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So many greaat writes here ... who's going to submit for the Microfiction & Poetry contest #14 - new beginnings
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Call me Stryder, call me Brodie, your choice. I have been roleplaying for a few years starting in the time of the great pandemic. I have discovered I am a bit of a chameleon, always trying to match the length and style of my roleplaying partners.

Starting in the dark days of Omegle, I discovered that there were people interested in stories with a plot and something long term. Since then I have moved on, and hopefully forward, from one paragraph writing to multi-paragraph pieces that are carefully written and actually proofread.

I am just beginning to figure out the multi-character role play but in the past only focused on 1 to 1. In that style, I (we) have written role plays that have been slice of life, fantasy, dystopian, and more. The story has always been important, and the slow burning romance more valued than something quick and messy. As one partner likes to say ... substance over smut.

I have a few role plays going on with different partners but I am always up to meet new people, exchange ideas and create new stories. If you are interested send me a message here or we can chat more in Discord (just send me your details and we can connect).


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The voice was loud and carried from the dock up to the pathway where Piper and Matt were standing.

“Sit down! Both of you! Now!"

The counsellor wasn’t big, but her voice was commanding. Matt turned a little and watched as the campers continued duelling with paddles. Sparring with their makeshift wooden swords, the two boys were laughing, having the time of their lives. The pony-tailed counsellor blew her whistle again and began to move closer to the edge of the water. When Matt saw the scowl on her face, he shook his head, “Oh those guys are in trouble.”

He laughed out loud, when Piper added, "Yep... Somebody's about to lose canoe privileges."

Not wanting to miss the action, Matt looked back to the docks. Almost every camper had their eyes on the two boys standing in their canoes, wobbling as they tried to maintain their balance. Kids in the lake froze at the sound of the whistle, and most stood waist-deep in the water, waiting to see what would happen.

"You can go watch if you want." Piper added.

“You coming too?” he asked.

When he didn’t hear a reply, he turned back to Piper but the red-haired girl had already pivoted away and started to walk toward the shoreline, leaving him on his own. For a second or two, he looked at her and wondered why she had left. Had he said something wrong, laughed when he should have been quiet.

Unsure what to do, Matt glanced back to the dock. The counsellor had moved into the water and was now standing knee deep in the lake. Although the two canoe combatants had fallen back into their seats, most of the kids had their eyes fixed on the lake. It seemed like everyone was waiting for the arrival of their counsellor and probably wondering what punishment would face the boys.

Sensing the drama was coming to an end, he looked back to Piper, but the girl had wandered farther away and hadn’t even glanced back. Not knowing anyone down at the lake, Matt felt alone. He looked back to the recreation cabin but the path was empty. Even Brody hadn’t shown up yet and he was probably still taking care of the injured kids or cleaning up their blood.

Looking towards the forest, Matt felt its pull. All the best stories happen under the canopy of trees, Bridge to Terabithia, the Hobbit, even Redwall. If Matt was ever going to write a story, or maybe have a real adventure, maybe the forest was the best place to start.


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Pines Holler Fairgrounds · July 4th
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Elias glanced back toward the rows of midway games they had just walked past. Bright lights flashed above faded signs and the cacophony of voices, bells and cheers beckoned them closer.

"Actually..." he said, nodding toward the booths. "Before we go riding the Ferris wheel, let’s try the games. There has to be something here that isn’t rigged."

Elias took a few steps backward and looked at Anna Lou. She was still brushing at the powdered sugar on the front of her shirt, only managing to spread it around even more. It made him laugh softly. Somehow her smile had stayed exactly the same. Warm. Easy. Unassuming. The kind that made him want to see it again.

He nodded and gestured for her to follow.

"You already said the darts are rigged, so those are out." He studied the midway until his eyes settled on the water gun race with its paint chipped wooden horses. "How about we find one that's a little bit fair and gives us both a chance to win?"

His grin turned to a wider smile and he glanced back at Anna Lou.

