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Run, everybody needs to run away. Pick up a sick kid or two but run the he'll away.


You guys run. Light'll face the C'thulu monster head on! :P
Well, Light is engaging Patel right now, so yeah, fun.
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Agreed. I think everyone but Light should he scared shitless right now. Just by the fact that some dude is charging the front door and winning.


I just go with the flow for the most part. Potato will say when Bee is out of line.

And Light Is a bit crazy, she doesn't have much of a concept of fear because nothing can really kill her so far, and so far shes only been trapped in a vacuum so shes pretty much assuming people are stupid when it comes to fighting her.
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1.) Genuine ignorance; I didn't know how these sorts of things worked.

2.) Be my guest.


Alrighty. No prob.

Also there are a bunch of turkeys outside my apartment right now. I'm surprised they made their way this deep into an urban area, but they're cute and everyone is having a fun time playing with them. lol.
"Oh, being attacked. Took them long enough." Light said, looking down at the thing that was entering the building. Ignoring Cedric, she jumped off the roof, and besides leaving a hole that was her shape, Light was mostly unharmed but a bit dazed. She snapped out of it and caught up to the intruder, who was being fired upon by the bases security measures. Considering they were meant to kill and not secure, Light figured she didn't need to be gentle with it. She could hear faint whispers in her head, but she ignored them, she was already crazy enough as is.

Waiting for an opening, Light put down a hole and appeared behind the thing, going for what she assumed would be its kidney.
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Aya sensed Patel's recon tendrils and told Cedric, who then saw Patel near the entrance, then activated a filter in his power armor and so saw that the tendrils came from Patel, and sniped him/her before they came inside the building. Then, he returned to the building through a door on top of the roof.


Should've said he bounced the laser beam off a nearby lamp post or car or something, as Patel was right at the entrance. You can't get a shot like that if someone is less than a meter in front of the door without shenanigans or a rail cannon. Thats what confused me.

Also I can just have Light jump off the roof and bam, shes right next to the guy ready to fight. Why would she even bother running through the building?
@Archmage MC You mention that you're worried about the shikai I described, but do you mind if I ask what in particular worries you about it? I put a number of prohibitions on it to make it reasonable, but is there something abusive about it that I'm not thinking of? Criticisms and suggestions are welcome.


Well Portals or anything that meddles with a fundamental of physics like time or Space are inherently broken. whats stopping your character from getting people into a monologue like whats normal in anime, then just putting a rock inside their brain, instantly killing pretty much anything without 682 or deadpool regeneration?

Stuff like that.
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Actually you're still on the roof but heading back into the building.


And he somehow knows who is attacking, where they are, and can snipe them while they're already inside the building or literally entering it from the top of a roof without going to the side.

Thats why I'm so confused. Its like a step in all that is missing.
Letter bee confuses me so much with his pacing. First we're on the roof, then we're at the entrance or something?
@Archmage MC sorry but it will be at least for the first arc of this story after it though you may be accepted by the visors but that's iffy


Eh, the beauty of being a GM and making your own story is you can make a world of greys like the real world. IE, not all hollows are evil, not all soul reapers are good, and they have different morals and goals. Sure stigmas will segregate them, but whos to say that a hollow can't be friendly? Easy way to circumvent the eating human souls bit is making it so the hollow spent most of their time in hell and ate those souls instead or something.

Anyway, more worried about the two power sets than the origin.
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