When it comes to Fate RPs trying to pick a the actual servant is the most difficult portion. Trying to portray a historical figure accurately won't be easy. Also due to Fate/Grand Order are those servants mostly prohibited already? Just a question since there are so many I might end up accidentally using one of them anyway.
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Well, I chose something simpler but reasonably ridiculous by going for Alice Kyteler. Why not look at some old European folklore or Hawaiian mythos? Things people don't generally see.
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Well, I chose something simpler but reasonably ridiculous by going for Alice Kyteler. Why not look at some old European folklore or Hawaiian mythos? Things people don't generally see.
Finding a historical figure isn't really difficult. Actually roleplaying them in any accurate way is the problem. I was thinking of doing Hannibal anyway.
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For those who don't know what servant to pick ,and don't mind spoilers, this link is quite helpfull:
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As for me.. was thinking about going for Vlad the Impaler, not sure yet.
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As for me.. was thinking about going for Vlad the Impaler, not sure yet.
Noble Phantasm: Gate of Babylon.
This might just be me, but I'm not seeing what Suiko did that earns her Gate of Babylon as a Phantasm. That's pretty specifically Gilgamesh's thing.
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This might just be me, but I'm not seeing what Suiko did that earns her Gate of Babylon as a Phantasm. That's pretty specifically Gilgamesh's thing.
Yeah Golden Rule makes sense, but Gate of Babylon is an ability very unique to the King of Heroes. Maybe use something a bit similar?
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Username: Ploxerdon
Class Name: Lancer
True Name: Achilles
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Master: He prefers a master who goes straight into battle with him, no trickery.
Abilities: Noble Phantasm: Achilles Heel
He is immune to damage and pain against all parts of his body, besides his Achilles Heel. This gives him close to immunity to all types of damage besides those who attack his heel directly.
He is skilled with his spear and shield in battle, able to use both as a weapon.
Appearance:
He also wears a shield in one of his hands, and the generic spartan helmet.
"He who wins the battle is the righteous one!"
Personality: He is young, proud, and likes to fight fair. He lives for the battle. He follows his emotions during decision making.
He is aware that he is mortal, so he tries to end his fight as soon as possible, going in for the kill when he can. He really tends to hate those who he fights, while he really cares for those who are his allies.
Short Biography: In Greek mythology, Achilles was the greatest hero of the Trojan War and the central character of Homer's epic poem Iliad. Although completely reliable evidence is absent, most scholars date the Trojan War to the 12th or 13th century before Christ, and Homer's epic to the 7th or 8th century B.C. Achilles is also mentioned in fragments of other ancient poems, but it is uncertain if he was a real guy or merely a symbolic depiction of heroic ideals. The story goes that Achilles was the son of the sea-nymph Thetis and the mortal Peleus, king of the Myrmidons in Thessaly. Achilles joined the Greek armies at Troy and became famous for his prowess on the battlefield. Homer's Iliad spotlights the uncommon wrath of Achilles, first toward the Greek king Agamemnon, then toward Hector of Troy. A later addition is the familiar tale of Achilles' heel: Thetis tried to make her young son immortal by dipping him in the river Styx, but where she held his heel remained dry and became the vulnerable spot where Achilles ultimately received his death-wound (at the hands of Hector's brother, Paris, who had help from the god Apollo).
Borrowed this from the internet, why write something that already exists?
Other:
Class Name: Lancer
True Name: Achilles
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Master: He prefers a master who goes straight into battle with him, no trickery.
Abilities: Noble Phantasm: Achilles Heel
He is immune to damage and pain against all parts of his body, besides his Achilles Heel. This gives him close to immunity to all types of damage besides those who attack his heel directly.
He is skilled with his spear and shield in battle, able to use both as a weapon.
Appearance:
He also wears a shield in one of his hands, and the generic spartan helmet.
"He who wins the battle is the righteous one!"
Personality: He is young, proud, and likes to fight fair. He lives for the battle. He follows his emotions during decision making.
He is aware that he is mortal, so he tries to end his fight as soon as possible, going in for the kill when he can. He really tends to hate those who he fights, while he really cares for those who are his allies.
Short Biography: In Greek mythology, Achilles was the greatest hero of the Trojan War and the central character of Homer's epic poem Iliad. Although completely reliable evidence is absent, most scholars date the Trojan War to the 12th or 13th century before Christ, and Homer's epic to the 7th or 8th century B.C. Achilles is also mentioned in fragments of other ancient poems, but it is uncertain if he was a real guy or merely a symbolic depiction of heroic ideals. The story goes that Achilles was the son of the sea-nymph Thetis and the mortal Peleus, king of the Myrmidons in Thessaly. Achilles joined the Greek armies at Troy and became famous for his prowess on the battlefield. Homer's Iliad spotlights the uncommon wrath of Achilles, first toward the Greek king Agamemnon, then toward Hector of Troy. A later addition is the familiar tale of Achilles' heel: Thetis tried to make her young son immortal by dipping him in the river Styx, but where she held his heel remained dry and became the vulnerable spot where Achilles ultimately received his death-wound (at the hands of Hector's brother, Paris, who had help from the god Apollo).
Borrowed this from the internet, why write something that already exists?
