Balthazar007

Pokemon: Storm

Sorry I haven't had the chance to jump on here over the last couple days. I've been pulling doubles at work every day for the last three days. And I've been super focused on wrapping up my novel. 3 chapters to go and I'll be done... with the 1st draft.

Pokemon: Storm

@TheForgottenArc

I read your latest IC post and moved the timeline two hours accordingly. Congrats on the evolution. Also, remember to post your Pokemon's level growths somewhere, either in a hider at the bottom of IC posts like prettydrops does OR in Daniel's character sheet.

I'm not keeping track of levels anymore, but you should. :)

Jak and Daxter: The First Precursor

Oh jeez, I thought you dropped this. I just now realized that you added to the first post! Aaaa, I'm sorry ;A; please continue!

@Ladypug

I'm actually on a roll with the novel I'm editing. If I hit a writer's block there, I'll switch to this.

Pokemon: Storm

@prettydrops@TheForgottenArc@iKatamalicious

I squeezed in a very basic short post before bed time, so as not to hold anyone up any longer.

Pokemon: Storm

"Well, everything seems to be in order! They're not fighting and you even got Boo to take his nap! Well done, boys. I think you deserve a bonus." The old man pulled out a regular cell phone, an early generation smartphone to be exact. "Now then, I'm going to up the dollar award from $15 to $20! And I'm going to give you a great review for your job well done too, that way they give you more Poke Dollars... Let's see........ And..." He pressed a button to finalize the transaction. A soft ding signaled success. "Done! Thank you boys so much!"

@prettydrops

Seconds after the man's smart phone signaled completion, the same DING came from both Dan's and Indy's Pokedex.

"Oh wow, that was fast." The old man said, genuinely surprised.

Upon checking their Pokedexes, Dan and Indigo found that their job had been ranked as "Class D" (the lowest rank possible). This earned them only ₽2, but next to that that was a multiplier of 5 (for the 5 star review left by the old man). The end total was an even ₽10 for each!

Pokemon: Storm

Well I would’ve had her battle Zvi tbh but he’s probably way too strong. I had thought about having her battle a trainer but I was just going to have her train her Pokémon once more after hanging out on Mt Leeman and sketching / painting some of the nature views maybe she’ll give it to Dans mom when she realizes the others are giving her a gift.

@iKatamalicious

You can have her do whatever you like. It's up to you. And she wouldn't necessarily loose to Zvi. He'd be using his two strong Pokemon (Noctowl and Sudowoodo), but she could win if she used all of her Pokemon. It's however you feel.

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"Well, everything seems to be in order! They're not fighting and you even got Boo to take his nap! Well done, boys. I think you deserve a bonus. Now then, that's $20 for each of you, and the amount of poke currency should be..."

@prettydrops

Sorry, I wasn't clear on HOW PokeCurrency would be awarded. PokeCurrency is awarded automatically by the Poke Corp (The Corporation that makes all Pokemon Items in Septoh... including the Pokedex).

All the man has to do is mark the mission as complete on his smartphone or other device with internet access. This is assuming he's not a trainer himself. He would have an App for posting missions for trainers to find. If he IS an active trainer, he would do this on his Pokedex.

To make things easy this time, you could change the ending paragraph of your post to look like this:

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"Well, everything seems to be in order! They're not fighting and you even got Boo to take his nap! Well done, boys. I think you deserve a bonus." The old man pulled out a regular cell phone, an early generation smartphone to be exact. "Now then, I'm going to up the dollar award from $15 to $20! And I'm going to give you a great review for your job well done too, that way they give you more Poke Dollars... Let's see........ And..." He pressed a button to finalize the transaction. A soft ding signaled success. "Done! Thank you boys so much!"

@prettydrops

I'll then reply with a post revealing how much Poke Money they earned.

Pokemon: Storm

hope the post is okay! i'd push the timeline forward by about 30 minutes. im thinking maybe the old man got held up at the store or something, so he doesn't have to come back yet either. ill probably wrap up the search in the next post, if that's okay.

@prettydrops

I'm going with 20 minutes, if that's okay.

Pokemon: Storm

@iKatamalicious What's Margo doing during this little side adventure? Just wondering. You don't have to post if you're not ready.

Jak and Daxter: The First Precursor

I'm cool with however you're doing it - you write it, I'll read it an maybe draw fan art I don't know yet ahah

@Ladypug

Nice. I'll add to the story tomorrow. :)

Jak and Daxter: The First Precursor

@Ladypug
Okay, Chapter 1 is finished. These are short chapters. When I'm done, this will be a novella or a novelette. I'm not looking to go super long with it.

What do you think?