"Maybe..." His eyes drifted toward the oversized stuffed animals hanging from the booths. "We can make sure you leave here with a prize."

"A prize," Anna Lou repeats, raising an eyebrow at him. "Bold of you to assume I need your help winning one." Still, she is already moving toward the water gun booth before she finishes the sentence, sugar-streaked shirt and all, because if there's one thing Anna Lou has never been able to resist, it's a challenge.

"But sure," she adds, glancing back at him over her shoulder.

"Let's see what you've got, Petterson."

Elias let out a quiet laugh, shaking his head as he followed her toward the booth.

"Confident," he said, glancing at the water guns lined up along the counter. "I should’ve expected that."

He stepped in beside Anna Lou and picked up the old plastic water pistol, testing it in his hand. "I’m just saying," he added as he settled into place, "if it was against anyone else, I’m pretty sure you’d win, but I’ve played this a whole lot of times."

A faint grin tugged at the corner of his mouth as he glanced over at her. Seeing her expression, he couldn’t help but laugh, "You’re not going to make this easy, are you?"

Shifting his stance, Elias gave Anna Lou a light bump with his hip. "So," he said, his grin becoming wider, "what happens if I win?"

Anna Lou picks up the water gun on her side and tests the trigger once to get a feel for it. The mechanism is stiff since decades of fairground use have not been kind to it, but the stream shoots true, hitting the faded wooden horse square in the chest. She nods to herself, satisfied. It is not about winning, really, but something about the way Elias had raised his eyebrows when she suggested the game makes her want to prove a point.

The carny behind the counter is a middle-aged man with a tired face and a tattoo on his forearm that has blurred into illegibility. He barely looks at them as they step up, gesturing vaguely at the triggers and says, "Winner gets a prize from the wall."

"I've played this a whole lot of times too," Anna Lou says mildly, not looking at Elias. She is instead focused on the target and on the way the water pressure feels in her hand. The hip bump does earn him a sideways look, however. "If you win, I'll… concede that mini-donuts are a perfectly acceptable summer food. Not better. Acceptable." She fully glances at him then, something slightly more deliberate in it than the easy warmth of the last hour. "But if I win, you carry whatever I pick off that prize wall all the way to the Ferris wheel and you answer one question. Honestly." She looks back at the target before he can ask what the question is.

The carny grunts. "Ready when you are."

Elias looked over at Anna Lou and smiled, wondering what question she had in mind. Before he could think about it any longer, the carny slapped the lever down, the bell clanged, and the race began.

Already behind, Elias squeezed the trigger. The stream of water struck the target just off-center before he adjusted and finally found the center of the bull's-eye. Beside him, Anna Lou's gun was hissing steadily, the two wooden horses creeping forward almost perfectly in sync, but hers was already half a horse length ahead.

"You've definitely done this before," he laughed, never taking his eyes off the target.

The horses slid forward together, neither gaining more than an inch until….

"Damn..." he said with a laugh, still squeezing the trigger. "You left out that you were really good at this."

The race is over before Anna Lou fully registers it. One moment, she is squeezing the trigger, her stream steady and true. The next moment, the bell clangs and the carny gestures at the prize wall indifferently and clearly a little bored. Anna Lou blinks. The water gun is still in her hands, the trigger still depressed like Elias’s, a thin trickle of water dribbling from the nozzle onto her shoes.

"I told you I'd played before," she says, and there is a faint breathlessness in her voice that she does not entirely recognize. She finally sets the water gun down on the counter, her fingers tingling slightly from the effort.

"You said you played before..." he answered back with a grin. "Only thing, you didn’t mention being Pines Holler’s best.."

"You should have probably stopped talking. It definitely affected your aim." She says it lightly, teasing, but her eyes are still on the horse that sits frozen at the finish line. She keeps her eyes there and thinks, despite having nothing to do but squeeze a trigger and wait, that she had meant what she said back at the funnel cake stall about genuinely not having known what she wanted to study. Education had been the closest thing to an answer she could find because she was good with people and good at explaining things, and was clearly good at this, too.