Other:
Username: Ploxerdon
Name: Kasumi Kurosawa
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Country of Origin: Japan
Servant: She would prefer Assassin. She would absolutely hate to get Caster as servant.
Abilities: Kasumi is very agile, and is a master of assassination. She can walk and run over any surfaces, including walls and water. When wielding any kind of blade, she is able to damage a mage's magical circuit by hitting them in the right spots (Kasumi has no trouble finding them). Kasumi is resistant to all kinds of magic. She can't really cast magic herself.
Appearance:
Personality: Kasumi is cold and only speaks to others besides a select few people she actually likes. She absolutely hates mages and others who cast magic, willing to even backstab mages who side with her. She likes to kill those she faces before they are able to notice her presence. She prefers to fight herself instead of letting her servant do the dirty work. She is very impatient.
Short Biography: Kasumi used to be a respectable member of the Kurosawa family, but this all ended one night when her entire family got exterminated by a bunch of mages. Kasumi wasn't able to do anything, and was forced to watch as those who were close to her get tortured and killed. At this day, she swore to get rid of all magic. Her goal is to obtain the Ivory Flory so that she can end all magic in the world.
Quirk: Kasumi is a master of assassination and battle with blades, as she usually wields two dagger herself. She is very agile, able to dodge attacks before they even come close. Kasumi is a master of deception, fooling foolish mages who side with her.
Other: "They who live by the wand shall die by my blade. "
Name: Kasumi Kurosawa
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Country of Origin: Japan
Servant: She would prefer Assassin. She would absolutely hate to get Caster as servant.
Abilities: Kasumi is very agile, and is a master of assassination. She can walk and run over any surfaces, including walls and water. When wielding any kind of blade, she is able to damage a mage's magical circuit by hitting them in the right spots (Kasumi has no trouble finding them). Kasumi is resistant to all kinds of magic. She can't really cast magic herself.
Appearance:
Personality: Kasumi is cold and only speaks to others besides a select few people she actually likes. She absolutely hates mages and others who cast magic, willing to even backstab mages who side with her. She likes to kill those she faces before they are able to notice her presence. She prefers to fight herself instead of letting her servant do the dirty work. She is very impatient.
Short Biography: Kasumi used to be a respectable member of the Kurosawa family, but this all ended one night when her entire family got exterminated by a bunch of mages. Kasumi wasn't able to do anything, and was forced to watch as those who were close to her get tortured and killed. At this day, she swore to get rid of all magic. Her goal is to obtain the Ivory Flory so that she can end all magic in the world.
Quirk: Kasumi is a master of assassination and battle with blades, as she usually wields two dagger herself. She is very agile, able to dodge attacks before they even come close. Kasumi is a master of deception, fooling foolish mages who side with her.
Other: "They who live by the wand shall die by my blade. "
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This might just be me, but I'm not seeing what Suiko did that earns her Gate of Babylon as a Phantasm. That's pretty specifically Gilgamesh's thing.
It technically is possible to have Gate of Babylon because Gilgamesh does reveal that he has many keys to open his dimensional vault except he threw all of them away. Someone could very well have found one of these keys, but even then it's stated that if you do find such a key you only get to access your own personal vault rather than Gilgamesh's.
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I just a quick reminder that this isn't a holy grail war. As far as I know there aren't limited spots. I'll get to reading and accepting sheets in a bit.
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For everyone:
ONE noble phantasm! ONE!
Be sure to check the rules!
Okay. *cracks knuckles*
First off, you're missing something from the rules. Please read them to see what it is. I think I see it but maybe put it somewhere else as well
Next, I would prefer you to have one Noble Phantasm. The knife is good, and you don't have to have it decline in effectiveness, but the curse is a problem as you could be virtually immortal, which presents a problem. Also it could be loosely interpreted and it'd just be a huge issue and hassle later on. ex. 'But my character was born by c-section' or 'but mine was born magically' and so on and they don't need evidence.
Then please explain your abilities, the names give us a vague idea of what they could be, but I'd like to know what they do.
History, you say that the legend was reinterpreted, but pretty much this was a real person so he shouldn't have been affected by that. How does what Willy Shakes did change him as a person?
You're also missing something from the rules. Read them again, please.
I don't see anything else wrong with it right now.
Okay, like I said with the other guy, only 1 noble phantasm. Either one is fine, but it can only be one.
I don't see anything else wrong with the sheet.
Yeah, they can. Once again, please only 1 noble phantasm. Gate of Babylon is used by Gilgamesh, and is used to summon a lot of swords. Just to give you an idea for how it's used in the show. I won't critique this because it's not yet done.
Just a question about his Noble Phantasm. Does he still get damage, ie: could it be possible for him to get an arm chopped off? Or is he immune to damage? You mention that he's immune to damage and pain, but can it still be inflicted?
Nice use of the internet. Maybe make it so that if he gets hit on his foot that he gets hurt instead of his heel, because I dunno about you but a heel is a hard target to hit, and they only hit it because of a god's assistance.
I'm iffy on the shield, but as long as it's just a plain shield it's fine. Keep in mind that a lance is a two handed weapon, and thus that shield might get to be a bit of hindrance.
