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Welcome true believers; welcome to All-Star Marvel, an intoxicating land where creativity for creativity's sake can take priority and enable you to render stories and events you could only have dreamed of in all of your previous mundanity. We welcome you to a unique narrative opportunity to take any Marvel character character and re-imagine them in a way that makes them pleasurable for you to write unique and original stories with. In this universe no events in the main Marvel comics continuity are considered canon. It is entirely contained within the forum and within your imagination. Am I over-egging it? Perhaps. It's still pretty cool to see. Whether you're one for emotional drama or a sucker for physical trauma, the vast range of characters available could fit any genre or any purpose you could reasonably imagine. Is your interest piqued by a fresh interpretation of Bruce Banner that you really wanna try out? Own it. Love Thor but hate that darned old hammer? Sling it. Think that The Whizzer is in need of a drastic revival? That's good too. No-one is off limits here. Not even Doop. As long as they have appeared in a canonical Marvel tale on either the page or the screen they're free for refurbishment. Here, the MARVEL UNIVERSE is yours to mold.
Your character must have appeared somewhere in one of the many media that Marvel distributes (comics, films, television, video games, etc.). Therefore, you may not use characters owned by other comic companies (like Batman) or original characters. However, you are free to take liberties in the creation of your character.
Character Sheet template: Player Name: Character You Wish To Play: Moral Alignment (Hero, Villain, Walking the Line): Affiliation (what group/team/organization, if any, is your character affiliated with?): Character Origin & Backstory: Powers and Abilities (What can your character do? What can't they do?): Sample Story Arcs: Give 2-3 ideas on where you want to go with your character. Sample Post (This is used as an introduction to your writing – try to keep it to around three paragraphs or more and try to include dialogue):
Quick thanks to ErsatzEmperor and others who ran the previous iterations of this RP.
Post up! The First Ever (since I have been part of this roleplay at least) Create-A-Hero No Prize will go to whoever can guess who the mysterious character who has come to Zac and Kelly's rescue! The mystery and anticipation continues until next time on the (mis)Adventures of Zac and Kelly!
Heh. I actually lost the original image while I was editing the sheet. So I used a similar one.
FacePunch
Sounds reasonable
Zac WIlson | Kelly Brown
Victoria elegantly walked into the living room of Zac and Kelly’s apartment. Since Kelly, in her rage, forgot to lock the front door behind her when she came inside, Victoria let herself inside the apartment. And even if the apartment had been locked, she could have used her magical knowledge to break the lock on the door. “You two don’t mind me crashing the party, don’t you?” Victoria asked the two young metahumans, although she did not really care for what answer they were going to give her. “Why are you even here?” Zac asked, still unsure what in the world was happening. His current girlfriend believes that he is cheating on her with Victoria, who somehow made it seem like that was the truth. But the weirdest thing was Kelly's violence. Zac knew that she could get a little defensive, as he saw when ‘dream-verse’ Aubrey was with them for that short period of time. What has gotten into her? “To take vengeance on someone who has wronged me in the past.” Victoria responded. However, both Zac and Kelly were shocked to see that she was pointing at Kelly rather than Zac. “What did I ever do to you? I have never met you before a few days ago!” Kelly said. “Oh, you might not have seen me in this form before, but you have meet me in this other appearances.” While Victoria spoke, her hands began to glow. She raised her hands above her head and slowly lowered them down to her sides. As she did this, whatever magic she was using began to morph her appearance. Once the transformation was complete, before the two young metahumans stood Kelly’s old high school boyfriend during her senior year. “Wow, Zac.” Kelly said to her boyfriend as she turned to him, “You were cheating on me with a guy? I didn’t know you were into that stuff.” Before Zac could again deny that he was cheating on Kelly, Victoria (who now looked like Kelly’s ex-boyfriend) spoke up. “Actually, my true appearance is the one that you just saw, minus some cosmetic modifications. So, that would make you the one who had a Lesbian relationship in high school.” Victoria (still in the ex-boyfriend’s body) snapped her fingers. Out of nowhere, the lyrics of a Katy Perry song began to play.
I kissed a girl and I liked it, the taste of her cherry chapstick.
