Archangel89

Overlord: Momento Mori

It was only a moment, a single solitary moment. Had he not been paying attention he may have let it slip by him and fade into the next moment. But the Dread Lord misses nothing, ever vigilant, ever on guard. Sitting alone in his private chamber, a quiet somber place made entirely of the same black stone as the rest of the castra, Vae sat in quiet meditation when the moment passed. Somehow the air tasted differently, his armor carried more weight than usual, even the weight of his sword seemed in balanced for some reason. Whatever place or time he found himself in there was no more familiarity and the Imperium had to forge ahead. His slow heavy footfalls echoed through the halls as he passed his Legionaries who paused momentarily for a quick salute before continuing. As he appeared looking on the balcony over looking the great expanse that was his domain the thunderous footsteps of thousands of soldiers echoed throughout the blackened cavern as they moved through formations and carried out whatever tasks were asked of them.

His brooding was interrupted when a soldier came escorting a Skeleton Butler who promptly and humbly lowered his head to the Dread Lord.

"My liege, Sable Lord Rodias has summoned the Chapter Keepers to the Throne Room. He demands anyone with great enough power be in attendance."

"Very well, we shall leave immediately. Gather a cohort, we leave at once."

With his troops assembled Vae cast Gate and marched his troops through. The summons of a Sable Lord were irrefutable but the curiosity of why now and why not his creator plagued his mind. He had little time to think more on it as he marched into the Throne Room where the other Chapter Keepers and a handful of others were already gathered. An eclectic mix of character there was more that had to be discussed later,

"Vae Dheyer, Commander of the White Legion. What is thy bidding my master?"

Overlord: Momento Mori

Sorry for my lateness I have a post started I just have to finish ...life sux lol

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Hey Vae doesn't have abandonment issues, he's the type that you have abandonment issues over lol

Overlord: Momento Mori

The Dread Lord

The Dread Lord

Name: Vae Dhayer
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Occupation: Commander of the White Legion
Residence: Chapter V: Imperium Immortuos
Character Focus: Tank/DPS
Personality:

• Cruel
• Meticulous
• Efficient
• Protective
• Loyal

Notable Equipment:

• Infernal Flaming Longsword - a longsword enchanted with a powerful flame enchantment giving a boost to damage output.
• Dread Lord Plate - A full set of blackened platemail carved and embossed with a terrifying visage.

Creator Information: The_Silver_Hand - Silver was an avid roleplayer who often liked to twist normal conventions to create new and interesting characters. When he created Vae he made him as a polar opposite of himself, who chose to be shining paragon of good and justice. He would often use his creation as a bounding board for ideas for his next novel trying to create a villain that would sum up the entirety of the evil his world possesed. Plus it was always fun to play an evil character and Vae gave him the chance to do so.
Total Level: 60
Class Levels:

• Dark Knight - 15 (B)
• Necromancer - 5 (R)
• Black Guard - 10 (B)
• Antipaladin - 5 (H)

Race Levels:

• Death Knight 5 (H)
• Skeleton Squire - 10 (B)
• Skeleton Warrior - 10 (B)

Alignment: - 500 (Lawful Evil)
Stats:
HP: - 100
MP: - 50
PHY. ATK: 60
PHY. DEF: 100
AGI: 30
MAG. ATK: 40
MAG. DEF: 85
RESIST: 50
SPECIAL: 100

Dominion:
Imperium Immortuos - the Imperium is simple in design but effective in purpose. Designed to resemble a Roman Legion barracks on a larger scale, the entire structure is massive in size housing the entirety of the White Legion in different storehouses. Upon entering the Chapter high mountainous walls funnel you straight into the Castra with numerous Skeleton Archers lining them ready to impale any poor soul. Skeleton Warriors stand ready to fight anyone who gets past the Archers and Vae stands beyond them.

White Legion reference

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@The Irish Tree I finished the edits

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<Snipped quote by Archangel89>

Wanted to point out real quick that a class listed as (R) can only go as high as level 5, and that some of your class/race levels aren't defined yet. Also that picture at the end for the White Legion Reference is broken, or I just flat can't see it. Also his age isn't listed.

Other than that though his cs is really shaping up a lot. Barring those minor fixes, I'd say he's pretty much good to go once you finish revising.

@The Irish Tree

OK so fix the levels, the White Legion image and age got it. When you say defined do I just need to add the levels and rarity or describe them?

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Here's my finished product which stands ready for judgment. I am ready to make.any changes needed.