To start:
She can't be a master if she can't summon something on her own. :| Like, this is a cool concept, but she can't be a master if she can't summon something.
What is this? Seriously I'm confused.
You could alter this by making her a magekiller, someone who uses some magic (not much) to kill mages and monsters. There was a character in the show whose whole job was killing mages and used very little magic to do so.
now I'm going to go stumble off and make my own sheets.
ONE noble phantasm! ONE!
Be sure to check the rules!
I'll get to the master later.Username: Flamelord
Class Name: Saber
True Name: Mac Bethad mac Findlaích (also known as Macbeth)
Age: 57
Gender: Male
Master: N/A
Abilities:
Class Skills
Magic Resistance
Riding
Personal Skills
Eye of the Mind (True)
Innocent Monster
Bravery
Noble Phantasms
Witches Prophecy - Curse of the Red King
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Description: A Noble Phantasm born from his twisted legend, Macbeth was given a prophecy by a trio of witches, which said that he would not be killed by any man born of woman. In his death and ascension to the throne of Heroes, this has manifested itself as a Noble Phantasm, a curse upon him that makes it so he cannot be killed in battle by any servant who has been born of man. This Noble Phantasm is always active, but does not apply if the target Macbeth is fighting is a woman, or Divinity
Bloody Dagger - The Treasonous Knife
Type: Anti-Unit
Description: The bloody dagger used by Macbeth to kill King Duncan while he slept, in the safety of his hosts castle. Manifesting that legend, this dagger serves a similar purpose. Macbeth says the name of the person he wishes to see dead and kisses the blade. For one night the blade will grant him Presence Concealment, but only applying against the named individual. Once the night is over, it will revert to normal. The blade can be used multiple times, but will grow less effective with each use
Appearance:
Personality: A tortured soul, Macbeth is a proud and vicious warrior, who does not shy from a fight or from violence. Yet because of the effect of Innocent Monster, he has been cast more in a tragic model, a soul tortured by what he did to get to his position. He has lost his sense of morality, and will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. Let's just say he isn't the funnest guy to be around.
Short Biography: While originally seen as a benevolent King who made Scotland better after replacing the useless King Duncan, Macbeth's legend was definitely reinterpreted by William Shakespeare. In this, Macbeth, the thane of Glamis, is given a prophecy by three witches, who promise he will be Thane of Cawdor, and then King of Scotland. The former is given to him, and at the prompting of his wife, he murders King Duncan and becomes King.
Thus begins a descent into madness and violence, as he acts to eliminate his enemies, and inspires a war, while possibly otherworldly forces take their toll. Eventually this culminated in an invasion by the English, who assisted in putting Malcolm, Duncan's son, back on the throne with the assistance of Macduff, Thane of Fife, who killed Macbeth for the death of his family.
Other:
Okay. *cracks knuckles*
First off, you're missing something from the rules. Please read them to see what it is. I think I see it but maybe put it somewhere else as well
Next, I would prefer you to have one Noble Phantasm. The knife is good, and you don't have to have it decline in effectiveness, but the curse is a problem as you could be virtually immortal, which presents a problem. Also it could be loosely interpreted and it'd just be a huge issue and hassle later on. ex. 'But my character was born by c-section' or 'but mine was born magically' and so on and they don't need evidence.
Then please explain your abilities, the names give us a vague idea of what they could be, but I'd like to know what they do.
History, you say that the legend was reinterpreted, but pretty much this was a real person so he shouldn't have been affected by that. How does what Willy Shakes did change him as a person?
Username: Rtron
Name: Corbet
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Country of Origin: France
Servant:TBD
Abilities: Corbet's magic lays in the crafting of weaker familiars, runes, and weapons (ranging from small birds and bears, to swords and bows) to support his Heroic Spirit.
Appearance:
He stands at Five foot six inches, with pale silver eyes.
Personality: Corbet is typically laid back and cheerful. He's rarely, if ever, in a bad mood. Ren places great value in craftsmanship and protecting creations. He dislikes combat, and confrontation in general, and avoids it as much as he can. He pays attention to details and is patient.
Short Biography:
Born in France, to a minor mage family whose specialty was constructs, Corbet learned magic in the 'traditional' way. He learned from his father, who had learned from his father, who had learned from his father, and so on so forth. His father taught him all he knows about smithing and, more importantly in Corbet's eyes, all the legends and heroes of France. Charlemagne, Joan of Arc, Count Berenger, Bluebeard, to name a few. History and myth often combined in his father's stories, but Corbet never minded. Stories and legends were what he was more interested in than actual history. He was interested in not only the Holy Grail but the Flower of Eden. What he could do with power like that. What he could create.
One could end all war with the power of the Flower or the Grail, create the perfect protectors and worksmen, have the human race live practically in the lap of luxury. But to do that, he had to become a stronger mage and summon a familiar. Someone to help him in his endeavors, to aid him. To that end, he had to go to the College in Japan. Going to the College, he fully planned on joining the expedition to recover the Flower, but was denied entry. Of course, in light of things perhaps it was better he didn't go to the expedition. He most likely would have been killed and betrayed in the name of power. These Mage folk don't seem like they cared about outsiders.
Quirk: Corbet is a master craftsman, be it through carving, magical creation, or blacksmithing.