But reasonable and wanted had never quite been the same thing for her, and Anna Lou had known that even then, at seventeen, filling out the deferral form at the kitchen table while her father iced his back in the next room. She had just never figured out what she actually wanted instead.

"Pick your prize, miss," the carny says then. He gestures at the prize wall, and Anna Lou looks at Elias, a small smirk on her face. She does not gloat often, but when she does, she likes to do it properly.

"Told yuhhh," she says, drawing the word out just slightly. "Again."

Turning his head, Elias catches the grin on her face, "Yeah, you did. Next time, I’ll make sure to practice first.”

Anna Lou surveys the prize wall after that, taking her time as her eyes move slowly across the rows of stuffed animals. The stuffed bears are too obvious. The oversized bananas are funny, but impractical. The generic cartoon characters, like the faded SpongeBob and a knockoff Pikachu, feel like they belong to someone else's childhood. But then her eyes land on it. A strawberry approximately the size of a small child, red and improbable and decorated with a grinning felt face. The smile is wide, and the eyes are mismatched buttons, and there is a small green stem on top that looks like it has been merely glued on.

It is the most ridiculous thing she has ever seen, and Anna Lou loves it immediately.

She points at it. "That one."

The carny follows her gaze, grunts, and reaches up to retrieve the strawberry from its hook, handing it over without comment. The strawberry is, in fact, enormous. It is also surprisingly light, filled with the kind of cheap polyester stuffing that has probably been inside prizes since the 1980s. Anna Lou accepts it with both arms, cradling it like a child, before she turns and holds it out to Elias with a perfectly pleasant expression.

"You know the deal," she says.

Shaking his head, Elias chuckled, a grin spreading across his face, "The strawberry? Really?"

He reached out and took the oversized berry from Anna Lou, giving it a light squeeze. "Yeah… a deal’s a deal."

Seeing more people drifting toward the rides, Elias shifted his stance. He looked at the girl in front of him and couldn’t help but smile. Everything about the night felt easy. Talking to Anna Lou, playing the game, it was fun. For one single moment, that space between heart beats, something quiet settled in his chest. He wondered if he had been wrong. He had shut out the people of Pines Holler for too long, spent too long expecting judgment from friends, family and strangers. But standing here with Anna Lou, there was none of that. Just ease.

"So you said something about a question."

Glancing towards the Ferris wheel in the distance, then back at her. "Do you want to ask it now, or after we get in line?"

"Now's good," Anna Lou says, falling into step beside him with her hands in her pockets now that the strawberry has been successfully transferred. The Ferris wheel is visible above the roofline ahead of them, its lights turning slow and steady against the darkening sky. It is beautiful in a way that makes people stop and stare and forget what they were about to say. Anna Lou does not allow its beauty to distract her, however. Instead, she takes a breath and feels the words gathering in her chest.

"So, I heard something interesting recently," she says, keeping her voice conversational. She does not want to sound like she is accusing him of anything. "While I was working. About Husker's. Something about you and…Virginia?" She glances sideways at him briefly just enough to gauge his reaction without making it obvious that she is gauging anything at all. The fairground lights catch the side of his face, and she wonders what she is hoping to see there. Surprise? Denial? Confirmation of…something?

Either way, Anna Lou looks ahead again and at anything that is not that expression.

"So… I guess my question is," she continues, "should I know something about that? Before we get on the Ferris wheel?"

Elias blinked, surprised by the question. For a second he looked up to the Ferris wheel instead of answering, then he let out a quiet laugh, mostly to himself.

"Well..." he said, scratching the stubble on his cheek,"You have to love Pine’s Holler. Rumours spread around here faster than truth."

His smile lingered, and then he continued, "Virginia came into Huskers a few nights ago." He glanced over at Anna Lou before looking back toward the rides. "She was having a rough night."