The Dread Lord

The Dread Lord

Name: Vae Dhayer
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Occupation: Commander of the White Legion
Residence: Chapter V: Imperium Immortuos
Character Focus: Tank/DPS
Personality:

• Cruel
• Meticulous
• Efficient
• Protective
• Loyal

Notable Equipment:

• Infernal Flaming Longsword - a longsword enchanted with a powerful flame enchantment giving a boost to damage output.
• Dread Lord Plate - A full set of blackened platemail carved and embossed with a terrifying visage.

Creator Information: The_Silver_Hand - Silver was an avid roleplayer who often liked to twist normal conventions to create new and interesting characters. When he created Vae he made him as a polar opposite of himself, who chose to be shining paragon of good and justice. He would often use his creation as a bounding board for ideas for his next novel trying to create a villain that would sum up the entirety of the evil his world possesed. Plus it was always fun to play an evil character and Vae gave him the chance to do so.
Total Level: 60
Class Levels:

• Dark Knight - 15 (B)
• Necromancer - 5 (R)
• Black Guard - 10 (B)
• Antipaladin - 5 (H)

Race Levels:

• Death Knight 5 (H)
• Wight - 10 (B)
• Zombie - 10 (B)

Alignment: - 500 (Lawful Evil)
Stats:
HP: - 100
MP: - 50
PHY. ATK: 60
PHY. DEF: 100
AGI: 30
MAG. ATK: 40
MAG. DEF: 85
RESIST: 50
SPECIAL: 100

Dominion:
Imperium Immortuos - the Imperium is simple in design but effective in purpose. Designed to resemble a Roman Legion barracks on a larger scale, the entire structure is massive in size housing the entirety of the White Legion in different storehouses. Upon entering the Chapter high mountainous walls funnel you straight into the Castra with numerous Skeleton Archers lining them ready to impale any poor soul. Skeleton Warriors stand ready to fight anyone who gets past the Archers and Vae stands beyond them.

White Legion reference

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Would it piss off everyone here if Vae was an Overlord race class?

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OK I'm having some trouble with my stats. Primarily my guy is a tank so I know that being tanky is a must but I want to make thing seem fair and balanced so any thoughts? This is by no means finished this is just to give you guys a look at what I'm working with.

Character

The Dread Lord

Name: Vae Dhayer
Gender: Male
Age:
Occupation: Commander of the Château Military
Residence: Chapter V: Imperium Immortuos
Character Focus: Tank/DPS
Personality:

• Cruel
• Meticulous
• Efficient
• Protective
• Loyal

Notable Equipment:

• Infernal Flaming Longsword - a longsword enchanted with a powerful flame enchantment giving a boost to damage output.
• Dread Lord Plate - A full set of blackened platemail carved and embossed with a terrifying visage.

Creator Information: The_Silver_Hand - Silver was an avid roleplayer who often liked to twist normal conventions to create new and interesting characters. When he created Vae he made him as a polar opposite of himself, who chose to be shining paragon of good and justice. He would often use his creation as a bounding board for ideas for his next novel trying to create a villain that would sum up the entirety of the evil his world possesed. Plus it was always fun to play an evil character and Vae gave him the chance to do so.
Total Level: 60
Class Levels:

• Dark Knight - 15 ()
• Necromancer - 15 ()
• Black Guard - 10 ()

Race Levels:

• Night Lich - 10 ()
• Undead - 10 ()

Alignment: - 500 (Lawful Evil)
Stats:
HP:
MP: (How many spells you can cast before running dry)
PHY. ATK: (How much you are capable of hurting something with your physical attacks)
PHY. DEF: (How hard it is for physical attacks of your level to harm you.)
AGI: (How fast/evasive you are)
MAG. ATK: (How much damage your spells do. Also influences their area of effect.)
MAG. DEF: (How hard it is for spells to damage you.)
RESIST: (Your resistance to abnormal status effects, such as poison, illusions, etc.)
SPECIAL: (The effectiveness of your unique racial abilities. For normal humanoid races, this will always be a 0. If your character relies heavily on unique features of their race for combat, this stat should be relatively high.)

Dominion: (For Chapter Keepers only! Describe your floor, as they will generally be tailor-made to fit a single powerful NPC's classes, and compliment their style. Make sure to note any minions, traps, extra facilities on the floor, etc!)

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OK cool. The only real spell I wanted was Undeath Army and I suppose in could through a couple of levels in Necromancer