Other: His suit has a bunch of mini-pockets that he has filled with various knickknacks he liked. String, bits of bolts, some runes.
You're also missing something from the rules. Read them again, please.
I don't see anything else wrong with it right now.
Username: Rtron
Class Name: Saber
True Name: Roland
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Master: TBD
Abilities:
-Super human strength, speed, and reflexes.
-Master Swordsman (With an indestructible Sword!)
-Holy Magic (Defensive like shields, Enchanting to increase ally's weapons strength, Offensive to demolish his enemies, cast through his sword)
-Noble Phantasm: The Twelve Peers of Charlemagne. Anti-Army. With a blast of his war horn, Roland summons his ten companions, the Paladins of Charlemagne. Each of them are potent Heroic Spirits, six of them being Saber, two are Lancers, one is a Caster,and two are Berserkers. They arrive and fight at Roland's side once more, smiting his enemies and the enemies of Charlemagne.
-Noble Phantasm: Holy Smite. Anti-Fortress. Durendal, the blade Roland wields, contains within its golden hilt one tooth of Saint Peter, the blood of Saint Basil, the hair of Saint Denis, and a piece of the raiment of the Blessed Virgin Mary. It is indestructible, and the sharpest blade in all of existence. In an attempt to destroy it he created La Brèche de Roland. He purposely recreates the act, unleashing a massive blast of holy energy to destroy everything in its path.
Appearance:
Roland stands at 8 feet tall with bright blue eyes.
Personality: Proud to the point of arrogance,Pious to the point of ruthlessness, and glory seeking to the point of stupidity, Roland is willing to do anything for his fame and his God. He's willing to fight far longer than anyone sensibly should to increase his own legend and the religion of his God. Heretics, Pagans, Heathens will be smote by his blade. He is follows the tenants of his religion but also believes that anything he does in the name of his God he will be forgiven for.
Short Biography: Born an Italian peasant, Roland traveled to his brother's throne and declared his birth and loyalty to Charlemagne. Accepted he quickly gathered a reputation as the bravest and most loyal of Charlemagne's Paladins (or Twelve Peers). He and all but one of the Paladins met their end in an attack by Muslim armies at Roncesvalles in the Pyrenees Mountains. Proud and confident in his ability, Roland refused to blow his Oliphant horn (to summon Charlemagne and his Reinforcements) until it was too late. The reinforcements arrived, only to find nearly all the Paladins slayed to a man.
Other:
For God and the Emperor!
Okay, like I said with the other guy, only 1 noble phantasm. Either one is fine, but it can only be one.
I don't see anything else wrong with the sheet.
Can a servant have healing/support abilities?
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Username: Suiko
Class Name: Caster
True Name: Empress Suiko
Country of Origin: Japan
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Master: Prefers to serve a Master who will negotiate.
Abilities: Mostly support/administrative/defensive abilities. Some ideas I had were:
Noble Phantasm: Gate of Babylon. Charisma. Divinity. Golden Rule.
But these can be changed.
Appearance:
Personality: Suiko negotiates well with foreigners. Sometimes she is quiet and prefers some alone time for reading tactics and enjoying walks on the garden terrace. Suiko has a few flaws, mainly that she sometimes feels inadequate. She wonders why so many people trust her to lead them when she feels that she cannot lead herself. However, she has a strategic and tactical mindset that allows for optimal placement of resources and goals to be reached. Sometimes she spends too much time in her head and doesn't say what she's thinking.
Short Biography: Suiko as served as an administrator in a kingdom a long time ago. She enacted rules and kept peace. During her rule, conferences with neighboring courts were opened and negotiations had. She also declined requests from powerful officials that sought to take territory away from the mainland.
Catchphrase: "The walls aren't high enough."
I can tone the abilities down if this is too powerful. Also I play league of legends on NA too! My name is Suikaz.
Yeah, they can. Once again, please only 1 noble phantasm. Gate of Babylon is used by Gilgamesh, and is used to summon a lot of swords. Just to give you an idea for how it's used in the show. I won't critique this because it's not yet done.
Username: Ploxerdon
Class Name: Lancer
True Name: Achilles
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Master: He prefers a master who goes straight into battle with him, no trickery.
Abilities: Noble Phantasm: Achilles Heel
He is immune to damage and pain against all parts of his body, besides his Achilles Heel. This gives him close to immunity to all types of damage besides those who attack his heel directly.
He is skilled with his spear and shield in battle, able to use both as a weapon.
Appearance:
He also wears a shield in one of his hands, and the generic spartan helmet.
"He who wins the battle is the righteous one!"
Personality: He is young, proud, and likes to fight fair. He lives for the battle. He follows his emotions during decision making.
He is aware that he is mortal, so he tries to end his fight as soon as possible, going in for the kill when he can. He really tends to hate those who he fights, while he really cares for those who are his allies.
