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What I've thought of so far, so there's two daughters, an elder, and a younger. The Elder will be my main, and she's going to be on the verge of womanhood, a good ol' coming of age story for her then. The younger will probably be from 8-10. Obviously, this isn't very typical, so the officer is probably a higher up, with noble blood and influence, and he's been playing the game for a while, so this sorta' thing can happen.

Her thing is ever since her sister was born, she's been with her father, at different battlefields and war-crap. That's because, dundundun, her mother died at her sisters birth, cliche, but it gets interesting. Older-girl and Father both have brown hair, mother had brown hair, all very uniform, and mundane. However, younger sister has red hair, blue eyes, a spot of color. There's rumors, given that she was born while the father was away, being an officer, that the Mother was untrue and she isn't truly his daughter. The Officer-man denies it, at least publically, and cares for the younger daughter just as he does the others, but there's still rumors. He knows the redhead isn't his, it's just not possible, he was away, and could not have impregnated his wife. But he sees her sin being paid for when she dies in childbirth, and saves his own reputation and the reputation of this little girl, by acknowledging her as his.

This makes him very untrusting of people outside the army, and so after his wife dies, he keeps his daughters, true and adopted, with him.

The elder daughter, though, is freaking tired of war, she wants to go to Court, like other noble ladies and get away from all the freakin' smelly ass soldier men.

Officer man is totally against that.

So the girls don't really have a role, they're sorta' along for the ride, kept protected because their father's an high-up officer, and they probably know a lot of the other officers/soldiers that have been around for a while. Kinda' like mascots XD, especially the little one.
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I can see that being a good combo of characters. Feel free to whip something up and, I'll reserve judgement until you do however - there's no saying how it turns out.
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Would you like three, or one character sheet?
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Sorry about the delay in posting, I'll have something up today or tomorrow at the latest.
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Too late, it's the gallows for you.
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Sorry for disappearing for a bit. Had some stuff to do and had lost sight of the RP. Weird but true. Anyway, I'm getting a post out tonight.

EDIT: Seen the new character and might I say that her picture is intriguing. It brought depressing but rather colorful images to my head.
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Depressing but intriguing is my middle name...

No I'm serious, my parents freaking suck at names.
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intending to try and get up a camp follower charactor in the next day or so
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Posted, sorry about the relative brevity.
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It's alright. I mentioned this was a high-cas low-advanced type of thing anyway so don't feel bad if you have 3+ paragraphs. Anything below that and you should start questioning, but eh.
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Testing something out!






Woohooo, it worked.
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Well, I know who Warren's going to take a new found interest in.
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So...I edited the color of the eyes on Alycia's avatar.



And the saturation. I am content.
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@the crafty pig

I think I'll need some form of explanation why a random, no-history lowborn cook can write and read, something usually reserved to the nobles and the religious folks. How does he know all 3 perfectly well when most Monarchists couldn't tell you right or wrong in their religion?
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I think I'll need some form of explanation why a random, no-history lowborn cook can write and read, something usually reserved to the nobles and the religious folks. How does he know all 3 perfectly well when most Monarchists couldn't tell you right or wrong in their religion?


both valid questions and deserving valid answers

as said in the cs
book keeper: Can read and write enough to allow him to keep books.

At the end of the day I was assuming a camp commander would expect some records of what's going on under his watch as such Callus would need some ability to do this.
This is literally enough to sign invoices and to scratch numbers in a ledger and trace names of products from box to the ledger. Literally the box says onions he traces onions, if those onions are actually turnips he would only know this from 15 years experience rather than being able to decipher the squiggles.

I also assumed with the letters from the daughters that there was some form of messaging service that allowed peasants to communicate over great distance. If not I will remove it happily.

On the religious point know all 3 perfectly well was probably poorly phrased. Doesn't mean he can entertain a theological debate upon the intricacies of the religion but what a peasant would know. The basic creeds and codes that make up their daily lives. More he can recognize a monarchist and say the right words to imply he too is a monarchist in order to build if necessary some form of rapport under the small amount of scrutiny a peasant would require.

I hope that clarifies, any further questions or want it changed let me know.
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@the crafty pig Well in Broacien you're expected to be 100% Monarchist, or else face shunning from society. We've not reached the time period yet where people start feeling enlightened and feel like they know more about god than the church. As such the church's power is still very large (as evidence from prince-priests) and church's word is law, even to a king. Luckily for the king he is Monarch on Earth, so he doesn't have to give too much of a shit.

That said I do have some other question; how do you see him fitting into the plots? I mean, I like the idea of having camp followers but I find it hard to implement them into plots. After all I can hardly say 'oh yeah we have a random cook also standing guard today' so I need to know how I can implement him, if at all?
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I'd be lying if I said this RP didn't interest me a great deal. RPs that involve worldbuilding always do. Anyone mind if another Northern character was tossed into the fray?
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I feel pretty damn sure Dorran is going to be killed. Or someone will try to do it.

I still need to read some of the other recent posts before I make my own post, probably Saturday or Sunday.
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Dorran's my favorite.
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