[OOC] Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

[Sep]

@TheMoatedGrange someone after my own heart.

[Heat]

@TheMoatedGrange@Sep You two can run a good ole' fashion asexual, celibate Jedi prisoner duo. :p

[TheMoatedGrange]

@Heat Bibliosexual, more like. Mmm... sexy books.

[Sep]

@Heat Bibliosexual, more like. Mmm... sexy books.

@TheMoatedGrange

Well. This is awkward. Poor, poor Egren. Guess Sish can have him now.

[Fallenreaper]

@TheMoatedGrange Hello! Welcome to Aftermath, nice to see you express interest. I have to say, though I'm still looking over your CS, the PC is rather nicely done and thought out of from what I've read so far. I'm enjoying the read so far though I need to wait until @Ellri and @Sundered Echo get on so we can properly evaluate it. However, from my point of view she's looking good so far. It's nice to see someone filling a much needed role for prisoners as well, something that makes me very, very excited to see her influence.

Also enjoyed this part (as I'm sure @Sep will too):

- Avoid romance at all costs!

You and Sep will get along just fine.

@TheMoatedGrange someone after my own heart.

@Sep

:0 Someone earned Sep's heart, OMG! Someone mark this day, quick!

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Well. This is awkward. Poor, poor Egren. Guess Sish can have him now.

@Sep

Well... you did say you liked your SW books, at least it's something you have in common! :p

[TheMoatedGrange]

Thanks for all your positive comments so far guys. I was wondering if any of you had any idea or suggestion about how/if my character could have a previous relationship of any sort with your own? Positive or negative. Mostly other Jedi, for obvious reasons! @Fallenreaper@Sep@Heat

[Heat]

@TheMoatedGrange I'll read the bio in full when I get home. If she fought in the war then there's a chance she has met Denso (my Jedi).

[Fallenreaper]

@TheMoatedGrangeIt's possible she met Xid, briefly, and Navi a bit more often as the little bot liked to download data to increase his knowledge as well as download information about Xid's machinist work on other planets.

[TheMoatedGrange]

@Heat She was involved in a lot of research work, which certainly could have involved moving around to important locations around the Galaxy where she hoped important information could be found.

@Fallenreaper Any knowledge-hungry robot could definitely have been a friend!

[Heat]

@TheMoatedGrange Yeah it seems very likely they could have met at some point in the past.

[Fallenreaper]

Someone's a bit jealous. ^0^ Also, our favorite maul machine, Sish, should be back to giving our Jedi prisoners their much needed attention when he finally gets his new arm. ~Wheee.

[Ellri]

Indeed. Come "dawn", Sish will once more have two arms.

[Sohtem]

Apologies in the delay of posting my CS, been really busy with work and only had time over the past few days to add to it piece by piece.

Stergoe Vorark

Name: Stergoe Vorark
Species: Zabrak
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Faction: Sith Empire
Rank: Apprentice

Appearance:

Notable Characteristics of Species:

His species is most recognizable by the facial tattoos as well as the horns that all Zabraks have, in addition he also has two hearts and high pain tolerance, making it easy for him to push through most attacks before succumbing to his injuries.

Flaws:

Over-analytical: Analyzes situations to the point whise he becomes distracted rathis than focused on the task at hand.

Envious: Stergoe is always wanting the advantages that othis have, even when he obtains them, he always looks onward to the next target.

Selfish: When it comes to himself, he is his top priority, if a situation calls for to abandon or kill someone so that he may survive, he gladly do so without a second thought.

Manipulative: Always trying to get people to do what he wants or to have them fall into his favor.

Skills:

Form VII/Vaapad: Whilst he's not perfect with this form, he has fairly competent skill at it and is one of his favorite lightsaber forms to use against any opponent that he faces, feeling a raw offense can't be beaten.

Form I/Shii-Cho: Adept with this basic form, it being a fall back if his Vaapad form doesn't do the job, though he tries to use this form as little as possible.

Agile: Very quick on his feet and well-coordinated as well, able to get back on his feet quickly.

High pain tolerance: He like many of his kind, have a high tolerance to pain and it will ta

Force capabilities:

Telekinesis Throw: Stergoe has mastered the basics of the force, including telekinesis and is also capable of using the force to throw objects at a target.

Force sight: Limited with this ability, Stergoe can use it to see through usually just one wall, though not for an extended period of time.

Force lightning: Stergoe is just learning how to use this ability and doesn't have it mastered yet, as a result the duration of this ability is constantly varying, sometimes being a good length, other times it will stop fairly shortly.

Force empathy: Stergoe uses this ability to better understand who he's trying to manipulate and share feelings of the same nature though they aren't what he's actually feeling.

Biography:

Stergoe was born on Iridonia, he had a fairly decent home, it wasn't extravagant, but it wasn't poverty, like many young ones in the galaxy, he had been detected by the Jedi and someone had been sent to his parents to get their permission to train him as a Jedi. They were ecstatic and proud that their child was selected and agreed.

It wasn't long before he began to understand the force, taught how to use it to manipulate objects as well as being taught Jedi history. However as time went on and the more he progressed through his training, the more difficult he became among the Jedi, feeling that he was a great Jedi already, he would constantly disobey his master that he was learning under. Doing such things as entering locations before intelligence was gathered, drawing his weapon when there was no need, disregarding the safety of civilians and so on. The council had considered expelling him from the order, but he was given one more chance to see if he could develop into what most Jedi should be.

