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3 yrs ago
Current Auld Lang Syne, everybody. roleplayerguild.com/topics/…
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Vote in my new quest, Mirage, a RP quest set in the far, far future roleplayerguild.com/topics/…
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Kink-Shaming. Kink-Shaming Never Changes.
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@OppositionJ

I’m finishing up my post but I just want to ask a question.

If we’re all splitting up, do all of us each have a way to communicate with one another like a radio or something like that?
I'll begin working on my post as well.

If any of you want to plot with me, hit me up on Discord or PM me.
Personal opinion of Discord servers is that it causes more OOC to clutter up on there and that a busy forum OOC is more beneficial than a busy Discord OOC.


OCCUPATION:
“I was the one you called when you didn’t want to get your hands dirty. Now I’m not sure who I am.”

CAMPAIGN TEAM POSITION:
Able to be used as required. Taryn can provide security, tinker, or snoop on competitors. She’s not picky so long as she’s kept busy.


I don't know how to feel about this. On the one hand, this is quite vague but conversely, we do have individuals in our party who can perform multiple functions and do have multiple talents. Perhaps, making it a little more specific would be good?

[1] 5.7mm FMJ Handgun - Holding 15 rounds counting the one in the chamber Taryn's handgun isn't the flashiest piece of firepower but it's what she could afford when she came into South City. She's done enough work involving firearms that she knows what works and what doesn't and in her opinion there are few things that could stop subsequent shots from a 5.7 FMJ, although Taryn prefers to not push her luck in engagements. If it comes down to her having to put rounds down range she aims for the soft spots on her targets, primarily the head, and if she manages to get close enough she'll let her hands take care of them.

SKILLS:

The Iron Wolf - While more of a title than a skill Taryn didn't earn it for no reason. Fighting in the Dome was originally just something Taryn did for fun and some extra cash but she turned out to be very good at it. In a ring where most people are either broken or killed Taryn has taken hits most men would've been knocked out by. She's taken down men twice her size, and refused to give up from a fight. Death isn't something she fears when she knows she can face it on her own terms.


I feel like there's so much wasted opportunity here within these few nuggets and that you can capitalise on these things to make a character that is truly rock solid. The Koena Dome is like essentially Cyberpunk ThunderDome (TWO MEN ENTER! ONE MAN LEAVES!). What crazy shit would happen in a Fight-Club esque location with cybernetic augmentations up the wazoo? That should be like a strong focus of your character, being a bare-knuckled fighter who dukes it out and takes back the punches. I feel like expanding on that would make your CS more stronger than it is now. Unfortunately, this may seem like too much of a parallel to Sister Blue.

She could carry around like a set of hi-tech brass knuckles that fold out like pistons or jackhammers. Her augmentations could or should relate on how she's sacrificed her own humanity to gain strength.

I would like to comment more about this CS but as I previously stated before, Opp has the final decision of whether or not your character makes it into the RP. I will say one thing, though. It feels like there's a whole lot more you could do with this character concept. It's there but it could be a lot more there if you get what I'm saying.

Y'all better get ready for some Kansei Dirifto.

@OppositionJ

That's a interesting point to start at. Media Res is always well and fine and I guess there is a lot of potential in this scenario (Voter fraud, gang attack, black-mailing, hijacking etc). I think a live debate in the background between the candidates would have been fine and dandy but hey, you do you.

I guess in this case, Mack would play more of a passive role to Emma and Cass, only serving as a driver (potential get-away scene) and to help them move around quickly. Of course, he's going to playing ball for the Reclaimers who care currently holding his entire body hostage. I'll try to think of what stake the Reclaimers will have in this election and what possible incentive they would have to want Campbell to win. Anyhoo, I think it would make sense for Mack to hang back and wait for Emma and Cass to finish investigating since they're a hell of a lot more experienced than he is.

<Snipped quote by Hillan>

BEARDED MAN WAS UNABLE TO HEAR HIM. IN ONE SWIFT MOVEMENT HE LUNGES DOWNWARD AND GRABS HILLAN BY HIS STUPID FUCKING NECK THEN SLAMS HIS EQUALLY STUPID FUCKING FACE INTO THE BAR ITSELF, HIS MASCULINE STRENGTH SENDING THE MAN THROUGH THE WOODEN STRUCTURE IN A FEAT OF HERCULEAN STRENGTH.

"FUCK YOURSELF."


THAT FUCKING WOODEN STRUCTURE WAS THE BORK LAZER'S GODDAMNED CHAIR. THE BORK LAZER FELL ON HIS PUDGY ASS, A BIG ASS BAR BURGER STILL IN HIS FLABBY JAW. HE LOOKED AROUND FOR THE OFFENDER, HIS EYES TURNING TO SLITS WHEN HE SAW HIM.

THE BEARDED MAN.

THE BORK LAZER ROARED AND BEGAN PUSHING HIS ABSOLUTE UNIT OF A BODY TOWARDS THE BEARDED MAN PLOWING THROUGH THE ENTIRE CROWD OF FIGHTERS. A COLONY OF ANTS-MAN FELL INTO HIS GLUTTONOUS MOUTH AS PEOPLE WERE SLOBBER-KNOCKED BY HIS MASSIVE PAWS. HALF-LIZARD MUTANTS WERE PUMMELLED. EDGY EMO WANNABE VIKINGS WERE STOMPED ON. HE THREW A MIDGET MIDGET THROUGH THE WINDOW, CAUSING A CAR ALARM TO GO OFF. HE GRABS THE BEARDED MAN, HOISTING HIM UP IN THE AIR AND THEN, WHISPERING IN HIS EAR.

" WELCOME TO SUPLEX CITY, BITCH!"

THE BORK LAZER, GRABBING THE BEARDED MAN BY HIS CHEST, JUMPS UPWARDS, BOTH OF THEM CRASHING THROUGH THE ROOF OF THE BOOR BEFORE MAKING ANOTHER HOLE IN THE ROOF AS THE BORK LAZER HOLDS THE BEARDED MAN IN A GERMAN SUPLEX, GIVING HIM A FACE-TO-FACE MEETING WITH THE GROUND.


LET'S DO THIS.
@AdobeFlash

Scouter-Type Object that can complete biometric scans on most humans.


Vegeta, what does the scouter say about his injury level?
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