He repositioned the oversized strawberry under his arm before he continued, "She didn't have anywhere to stay. At least nowhere she felt safe going."

A small shrug followed as he breathed in deep. He hoped the question was innocent but he couldn’t help but worry about Pines Holler and the judgements that followed at every corner.

"I've got a spare bedroom, so I told her she could stay there for the night."

He met Anna Lou's eyes, letting the glance linger,"That's all it was."
After a moment he added,"She slept in one room, I slept in the other. She left the next morning after breakfast. Nothing more, honestly."

He smiled faintly, almost embarrassed.”It didn't really feel like there was another choice. You know, I figured if my sister had ever been in that situation, I'd hope somebody would've done the same for her."

Anna Lou listens and watches his face while he talks. She sees the earnestness in him, the decency at the coaches' table. And she believes him. She believes him immediately and without much deliberation. It is not that she is naive. She has been lied to before by people who smiled and said the right things and meant none of them. She has learned to be careful because of this and to wait and see before she trusts. But something about Elias is different. Something about the way he tells the story makes her feel like she is seeing and hearing the real him.

"Okay," she says, and the word is simple, but it carries the weight of everything she is not saying. "That was a good thing you did. For her. This place could use more of that."

Elias held her gaze for a moment, considering the reply, measuring her expression. Her question had surprised him but he hadn't realized how much he wanted Anna Lou to believe him.

"Thanks," he said, the word coming out quieter than he'd intended. "I only did what I thought was right."

He shifted the giant strawberry prize higher under his arm, glancing toward the Ferris wheel as more and more people began to head in that direction.

He looked back at Anna Lou."I'm glad you asked instead of just believing whatever you heard. Not everyone would do that."

He drifted a little closer, his smile widening. "We've got a strawberry to get to the top of the Ferris wheel … unless you have any more questions."

"No more questions. For now," she says, though the qualifier slips out before she can stop it, which earns him a sideways look that is mostly exasperation directed at herself. "You know," she says, glancing at the strawberry tucked under his arm, "I think that's the best prize I've ever won. The watergun wasn’t even rigged or anything either."

Elias noticed the pause between her words and looked at Anna Lou with a genuine smile. He chuckled quietly when she added, "For now,"but he didn't comment. If she wanted to ask another question later, he had nothing to hide.

When her eyes drifted back to the oversized strawberry, his eyes followed, and he tucked it a little more securely beneath his arm."It is pretty amazing," he said, giving it another light squeeze. "And yes, you won it fair and square... though I still think you were distracting me."

Shaking his head, he laughed as he looked toward the Ferris wheel. Its lights turned slowly against the darkening sky, and the line of couples waiting beneath it seemed to grow longer by the minute.
"Come on," he said. "If we wait much longer, we'll end up watching the fireworks from the ground instead of the top."

Without another word, he started toward the line, the giant strawberry tucked beneath one arm. When they reached the entrance gate to the ride, he pulled it open and stepped aside, letting Anna Lou go first.

Anna Lou steps through the gate and joins the line, which has grown long enough that they will have a good while longer to wait. The crowd has thickened in the past few minutes, and the Ferris wheel turns slowly above them, each gondola swaying slightly as it crests the top.

She tilts her head back to look at it properly. It is not the biggest Ferris wheel she has ever seen; she knows that intellectually. There are bigger ones, fancier ones, but this one is hers. It has always been hers.

"You know, I used to come here every year as a kid," Anna Lou says then, more to the wheel than to Elias. "My dad would always let me pick one thing to do and one thing to eat. I picked this every time. And the funnel cake was always the food. Obviously."

She glances at him sideways, a small smile tugging at her mouth. She can remember it now, the feeling of her father's hand in hers, the way he would lift her to see over the crowd, and the patient way he listened to her chatter about which colours she liked best on the wheel's lights. She had not thought about that in years. Or maybe she had, but she had not let herself feel it.

