest checks run contrary to the entire point of the Guild – it should be a safe place for all roleplayers.


I know I'm new here, and you have thousands of posts, but that isn't going to stop me from pointing to the rules when I think it's necessary. If you're going to give advice, I think you should at least get yourself properly involved in the game first.
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I very much want to get involved with this, but I'm torn because the faction I want to introduce strides the line between magic and technology. I understand that you're set against "mixed" factions, but could we possibly work out an arrangement for this?
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I'm actively working on a character sheet - hoping I'll have it done tonight.
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I very much want to get involved with this, but I'm torn because the faction I want to introduce strides the line between magic and technology. I understand that you're set against "mixed" factions, but could we possibly work out an arrangement for this?


PM me your idea, and we'll see what we can do.



I'm new to the forum, so I'm not entirely sure how to do things here. Not including me, we have five people who already want to join (@clericbeast, @Shotgun Bear, @lydyn, @Warm Regret, and @Dead Cruiser), one person who may join later (@Sep), and three people who followed me here from Kongregate FGF and will probably join (@BCTheEntity, @Behemoth542, and @gammaflux). This means we have enough people to get the game going already, right? Do you guys think I should make the actual game thread today?
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@JohnSolaris You could make the game thread today, yes. At worst, the IC portion of the game is delayed for however long whilst character creation goes through and new players come along, so there's not much to be lost at any rate.
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@JohnSolaris

I agree with @BCTheEntity. If anything, it may help promote the game, since more people frequent the actual role play section than they do the interest checks.
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