ayzrules

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

@MorningStar1399 Shy and I have gone through his sheet and it's mostly good, except for a couple of minor things-

notes

1. Since metal can't just come out of thin air, we were wondering the scope of his ability to change the size of metal. Shy suggested a 10% change in either direction as a limit, which also allows for mild change in density

2. Both of us are a bit iffy on the part "can change the temperature of metal so it burns the bearer or becomes too cold to comfortably carry; he is immune to these changes"; changing temp is fine, but Alex wouldn't be immune to feeling the temp changes. Shy suggested that as an alternative strategy, he could possibly change the temperature of half an iron rod or whatever, so that he could still hold it and then whack people with the charged end (:D)

3. Shy pointed out that the first big paragraph of the bio could be potentially triggering to some people, and I'm inclined to agree with her. Would you be okay with re-wording it? Maybe hint/imply that all that shit happened but not outright state? Or include a TW? IDK I'm not good at TW stuff lol

4. Is Alex's spy network an open secret, or more "hidden"?

5. Shy pointed out that if he kept his last name and took over his dad's factory, most people probs would know who his parents were

Would you mind editing post a lil? HMU if you have questions about anything up there <3

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

@MorningStar1399 yes please! Just in OOC is fine

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

@MorningStar1399 ME. i should be passed out asleep, seeing as I've not gotten more than 1-2 hours straight of sleep in the past however many hours thanks to being on planes, but here i am unable to sleep :^)

(and unable to do anything remotely productive, either. blegh)

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

@MorningStar1399 haha brt I don’t have app on phone but I’ll get on laptop

@MorningStar1399 Yeah, I was looking through the lore, and I went "but...but...you know that (list of gifts) are good for (every guild but the labelled one), right? Who does this task?"

@shylarah

Ye which is why I wanted to change 😂

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

@MorningStar1399 nah it’s basically the same except gift =/= Guild

But shy’s got it pretty much spot on (when she says “aeronaut” she’s referring to ppl who do air/flight related stuff, not former aeronaut guild ppl)

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

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So...anyone with the former "aeronaut" gifts would have to have served in the military now, whereas before aeronauts didn't have to serve? (I was in the original group, hence my somewhat strange question.) Or do non-military aeronauts still exist but are technically guildless, as they were never part of the military and thus NOT part of the Legionnaire? It seems more confusing this way, or maybe I'm reading it wrong seeing as it's 2:15 in the morning.

@MorningStar1399

No you got it right the first time; ppl who have gifts can choose which guild/if they want a guild at all. So technically someone with super speed COULD join scholar guild, but its not as common as someone w super speed joining legion

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

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Sorry, typo, I meant "denotes our lineage". Basically like it says where our characters hail from, like 'Lord Eddard Stark of Winterfell', which includes a title, name and place.

@Stern Algorithm

Ahhh okay no the title thing usually doesn’t include the place

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

I have a question about titles, do we just come up with something that denotes out lineage? Or are there strict rules?

@Stern Algorithm

Titles will be like Mr., Mrs./Ms., lady/lord, etc

does that answer your question? not entirely sure what you mean by "denotes out lineage"

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

Hi! Is there still room in here? I'd very much like to join if there is!

Also, I don't mean to intrude or anything, but wouldn't "Aeronautic Legion" be a more fitting name?

@bloonewb

There's definitely still room, and we'd love to have you!!

I'm going to page @shylarah for the second part-she was the one who insisted I change names, lmao

(But we agreed to take the "aeronaut" out because it was a bit misleading, since the guild includes all military branches, not just the air-navy/pilots)

So I was thinking an Evil Genius who is bonkers but oddly polite to the people that work for him. If he can find anyone willing to work for him.

@Avanhelsing

But being impolite to the hired help just isn't done, of course ;)

(loving the idea!)

🎀 𝓟𝓻𝓸𝓹𝓮𝓻 . 𝓨𝓸𝓾𝓷𝓰 . 𝓚𝓲𝓵𝓵𝓲𝓷𝓰 . 𝓜𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓷𝓮𝓼 . (a steampunk RP of petticoats, poison, and propriety)

another FYI-the name of Aeronaut Guild has been changed to Legionnaire Guild, after Shy and I discussed some things :)