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I just meant which ever one was an early morning person that you would want to meet Tierra. And collabs are fun. As long as we get past the team selection post, we should be able to do it.

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That would be interesting. She would be whirling her swords, thinking about her frustrations and remembering the source of her distrust when an older student interrupts and they chat. It also would be a good intro into the story for that NPC student. Would you want to collab on that when we get to that point?

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I'll work on that. If I could do it right, it would probably help this scene I'm thinking of, post teams, where Tierra wrestles with all her frustrations of being the only Faunus on her team while doing early morning weapon practice. (Kind of thinking she would be a crack of dawn kind of person)

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What do you guys think of my writing style? Is it too over the top? Should I have more dialogue for my character, internal or otherwise? What could I do to improve it?

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Well, maybe you can try to send them a convo and see if they see it on their email or if they check in before the second round closes.

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Unfortunately, they're also the ones who haven't been on all day. And Phantom isn't sure if convoing them will send an alert to their e-mail.

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The only two who aren't in a collab at the moment are MadNinja324 and SilverWolfAngel.

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No it's OK, I was just worried about being late with the collab. I kind of work on the when it's due, turn it in framework.

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OK, got it. Just wondering.

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