He however didn't seem to be improving, his arrogance and disobedience was still an issue, but the thing that finally made the council expel him was when he had been sparring with another student, his over-confidence getting the best of him resulted in him losing the match. Anger having set in over how his peers were giving his opponent praise and what he thought was taunting coming from him, he had ignited his lightsaber and thrusted it through the other padawan's back and out his chest without even thinking, instantly killing him.

With that final act, he was expelled, never to be a Jedi which only angered him more, so much so that he had tried attacking the council, though they being masters, easily defeated him and then removed him from their chambers. He spent many years roaming Coruscant, trying to find a way to get back into the Jedi Order, his anger and hatred at the council only growing stronger as his exile continued, finding it unfair that he was expelled, feeling that he was one of the only ones that would be a truly great Jedi and the rest were just a waste.

One day though, a Sith gathering some intelligence for the empire sensed him, not only the force flowing through him, but his strong anger and hate, so he started to speak to him, learned of his story and then offered to have him further his training, though without the restrictions the Jedi had. Seeing as this was a way for him to continue to before a force user, he eagerly accepted and continued his learning, only this time to become a Sith, rather than a Jedi.

On Korriban, he quickly excelled through his training, using his hate for the Jedi to give him the advantage in combat that he needed, many of the instructors being impressed with him. His training soon concluded where he had been given a master who promoted him to the rank of apprentice, now all he looks forward too is being able to slaughter any Jedi when he can.

Personality and/or Motivation:

Stergoe seeks to be the most powerful Sith in the galaxy, his ambition being to take the Empire for himself as well as destroy the Jedi Council that expelled him from their order, he's arrogant though he doesn't let that get in the way too much and he always is trying to get favor and progress himself further though the Sith ranks, he knows he's destined to be great and be remembered in history as the most powerful Sith there ever was and he won't let anyone or anything get in his way of accomplishing that.

Player’s long term goals:

Mostly have fun with this RP and make it last long as possible, but I also want to potentially return my character to the light, haven't played many Sith and even fewer that didn't stay that way, it's an interesting concept I've always thought about but never really did and this seems like the perfect story for me to do such with my character and I can't wait to see what events will unfold with him.

Relations:

Final Point - Secrets:

N/A

[Fallenreaper]

@Sohtem One thing I can point out right away is the Lightsaber forms. Vapaad hasn't been made or developed during this Era, which is the Old Republic one and I believe Djem So might be the form best suited for strength if that's what you're looking for.

In addition, there's a lot more to the Zabrak then you've actually listed in the racial trait. From increased strength (about rivaling a horse's type) to increased bone matter giving them more weight, density and less flexibility compared to humans. Their hearts also produces oxygen at higher rates which helps their stamina, increases their metabolism, etc. They also have feline like eyes as well as heighten sense of smell too. I suggest you look at the other accepted and approved Zabrak for guidelines or could ask me to help you, since I did make and balance the race's fanon for the rp itself. I actually have several google docs since your PC comes from the same place as Jayda and Vebra.

Though I'm actually pleased to see more Zabraks. ^-^

[Sohtem]

@Fallenreaper I'll get to fixing it, like I said, this is over the past few days, so some stuff I forgot I added or didn't add, thanks for the feedback though. :)

[Fallenreaper]

@TheMoatedGrange@Deamonbane@Sohtem & @Mifuyne: Sound off please so I know who's still here and patiently waiting, revising their CS, or creating one. I'm hoping shortly after @Ellri gets on, we'll be able to look over the current CSes to give approval, request edits and also help you guys where needed to get these CS Aftermath approved. The process has been a bit slow going since weather has been harassing me the last few days around the time Ellri gets on... which means I can't get on the IRC and when I do, I can't keep in there very long. So anyone needs me, you'll have to contact me through a pm on the site and wait patiently while I kick the crap out of my signal. XD

[Sohtem]

@Fallenreaper I'm still here, obviously. :P Still checking though.

[TheMoatedGrange]

@Fallenreaper I'm also still here. I'm logging into the IRC as much as possible too. Currently working my way through reading everyone's sheets to see who would fit into the 'relationships' with my character.

[Fallenreaper]

@Fallenreaper I'm still here, obviously. :P Still checking though.

@Sohtem

Check.

@Fallenreaper I'm also still here. I'm logging into the IRC as much as possible too. Currently working my way through reading everyone's sheets to see who would fit into the 'relationships' with my character.

@TheMoatedGrange

Check.

If you can't seem to find anyone online in the IRC, then OoC is your best bet because at least Ellri and I always check it for shenanigans and chatter.

In the IRC you'll see a few names lurk there, but there might be empty seats behind the keyboard and the people sleeping. Especially Ellri because he leaves his computer logged in so he has logs of what's currently happening in his absence and these have been useful more times than I can count. So if no one replies, despite someone being in the chatroom, don't assume they are ignoring you. It just means they forgot to log out or timed out likely.

*smacks starting rain again and sighs*

[Deamonbane]

Finished with mine, @Fallenreaper