Short Biography: In Greek mythology, Achilles was the greatest hero of the Trojan War and the central character of Homer's epic poem Iliad. Although completely reliable evidence is absent, most scholars date the Trojan War to the 12th or 13th century before Christ, and Homer's epic to the 7th or 8th century B.C. Achilles is also mentioned in fragments of other ancient poems, but it is uncertain if he was a real guy or merely a symbolic depiction of heroic ideals. The story goes that Achilles was the son of the sea-nymph Thetis and the mortal Peleus, king of the Myrmidons in Thessaly. Achilles joined the Greek armies at Troy and became famous for his prowess on the battlefield. Homer's Iliad spotlights the uncommon wrath of Achilles, first toward the Greek king Agamemnon, then toward Hector of Troy. A later addition is the familiar tale of Achilles' heel: Thetis tried to make her young son immortal by dipping him in the river Styx, but where she held his heel remained dry and became the vulnerable spot where Achilles ultimately received his death-wound (at the hands of Hector's brother, Paris, who had help from the god Apollo).
Borrowed this from the internet, why write something that already exists?
Other:
Just a question about his Noble Phantasm. Does he still get damage, ie: could it be possible for him to get an arm chopped off? Or is he immune to damage? You mention that he's immune to damage and pain, but can it still be inflicted?
Nice use of the internet. Maybe make it so that if he gets hit on his foot that he gets hurt instead of his heel, because I dunno about you but a heel is a hard target to hit, and they only hit it because of a god's assistance.
I'm iffy on the shield, but as long as it's just a plain shield it's fine. Keep in mind that a lance is a two handed weapon, and thus that shield might get to be a bit of hindrance.
Username: Ploxerdon
Name: Kasumi Kurosawa
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Country of Origin: Japan
Servant: She would prefer Assassin. She would absolutely hate to get Caster as servant.
Abilities: Kasumi is very agile, and is a master of assassination. She can walk and run over any surfaces, including walls and water. When wielding any kind of blade, she is able to damage a mage's magical circuit by hitting them in the right spots (Kasumi has no trouble finding them). Kasumi is resistant to all kinds of magic. She can't really cast magic herself.
Appearance:
Personality: Kasumi is cold and only speaks to others besides a select few people she actually likes. She absolutely hates mages and others who cast magic, willing to even backstab mages who side with her. She likes to kill those she faces before they are able to notice her presence. She prefers to fight herself instead of letting her servant do the dirty work. She is very impatient.
Short Biography: Kasumi used to be a respectable member of the Kurosawa family, but this all ended one night when her entire family got exterminated by a bunch of mages. Kasumi wasn't able to do anything, and was forced to watch as those who were close to her get tortured and killed. At this day, she swore to get rid of all magic. Her goal is to obtain the Ivory Flory so that she can end all magic in the world.
Quirk: Kasumi is a master of assassination and battle with blades, as she usually wields two dagger herself. She is very agile, able to dodge attacks before they even come close. Kasumi is a master of deception, fooling foolish mages who side with her.
Other: "They who live by the wand shall die by my blade. "
To start:
She can't really cast magic herself.
She can't be a master if she can't summon something on her own. :| Like, this is a cool concept, but she can't be a master if she can't summon something.
the Ivory Flory
What is this? Seriously I'm confused.
You could alter this by making her a magekiller, someone who uses some magic (not much) to kill mages and monsters. There was a character in the show whose whole job was killing mages and used very little magic to do so.
now I'm going to go stumble off and make my own sheets.
Is it possible to be a masterless servant?
Sorta like how Gilgamesh was after the 4th war chilling by himself with his incarnated body.
Sorta like how Gilgamesh was after the 4th war chilling by himself with his incarnated body.
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Hmm, probably, but even then you'd need a source of mana, which Gilgamesh had only because he had a reincarnated body.
Hmm, probably, but even then you'd need a source of mana, which Gilgamesh had only because he had a reincarnated body.
Yeah of course. Gilgamesh had the support of draining the magical energy of orphans in good old neighborhood totally friendly priest Kirei's orphanage, but I don't think doing something similar would be too effective in regards to keeping stuff secret. Will there be any repercussions to manipulating and using random people?
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Yeah of course. Gilgamesh had the support of draining the magical energy of orphans in good old neighborhood totally friendly priest Kirei's orphanage, but I don't think doing something similar would be too effective in regards to keeping stuff secret. Will there be any repercussions to manipulating and using random people?
If they're mostly NPCs and non-mages probably not, but remember that the Eden Magi are looking for Servants and Masters to wipe them out, so a sudden case of mana draining might draw their attention.
damn I really need to finish Stay Night, I'm on the second season so not much spoilers me but holy shit
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@RainDash
For Achilles Noble Phantasm..
Maybe it would be a better idea to change it up a bit:
He still receives damage on his entire body, but they can't actually damage it?
I don't believe they strictly mention it in the myths, but lets just keep it at that?
He can't be damaged anywhere besides the back of his feet maybe?
His spear and shield are ordinary weapons, so I think it should be fine.
Lancer from the anime wielded 2 spears, I think wielding a spear and a shield at once should be fine?
As for my master, Kasumi, maybe I should change my wording.
She can cast magic, she just doesn't out of choice as she hates magic.
I think this would allow her to be a master?
As for the Ivory Flower thing, I actually meant The Flower of Eden. She wants to use the power to erase magic from the world.
She is a bit like Kiritsugu from the anime, I meant for her to be some form of magekiller. Her ideal is different though, she is against the use of magic, so she would rather not use it (walking on walls etc is magic but still).