"You're going to like the view. I promise." Because she has. She has seen this view under every kind of sky. She has seen it with her father, with her mother, and with friends who have since moved away and rarely come back. She has seen it alone, too, during times when she needed to remember that the world was bigger than the counter at Huskers.

But she has never seen it with Elias Petterson.

@Ducksworthgreat to see this post. @Lady Aryaand I have been continuing but looking forward to having the other campers meet us at the dock.


“Cool,” Matt exclaimed, when Piper mentioned the stories and legends of the camp.

But when she quickly added, "Don't worry. There's nothing scary in the woods. It's just a story the counsellors make up so you don't wander off and get lost,” he frowned just a little and answered, “Aww, I knew it was too good to be true.”

Turning his head, he gazed out towards the trees that guarded the two ends of the beach. The enormous evergreen trees stood like sentinels, watching over a kingdom, and immediately Matt thought of the Old Forest in The Lord of the Rings. Remembering the place where Frodo met Tom Bombadil, his mind began racing. He already had the title for his next story … The Guardians of the Woods.

Looking around, Matt saw more and more of the canoes being pulled out and taken into the water. Piper didn’t seem like she was in any hurry, and he relaxed just a little as she began to explain the camp. When she nodded towards the campers, he noticed the kids who were swimming, some wearing life jackets, some using inner tubes. Seeing the boys wrestling on the floating dock made him laugh and he thought about last summer when his family had gone camping and he and his sister had tried to push his brother Danny into the lake.

As soon as Piper mentioned baseball, Matt looked back at her, with a hopeful expression. Maybe she played the game. Maybe she knew who Bret Saberhagen and Mark Davis were. When she mentioned her dad liked the Braves, Matt grinned, "My dad says they're getting better. They've got Tom Glavine and he's awesome."

Before he could ask if she played baseball, Piper talked about soccer and mentioned she liked running. Excited about every sport and knowing a little about every league he grinned, “Did you watch the World Cup last summer? West Germany was so good.”

Piper just smiled back and when she asked if he played baseball, he answered quickly. “Yeah, I play on the Cubs. I’m a shortstop but I like soccer too. I sort of play every sport. Baseball, football, soccer. I even tried hockey but I’m not very good at skating.”

Realizing he was talking too much, he remembered his sister’s words and her advice before camp. Not everybody likes sports like you do. So don’t talk to everybody like you are with Danny or your buddies. Maybe you’re going to learn something new when you go to that place.

Remembering the artwork he'd seen back in the recreation hall, Matt asked, "What about you? Do you mostly do art, or do you play sports too?"

Before Piper could answer, one of the counsellors blew the whistle again, and the sound immediately caught everyone’s attention.

Matt glanced toward the water, then back at Piper. Had he missed something? Was there something everyone else knew that he didn’t?

“So what’s that about?” he asked. “Do we have to go down there too?”
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Perhaps! I'm sneaky.


Very sneaky
@O O All of these would be awesome! Cupid's bow would be really funny. Shooting two enemies and watching them fall in love...


so, if the agents are allowed to use the relics ...
Helm of Darkness
Thor’s hammer
or what about the Elder Wand, Invisibility Cloak,

So many great possibilities
Sounds interesting. There are so many possibilities, for relics, and the hunt to
find, or the quest to control.

If you’re looking for agents, I was thinking about the newbie on the job. Perhaps stumbling into something he shouldn’t or tempted to try relics that shouldn’t be touched.


Matt watched as the ball rolled towards the girl and settled at the heel of her shoe. He could almost hear the voices of his two best friends teasing and making their opinions known.

Tobias would have cringed, reminded him that girls have cooties, and that the ball would need to be disinfected. Mackenzie, on the other hand, would have laughed, said something like “smooth,” and then told him to go talk to the girl, maybe ask her out.

Matt knew everything was changing in his world. He wasn’t like either of his friends. Mack, who was exactly four months older than Matt, was always talking about girls now, especially Kelly Kapowski from Saved by the Bell. He wanted to watch MTV all the time and kept talking about going to the mall to check out the girls who worked at Orange Julius.

