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Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@Phoenix347 Forge of Mars and Scutson SC are accepted.

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@KaiserElectric Thank you for making corrections to Johanna. However I'd like you to remove all instances of mechsuits and replace them with mobile suits or mobile workers. Mechsuits isn't a term in this setting and doesn't accurately reflect the roleplay as a whole.

Now onto the BUN-E:

•LeapFrog Component
-Salvaged from an obscure mechsuit add-on, the Leapfrog is a modification that reinforces the leg joints and allows the thruster to perform a quick booster fire, effectively allowing BUN-e to perform high and long-distance jumps as needed.

Again, remove mechsuit and replace it with mobile suit. I should note that all mobile suits and decent mobile workers are capable of making thruster-assisted jumps and leaps. If the Leapfrog Component is meant to allow faster thruster-assisted jumps by eliminating any delays to ignition and providing immideate acceleration, you should try to specify that.

Also I'd like you to specify the caliber of the TMKF-Rifle.

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@KaiserElectricI said this before, but wireless communication isn't very reliable or long range due to Wilberforce particles. And I told you specifically she'd need to wire into the physical lines running between the habitats. However for the sake of simplicity we can say that she's hacked into/modified the high power transmitters attached to the habitats and is using them as ad-hoc signal relays to reach all of/most of Venus.

Also, LAGO is cute and reminds me of Haro. Though I'd like you to go into more detail on how Johanna made them since Artificial Intelligences available to Zern and the public aren't common in the setting.

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@Phoenix347Let me know when you're finished with the Forge of Mar's technical history.

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

Gilbert Andreas König and the Tommy Sniper Custom are accepted! Really like the Sniper Custom, it feels very appropriate for the limited tech we have at this point in the RP while still feeling meaningful. Also I'm happy that you continued the rarity-color scheme for the weapons and design features.Feel free to post this in the character section when you're finished. @Caduceus

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@Phoenix347Arthur Sharp is ACCEPTED

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@veenknight343Ayame Izumi is good, I don't see any major issues in her background. She is ACCEPTED. Feel free to post her in the character section.

@glwgameplayer The Sowerberry is a very good design and a fitting edition for the John Carter Project. Thank you for listening to my feedback and making a Gundam fitting for the setting, but still lining up with what you wanted out of it.

Denzel also looks great, though there's a piece of broken formatting in his background. The 'code' command used to give the computer effect doesn't allow any other formatting inside of it.

The Rabble Rouser is also an OK custom Mobile Worker as well, and fitting for Denzel.

Denzel, the Sowerberry, and the Rabble Rouser are all ACCEPTED.

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@KrayzikkOmeva is ACCEPTED!

Excellent work on her and good choice of picture!

Mobile Suit Gundam: LIFELINE

@vietmykeACCEPTED! Great work! :)

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@veenknight343Yeah, everyone should join the discord, there is a lot that needs to be talked over.