For Achilles Noble Phantasm..
Maybe it would be a better idea to change it up a bit:
He still receives damage on his entire body, but they can't actually damage it?
I don't believe they strictly mention it in the myths, but lets just keep it at that?
He can't be damaged anywhere besides the back of his feet maybe?
His spear and shield are ordinary weapons, so I think it should be fine.
Lancer from the anime wielded 2 spears, I think wielding a spear and a shield at once should be fine?
As for my master, Kasumi, maybe I should change my wording.
She can cast magic, she just doesn't out of choice as she hates magic.
I think this would allow her to be a master?
As for the Ivory Flower thing, I actually meant The Flower of Eden. She wants to use the power to erase magic from the world.
She is a bit like Kiritsugu from the anime, I meant for her to be some form of magekiller. Her ideal is different though, she is against the use of magic, so she would rather not use it (walking on walls etc is magic but still).
@RainDash
For Achilles Noble Phantasm..
Maybe it would be a better idea to change it up a bit:
He still receives damage on his entire body, but they can't actually damage it?
I don't believe they strictly mention it in the myths, but lets just keep it at that?
He can't be damaged anywhere besides the back of his feet maybe?
His spear and shield are ordinary weapons, so I think it should be fine.
Lancer from the anime wielded 2 spears, I think wielding a spear and a shield at once should be fine?
As for my master, Kasumi, maybe I should change my wording.
She can cast magic, she just doesn't out of choice as she hates magic.
I think this would allow her to be a master?
As for the Ivory Flower thing, I actually meant The Flower of Eden. She wants to use the power to erase magic from the world.
She is a bit like Kiritsugu from the anime, I meant for her to be some form of magekiller. Her ideal is different though, she is against the use of magic, so she would rather not use it (walking on walls etc is magic but still).
I believe Achilles actually had his elbow sliced open when he got hit by another person's spear throw in the myth. Maybe have a huge damage resistance but it starts losing effectiveness against very strong attacks?
Or you could do the Nasuverse Achilles variant and have his invulnerability be disabled after his heel gets hit once.
RainDash Turnabout Luckster
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@RainDash
For Achilles Noble Phantasm..
Maybe it would be a better idea to change it up a bit:
He still receives damage on his entire body, but they can't actually damage it?
I don't believe they strictly mention it in the myths, but lets just keep it at that?
He can't be damaged anywhere besides the back of his feet maybe?
His spear and shield are ordinary weapons, so I think it should be fine.
Lancer from the anime wielded 2 spears, I think wielding a spear and a shield at once should be fine?
As for my master, Kasumi, maybe I should change my wording.
She can cast magic, she just doesn't out of choice as she hates magic.
I think this would allow her to be a master?
As for the Ivory Flower thing, I actually meant The Flower of Eden. She wants to use the power to erase magic from the world.
She is a bit like Kiritsugu from the anime, I meant for her to be some form of magekiller. Her ideal is different though, she is against the use of magic, so she would rather not use it (walking on walls etc is magic but still).
I think he could get wounds, but doesn't feel pain except on his heels?
Plus I know, but a shield limits the flexibility of the arm. Just something to keep in mind, and a Lancer wouldn't have too much trouble with it, but being aware of it affects how you write your fighting.
Just keep in mind a Master also summons a servant, using magic.
That makes sense.
Okay.
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I believe Achilles actually had his elbow sliced open when he got hit by another person's spear throw in the myth. Maybe have a huge damage resistance but it starts losing effectiveness against very strong attacks?
Or you could do the Nasuverse Achilles variant and have his invulnerability be disabled after his heel gets hit once.
This also works.
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@Hinsek@RainDash
Oh, I didn't know that about his myth.
Well, we could follow the nasuverse version of his ability (didn't know he even existed there tbh) and make him immune to all damage besides divine damage until he gets hit in his heel, permanently disabling his noble phantasm?
I'll keep the shield-wielding in mind during writing.
As for the summoning process... Maybe she assassinated somebody who was about to summon a servant, and she continued the summoning out of curiosity, just to see what happens?
It could work imo.
Oh, I didn't know that about his myth.
Well, we could follow the nasuverse version of his ability (didn't know he even existed there tbh) and make him immune to all damage besides divine damage until he gets hit in his heel, permanently disabling his noble phantasm?
I'll keep the shield-wielding in mind during writing.
As for the summoning process... Maybe she assassinated somebody who was about to summon a servant, and she continued the summoning out of curiosity, just to see what happens?
It could work imo.
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Okay. *cracks knuckles*
First off, you're missing something from the rules. Please read them to see what it is. I think I see it but maybe put it somewhere else as well
Next, I would prefer you to have one Noble Phantasm. The knife is good, and you don't have to have it decline in effectiveness, but the curse is a problem as you could be virtually immortal, which presents a problem. Also it could be loosely interpreted and it'd just be a huge issue and hassle later on. ex. 'But my character was born by c-section' or 'but mine was born magically' and so on and they don't need evidence.
Then please explain your abilities, the names give us a vague idea of what they could be, but I'd like to know what they do.