Tobias wasn’t ready for any of that. He only wanted to play sports. Girls still had cooties and definitely germs. When Melissa Jameson told him she liked him, he stayed home from school for three days, five if you include the weekend, and he didn’t want anything to do with her after that.

Matt was somewhere in the middle, he figured girls were... well... just girls. He wasn’t afraid of girls like Tobias, but he wasn’t like Mackenzie, ready to have a girlfriend and hoping every birthday party would be a boy-girl party and include seven minutes in heaven.

When the red-haired girl turned around and picked up the ball, Matt was ready to apologize, but when the girl asked if he had lost the ball, he only nodded, and before he could say sorry, she tossed it back with an easy underhand throw, and it landed in his glove.

He was surprised when she asked if he was the new kid. It wasn’t the question that surprised him, but that she had noticed him. He looked at her again and nodded. “Yeah, I just got here today. I’m going to be here all summer.”

When Piper laughed about the chaos in the recreation cabin, Matt let out a small breath and chuckled back. “There was a lot of blood. When that one kid fainted, I…” He stopped, realizing how silly it probably sounded, but he saw the red-haired girl was still waiting for him to finish. “I thought we were going to need an ambulance or something.”

As soon as she introduced herself, Matt answered back. “I’m Matt ... and I’m sorry about the baseball. I didn’t mean to hit you with it.”

Before Piper had a chance to reply, he looked at her and then bit his lip. After a second, he asked, "I'm not even sure what I'm supposed to do now. Do I need to find a counsellor, or do people just grab a canoe?"



The sound was loud enough to make Matt jump. One long, loud blast boomed through the camp, and with the sound of the bullhorn, campers jumped from their seats and everyone started teeming toward the doorways.

“Canoes,” called out one of the girls.

Two of the boys nearby answered back, “Come on, let’s get to the red one. It’s the fastest.”

Unsure what to do, Matt looked back to Brody, hoping for some direction, but the counsellor was still focussed on the injured boys, helping them get to their feet. Turning back to the doorway, he saw every other kid moving through the doors and heading down to the beach. Squeezing his baseball glove a little harder, he pushed the ball deep into the palm and started to follow the crowd.

Shuffling slowly, Matt made his way through the door and down the stairs of the recreation cabin. Pausing for a moment, he watched the red-haired girl with the crazy-good artwork pass by, adjusting her backpack on her shoulders, knowing exactly where to go. Turning around, he looked back at the cabin. No one else was coming, and there was no choice but to continue.

Holding the baseball in his hand, Matt began to toss it into the air. Keeping one eye on the path ahead, he continued along the winding trail, but every step or two he lobbed the ball upward and counted the seconds until it landed back in his mitt. Distracted for a moment by the towering evergreen tress and the sights around him, he paused to take it all in. One more time, he threw it a little higher, and when it landed easily in his glove he looked up and noticed he had lost sight of the artist girl. He gripped the ball and started to jog a little faster toward the docks.

The winding trail began to slope downhill toward the lake, and the campers gathered together in groups, laughing and calling out to one another. With his destination in sight, Matt relaxed again, and every now and then he tossed the ball a little higher, his eyes following it before dropping back to the path.

Ahead of him, he spotted the red-haired girl from the crafts cabin. She walked at her own speed, her backpack slung over one shoulder, seemingly in no hurry to reach the docks.

Matt quickened his pace when he saw the canoes and heard the excitement near the water. Just as he reached the bottom of the hill, another kid darted across the trail in front of him. Matt sidestepped to avoid him, but his toe caught a tree root hidden beneath the pine needles, and he stumbled forward.
The baseball popped out of his hand, bounced once on the hard-packed path, skipped between two pairs of feet before rolling to a stop against the heel of the red-haired girl's running shoe.

Matt froze for half a second, wondering if anyone else had noticed.
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