Balthazar007

Apocalypse

Not to overstep my bounds but I am thinking that you should make a special Location Tab if that is possible. because you put Downtown Capitol City info in the Characters tab.

Edit: Is there a certain time limit that is given in casual before one can post again? I'm not necessarily in a hurry because i'm not sure if anyone would randomly appear in my current scene. I was just thinking of the chance of pulling additional people into the Roleplay if they have something to read.

@Weed

If there is a way to create custom tabs, please let me know. I would definitely do that. I've been on this site for a while, and have seen no such feature. Until then, both characters and locations will have to be stored in the Characters tab.

I only ask that you wait for one other person to post after you. As an exception, if 5 days pass without another post, you may post again. I'll have something new up soon, if not tonight, definitely tomorrow.

Apocalypse

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@Weed

I like the amount of thought that you put into your questions. I will try to answer your questions and concerns as plainly as possible.

I have created Capitol City to be a broad location. In the future, I may create more sub-locations within it or even expand the area surrounding it. Whenever I have time and inspiration, I will do that. In the mean time, there is nothing stopping anyone from creating their own sub-locations within Capitol City or even building onto the area surrounding Capitol City. People can even create an area separate from Capitol City. We build this world together. Simply create a location sheet in the character sheet section, and I will add it into the first OOC post.

On that note, the next location that I want to build is "Downtown Capitol City". This will be the demon stronghold. This will be where Balthazar is at the moment. I don't have time to create that at the moment though. I will tonight or tomorrow.

Apocalypse

Angel should be ready by tomorrow!

@White Alice

Awesome! I'm looking forward to it.

You thought I was gone, but I was actually just looking for a picture now. Been puzzling over my char concept.

@GreenGoat

Puzzle away. There is no pressure. I'm glad to hear you're still around though.

@Balthazar007Ah okay. Location. i'll add that. As to the run on sentences i'll keep an eye on those too. I get a little carried away when i write so my grammar and sometimes spelling takes the back seat. I apologize for the parts that are difficult to read. And it is an apology because I know it is a more enjoyable read, if it is easy to understand. A slight failure on my part. Long way to go before I'm a pro.

Thanks for the feed back

@Weed

And thank you for being so understanding and not getting butt hurt over constructive criticism. I'm wondering when and how Gerard and Balthazar will meet. I'm thinking that you'll have to fight an army of demons soon. mwahaha! :)

Apocalypse

@Weed

I would like to give some feedback on your post, after giving it a good read.

1) It's very detailed; I love that!

2) There are a lot of run on sentences that make it a little tricky to read in places. Please, work on that in the future.

3) You need to title your post "Capitol City". It's easy to assume, at this point, that you are in Capitol City (as it is the only location created so far). BUT in the future, as more locations are added, this can get confusing.

4) Overall, I love your character, very interesting. I'm excited to see where things go from here.

Apocalypse

Just so you know I haven't disappeared! I'll write up a character soon.

@LuckyBlackCat

Cool Beans!

@Balthazar007

Revising my sheet to make my angel more warrior/combat focused since we will likely have a fair proportion of magic users.

@White Alice

Revise to your heart's content. Characters can grow. You can edit their character sheets at any time. Within reason of course.

i think i wrote too much for a casual rp. i just ended up having too much i wanted to put down. But Gerard is finally on the scene.

@black alice thank you. i have my moments

@Weed

In my opinion, casual means, "a well thought out post, regardless of post length. long or short, as long as it has solid content."

Apocalypse

@Weed

Cool! Begin writing IC at your leisure. :)

Apocalypse

i'll just put my idea for my character down. i'm having trouble finding a good picture. My character is going to be an Artificer/Magic-tech crafter. It is late where i am now so i'll probably just write it out tomorrow

@Weed

Sounds like a plan! :)

Apocalypse

should we just let people decide their own magic and it's rules? would be easier and faster i guess

This is the answer to your question. Plus it wouldn't make much sense to apply a bunch of rules in a world where reality, time, and every other universal constant is breaking down around us. Chaos is the name of the game here... Just no god modding. (I will beat that horse long after it is dead... because zombies. Lol)

Apocalypse

Well I applaud you. The plot was quick and concise. I always liked sci and fantasy mixes. Just to be clear the high level of technology still functions? or has it all been shut down? A tank can't take down a dragon, for example

Was also curious what constitutes as demons or angels? More precisely where to the ghosts and monsters of legends fit in exactly? I have nothing against it. i just am being a "nitpicky" because i love details. I was thinking, and it doesn't have to be used. But if there were "muiltiple" worlds revolving around our earth. This is where those monsters might come from. Ghosts could be spirits manifesting forms due to the barrier breaking down.

I'm curious if magic is allow, and if so how is Necromancy looked upon by the 3 sides?

Also. count me in. i want to see what some other writers' characters are like but i might just make mine ahead of time.

@Weed

Technology: You can use technology to whatever degree you like. It is not shut down. Well, don't god mod of course.

Angel and Demon Clarification: Angels and Demons are beings that derive eternal life from either the powers of Light or Darkness respectively. True ghosts and spirits aren't "alive" and therefore still qualify as in-between, but it can be hard to tell an Angel or Demon apart from a ghost if that's the form they choose to take. Most monsters fit this in-between stage as well. But a monster or a seemingly human character can actually be an Angel or Demon if they have obtained eternal life through the powers of Light or Darkness. For example: Balthazar (my character, not my username), was once a human.

Magic: Absolutely, magic is allowed and encouraged. Once again though, don't get god moddy with it, and all will be well.