History, you say that the legend was reinterpreted, but pretty much this was a real person so he shouldn't have been affected by that. How does what Willy Shakes did change him as a person?
C Section was silly, and I wasn't going to have that apply to the legend, since you still were born of woman. It was just in an unconventional way. The only way you could circumvent it is if you were a woman, or had high enough Divinity that you basically weren't human anymore. Besides, this is Nasu. Don't forget the Riders, Beasts, the genderbending, etc. He's far from invincible.
But since we're only allowed one phantasm. I'll just scrap it.
Fine, I'll do that. It was late, I was tired.
Willy matters because it's fame that gets you into the Throne of heroes and makes you a servant in the first place. Macbeth is famous in the modern day because of Shakespreare. That's not to say that the actual Macbeth isn't in the Throne. This master just drew the short straw and got a Macbeth who has been heavily influenced by Shakespeare's play. Kinda like how Vlad gets whammied due to Dracula's legend.
Arisphadrel The First Dream
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Username
Arisphadrel
Name
Mai Tsukigami
Age
19
Gender
Female
Country of Origin
Nagoya, Japan
Servant
Berserker > Caster > Rider > Archer > Saber > Lancer > Assassin
Abilities
Mai had an extraordinary amount of Mana Circuits. Do to this, she generates and takes in such a vast amount of mana at a time that she actually suffers from "clogging" if she does not constantly discharge it in large chunks.
The type of magic that Mai focuses on is support and sense-based. She can enhance the senses as well as create alternative methods to let others see a situation, heal wounds or poisons, or create singular actions to force domino effects to create the desired effect. Essentially, she plays on Chance and Conception.
Due to her vast amounts of mana, Mai is also able to create a Reality Marble. This Reality Marble -- The Null -- is nothing made to directly harm or kill an individual. Instead, it is a Reality Marble of puzzles. Hose unable to escape the blackness that consumes them from the creation of this Reality Marble are faced with...conundrums. Rooms upon rooms lined with cryptic puzzles line the world, with a time limit ticking away to signify how long the victims have before they are inevitably assimilated by The Null to become the base for a new room of puzzles.
All in all with examination, she is not a Magi of offensive capacity. She preferences supporting to the upmost.
Appearance
Catchphrase
"You wouldn't believe the things that I see sometimes. You might not want to even if you did."
Personality
A vivid outlook of life flowed with stark contrast in realistic situations. Mai is crossed between a girl with a head of fairytales, and a young adult aware of the fragile method of mortality. Mai blurts out what she thinks without consideration half of the time, whilst keeping her own desires and thoughts in her head the other half of the time. Despite that, her morals to fighting and trying to acquire the Flower of Eden is not for anything vicious or evil. Instead...it is only a single wish -- a single event that she wishes to cease and redact from the present time. If a single source can be so powerful...then it should be able to do what she wants in the end as well.
Short Biography
From a dysfunctional family, Mai came with a share of issues like anyone else. Her mother -- a woman sick from stress and genetically-inherited issues that sprung once she gave birth to her child, and her father -- a man that would find himself disowning his only child and kicking her out of their home, would remain a broken family in wake of her leave.
Quirk
Mai sometimes resorts to taking a pill known as Duotine to suppress her Circuits. It stops her from risking her life from mana overflow, but puts her under heavy amounts of psychotic hallucinations, renders her paranoid to extreme levels, and causes her to suffer from extreme insomnia.
Other
Uhm...Cheesecake.
Arisphadrel
Name
Mai Tsukigami
Age
19
Gender
Female
Country of Origin
Nagoya, Japan
Servant
Berserker > Caster > Rider > Archer > Saber > Lancer > Assassin
Abilities
Mai had an extraordinary amount of Mana Circuits. Do to this, she generates and takes in such a vast amount of mana at a time that she actually suffers from "clogging" if she does not constantly discharge it in large chunks.
The type of magic that Mai focuses on is support and sense-based. She can enhance the senses as well as create alternative methods to let others see a situation, heal wounds or poisons, or create singular actions to force domino effects to create the desired effect. Essentially, she plays on Chance and Conception.
Due to her vast amounts of mana, Mai is also able to create a Reality Marble. This Reality Marble -- The Null -- is nothing made to directly harm or kill an individual. Instead, it is a Reality Marble of puzzles. Hose unable to escape the blackness that consumes them from the creation of this Reality Marble are faced with...conundrums. Rooms upon rooms lined with cryptic puzzles line the world, with a time limit ticking away to signify how long the victims have before they are inevitably assimilated by The Null to become the base for a new room of puzzles.
All in all with examination, she is not a Magi of offensive capacity. She preferences supporting to the upmost.
Appearance
Catchphrase
"You wouldn't believe the things that I see sometimes. You might not want to even if you did."
Personality
A vivid outlook of life flowed with stark contrast in realistic situations. Mai is crossed between a girl with a head of fairytales, and a young adult aware of the fragile method of mortality. Mai blurts out what she thinks without consideration half of the time, whilst keeping her own desires and thoughts in her head the other half of the time. Despite that, her morals to fighting and trying to acquire the Flower of Eden is not for anything vicious or evil. Instead...it is only a single wish -- a single event that she wishes to cease and redact from the present time. If a single source can be so powerful...then it should be able to do what she wants in the end as well.
