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@Whimsley In this case it's fine, but in the future, try to be a little more reserved about creating new areas in the setting, such as the HOLDING ROOM/Second story which were not mentioned prior.

Oh right, it's also fine to autohit step-soldiers like krunklets, but I'm sure you're already aware that more elite enemies shouldn't suffer the same fate.
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@Whimsley In this case it's fine, but in the future, try to be a little more reserved about creating new areas in the setting, such as the HOLDING ROOM/Second story which were not mentioned prior.

Oh right, it's also fine to autohit step-soldiers like krunklets, but I'm sure you're already aware that more elite enemies shouldn't suffer the same fate.


Hehe, step-soldiers. Sorry I got the idea and just went with it, won't happen again. And yeah I'm aware.
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@Whimsley

I personally thought it was more entertaining than a lot of the stuff I'd read prior. Very visually imaginative. I can see the red cloaked dude with the wide hat and mask hop across the empty space of the dull-grey steel of the hold atop enemies that were trying to reach him. This is particularly the kind of stuff I like to see because it's more specific and fun to read. I guess as @tex said gotta keep the krunklites in mind.
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@Necrophage Tis the free section, after all. I'd considered putting this in the casual section at one point, but ehhh.

Still, I do try to adhere to the requests/interests of anyone joining in on my RPs. People often don't have much input though, and would prefer to jump onto one of the many other RPs rather than invest themselves in trying to actually finish a story. I'm certainly guilty of this, but my reasons for leaving often come from a lack of chemistry with the other players.

Maybe people are just afraid offending GMs? Idk, I'd prefer to get some feedback and improve the experience for everyone rather than have people jump ship because X reason that they'd prefer not to specify.

Because y'know, people can't take criticism without rolling up into a ball of self deprecation or something.
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@tex Mostly what I try to look out for is auto-hitting against important characters and players' characters. It's a complete buzzkill to the act and react I enjoy. If someone can't react why the hell are they even writing with other people? Eh, this is just kind of carrying on a rant, heh.

Anyways I didn't post a CS mostly because I couldn't think of anything right now. Which is why I'm still here. Nothing wrong with you guys. It's entertaining and will definitely get better. I'm just biding time and doing other things.

Plus I love criticism on an almost masochistic level. It's how I get better.
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@tex Mostly what I try to look out for is auto-hitting against important characters and players' characters. It's a complete buzzkill to the act and react I enjoy. If someone can't react why the hell are they even writing with other people? Eh, this is just kind of carrying on a rant, heh.

Anyways I didn't post a CS mostly because I couldn't think of anything right now. Which is why I'm still here. Nothing wrong with you guys. It's entertaining and will definitely get better. I'm just biding time and doing other things.

Plus I love criticism on an almost masochistic level. It's how I get better.


Ah, well then I'll be sure to keep that in mind. You seem like a pretty dedicated/straightforward fellow. Those kinds o' people are hard to come by.

*SHAMELESSLY PLUGS MY OTHER RP IN SIGNATURE LEL*
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@tex, All right; I get ya; will make required edits.
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Accidentally posted this in the Characters Tab!

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Name: Alexander Sky

Age: 24

Sex: Male

Appearance:


Personality: Alexander is someone who, though a kind person, is also bitter, cynical, and only outwardly optimistic - he puts on a happy face in front of everyone, is brave enough to fight for his friends and what he wants, but at the same time, also highly disappointed at himself for past failures and mistakes.

- - - - (Power Matrix)
Abilities:
- Alexander is a Stunt Pilot for a Gyrocopter (Steampunk Airplane/Helicopter equivalent), but said Gyrocopter got destroyed in the beginning of the game, making this irrelevant unless a new Gyrocopter is found.
- Sunny Day: Alexander can make sunlight appear out of nowhere, even in dark places.
- Shield of the Sun: Alexander can create a Magical Shield.
- Fireball: Exactly what it says on the tin; a fireball that explodes with the same force as a grenade.

Weapons and Equipment:
- Jian
- Pistols
- First Aid Kit
- Money
- Food and Water


You're good to join in. At the moment, you can do as Whimsley did, and break out of your cage at your leisure. How you were captured is up to you, but I was rather fond of Zerraf's 'I was fucking sleeping and then idfk where I was' way of doing things.
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@Whimsley Going to slow the Krunk-mobile scene down a bit for Jenso and Hatman to catch up to you guys
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Sorry, I have been busy, ill try to get a post out later tonight
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@Lady Athena Alright.

As of now, when people begin taking too much time to post, they'll immediately go on a 5-day countdown. This will decrease to a 4-day countdown on the next offense, then 3, 2 etc.
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@tex

Yeah, I have been busy with Work and School lighting stuff. I will have the post out tonight
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Tex gave me permission to punch old women.

Yessssss...
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She finally stopped, calming her tone entirely despite the fact that she was shaking worse than an epileptic caterpillar.


Colorful.
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@tex

Once again, forgot to mention me at all.... Im guessing I am in sight of the Krunks?
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@tex

Once again, forgot to mention me at all.... Im guessing I am in sight of the Krunks?


Yeah, I think you are..

Don't take it in a bad way, I think tex just had to take a lot of things into account as several things were happening at once :P
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@Lady Athena Yea, it's as Jenso said. You haven't been doing very much so you'd slipped my mind a litttle, sorry. You should be near Zerraf and Alexander.
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@tex

It's completely fine, I was just wondering
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Waiting for @Whimsley and @Lady Athena.
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Waiting for @Whimsley and @Lady Athena.


I'm giving her a chance to post first, as I directly interacted with her.
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