Short Biography
From a dysfunctional family, Mai came with a share of issues like anyone else. Her mother -- a woman sick from stress and genetically-inherited issues that sprung once she gave birth to her child, and her father -- a man that would find himself disowning his only child and kicking her out of their home, would remain a broken family in wake of her leave.
Quirk
Mai sometimes resorts to taking a pill known as Duotine to suppress her Circuits. It stops her from risking her life from mana overflow, but puts her under heavy amounts of psychotic hallucinations, renders her paranoid to extreme levels, and causes her to suffer from extreme insomnia.
Other
Uhm...Cheesecake.
Username
Arisphadrel
Class Name
Caster
True Name
Alice Kyteler, The Devil's Bride
Age
Physically around the age of 21.
Gender
Female
Master
---
Abilities
(Class Skills)
Independent Action
Item Construction
Territory Creation
(Personal Skills)
Charisma
Familiar - Demon - Caster excels at summoning demons of all and any variety to do her bidding for the sake of ease.
High-Speed Incantation
Magecraft
Witchcraft - The first witch to lay with the Devil himself per recorded history. Caster has incredible ease creating cruel hexes and performing rituals of hellish rebuke.
(Noble Phantasm)
Rite of The First Contract: Groom of The Devil's Bride
The ultimate ability in Alice's arsenal. Rite of The First Contract gives her -- as the First Witch -- true priority over the concept of the being known as "Lucifer", "Satan", and whatever other names that he has been given. To call upon this contract is to manifest the True Demon himself into the physical plane to fight in her stead. The Devil is always with her without the true activation of this Noble Phantasm, lingering in her shadow and remaining dormant past offering his "limbs" to act as her sword and shield and pull her from dangers/help her travel over large areas without expanding energy.
Appearance
Personality
Caster, in her incarnation, is a man-eater, so to speak. Dedicated to the visage of the Satanic individual to which she worshipped in life, the concept of the Devil became a True Demon with which she desired to consumate with -- thus, needing to obtain a higher power in order to do so. As such, with such a wish whispered upon her lips, she is constantly power-hungry under the visage of a kinder young lady that tries to drive her Master to her own interests. She is openly flirtatious, declaring that she's in an "open" relationship of sorts should any get her to truly dig down and admit past her simply saying that she's one for her own interests. Combat is not her style either -- instead, Caster prefers to send in familiars and others to do the dirty work for her. Spread a rumor here or there, flick one domino to send everything crashing...A homewrecker to the end.~
Short Biography
Dame Alice Kyteler (1280 – later than 1325), is said to have been the earliest person accused and condemned for witchcraft in Ireland. She fled the country, but her servant Petronilla de Meath was flogged and burned to death at the stake on 3 November 1324.
This is currently the basis of what can be revealed.
Other
Under the guise of a full moon, Alice's torso and arms become skeletal in appearance. This reverts once the sun rises once more.
Arisphadrel
Class Name
Caster
True Name
Alice Kyteler, The Devil's Bride
Age
Physically around the age of 21.
Gender
Female
Master
---
Abilities
(Class Skills)
Independent Action
Item Construction
Territory Creation
(Personal Skills)
Charisma
Familiar - Demon - Caster excels at summoning demons of all and any variety to do her bidding for the sake of ease.
High-Speed Incantation
Magecraft
Witchcraft - The first witch to lay with the Devil himself per recorded history. Caster has incredible ease creating cruel hexes and performing rituals of hellish rebuke.
(Noble Phantasm)
Rite of The First Contract: Groom of The Devil's Bride
The ultimate ability in Alice's arsenal. Rite of The First Contract gives her -- as the First Witch -- true priority over the concept of the being known as "Lucifer", "Satan", and whatever other names that he has been given. To call upon this contract is to manifest the True Demon himself into the physical plane to fight in her stead. The Devil is always with her without the true activation of this Noble Phantasm, lingering in her shadow and remaining dormant past offering his "limbs" to act as her sword and shield and pull her from dangers/help her travel over large areas without expanding energy.
Appearance
Personality
Caster, in her incarnation, is a man-eater, so to speak. Dedicated to the visage of the Satanic individual to which she worshipped in life, the concept of the Devil became a True Demon with which she desired to consumate with -- thus, needing to obtain a higher power in order to do so. As such, with such a wish whispered upon her lips, she is constantly power-hungry under the visage of a kinder young lady that tries to drive her Master to her own interests. She is openly flirtatious, declaring that she's in an "open" relationship of sorts should any get her to truly dig down and admit past her simply saying that she's one for her own interests. Combat is not her style either -- instead, Caster prefers to send in familiars and others to do the dirty work for her. Spread a rumor here or there, flick one domino to send everything crashing...A homewrecker to the end.~
Short Biography
Dame Alice Kyteler (1280 – later than 1325), is said to have been the earliest person accused and condemned for witchcraft in Ireland. She fled the country, but her servant Petronilla de Meath was flogged and burned to death at the stake on 3 November 1324.
This is currently the basis of what can be revealed.
Other
Under the guise of a full moon, Alice's torso and arms become skeletal in appearance. This reverts once the sun rises once more.
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