“I think I’m going to be sick.” Kelly muttered as she rushed into the bathroom. After Kelly had left the room, Victoria snapped her fingers again and her original appearance returned. “Um…” Zac began to speak, “I might have missed it, but why exactly are you taking revenge on Kelly?” Victoria laughed out loud before she answered his question. “Oh, I just made all that stuff up. It seems like it worked pretty well, don’t you think? Just use some magic to learn some personal information and then craft a perfect lie that would set her off.” “Then, why in the world are you really here?” Zac asked. “Well, the power of foresight is one of the perks of knowing magic. I have seen that you two will be a thorn in my side in the future. So, I decided that I might as well take you two out now before you actually become anything close to a competent super-hero. Don't they always say that preventative care is always better than trying to cure it after the fact?” “Wait, why did you just tell us your plan? Isn’t that a big ‘no-no’ for super-villains?” “It’s not like you can do anything about it.” Victoria told Zac. Before Zac could move, Victoria muttered two words:
Lumina Gorgonis
A small puff of black smoke appeared next to Victoria, billowing every second until it had grown to a considerable size. Then suddenly, from within the middle of the cloud appeared a giant eye. As soon as the eye opened wide, Zac began to slow down. So much so that he was almost as still as a statue. In fact, his whole body and the clothes that he was wearing had turned to stone, as if Medusa herself had laid her eyes upon the young man. Finally Kelly reemerged from the bathroom after she had recovered from the lie that Victoria had fed to her. “I still have a bone to pick with…” But before she could finish her sentence, Kelly saw that her boyfriend was now entirely composed of stone. “What did you do?” “Oh, I thought a few seconds ago you were about ready to beat the pulp out of poor old Zac. What changed?” Victoria asked with a calm voice, almost as if she was trying to egg her on. “I didn’t want something like this to happen!” Kelly responded. She had already moved right next to her petrified boyfriend. “I just wanted him to learn a lesson. But nothing like this.” “How cute. This would make a perfect statue.” Victoria commented as Kelly wrapped her arms around Zac.
Lumina Gorgonis
The Gorgon-eyed cloud again appeared, but now it had a new target. Again the summoned smoke opened its eye, causing Kelly to become petrified just as quickly as her boyfriend had been. “I love that spell.” Victoria spoke aloud, although she knew that no one was going to respond to her. “Two perfect dactylic feet. Too bad this little discursion was way too simple. Did I seriously believe that these two would actually pose a threat to me?” Victoria began her departure from Zac and Kelly’s apartment when suddenly she heard something stirring in the young metahumans’ bedroom. The silver-clad sorceress was intrigued by the noise: Zac and Kelly were supposed to be the only people in the apartment. Victoria wondered if she was going to have some ‘fun’ with an unsuspecting guest. When she had walked up to the entrance of the bedroom, Victoria saw that their bedroom window was open. Outside the window, she saw a large tree rustling in the wind. Disappointed that what she hoped for as an actual person turned out just to be a tree, Victoria rolled her eyes, not believing that she could have been fool by something that was not even sentient. BANG The bedroom door swung on its hinges, crashing into Victoria’s face. The magic user was caught off guard by the blow to the face, causing her to lose her balance and stumble backwards. Victoria, recomposing herself after the impact, looked up back toward the door, seeing her assailant standing in the doorway. Since the lights inside the bedroom were not on, the darkness shrouded the appearance of her attacker. “And you’re supposed to be what?” Victoria taunted.
Huh, really? I'd always assumed those heads from the Perseus statues were accurate. Learn somethin' new everyday. Fixed it. I think. Fixed that little line, too. I need to catch up on my Greek mythology sometime. It's all pretty interesting.
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This is what Medusa looks like in Greek vase art. Wait, did the image on the shield just change? I sear that Medusa face was on the shield!
In Mahz's Dev Journal 12 yrs ago Forum: News
Placing two spaces between sentences that run over into a second line causes the to sentences to overlap. Here is an example that shows this happening. "Mythology" and "The" are overlapping. I know that this was more of a "if Ares dies", but I don't think the potential of the Greek gods dying meshes well with Greek Mythology. The Greek gods are called the athanatoi (ἀθάνατοι, 'immortal, deathless') for a reason.
Dedonus
I see the overlapping.
ravenDivinity
Thanks. I don't see the overlapping, so I'll track down what's hatnin.
Mahz
I see it as well (Chrome on Windows 7).
Hank
I was using Chrome on Windows 7 when I saw this error. When I switched to Firefox, this error was not there. Edit: Here is a screenshot for those who cannot see the error.
In Mahz's Dev Journal 12 yrs ago Forum: News
Placing two spaces between sentences that run over into a second line causes the to sentences to overlap. Here is an example that shows this happening. "Mythology" and "The" are overlapping. I know that this was more of a "if Ares dies", but I don't think the potential of the Greek gods dying meshes well with Greek Mythology. The Greek gods are called the athanatoi (ἀθάνατοι, 'immortal, deathless') for a reason.
Character you have created: Chike Baatul Face on Shield
CFP
The face on the shield is actually Medusa's face. Don't let modern media fool you on Medusa. :D
Character you have created: Chike Baatul Hyperlink to Weapons
CFP
Your link is broken. I was able to find the page through google. After looking at the raw data of your post, it looks like you have duplicated "http//" in your hyperlink twice. Also, Theoi.
Character you have created: Chike Baatul Ares dying...
CFP
I know that this was more of a "if Ares dies", but I don't think the potential of the Greek gods dying meshes well with Greek Mythology. The Greek gods are called the athanatoi (ἀθάνατοι, 'immortal, deathless') for a reason. These Greek 'gods' are like the Asgardians from Marvel in the sense that they are not 'real' gods, but I do believe that killing a god is more of a Norse idea (Ragnorok, etc.). Off the top of my head, I can only think of Pan dying in Greek Mythology (Plutarch) and of Osiris of Egyptian Mythology (who was resurrected by Isis, if I remember correctly). The Greek 'gods' being wounded is fine. I just think death is a contradiction to how they are described (athanatoi). Also note that the Greek 'gods' live in a place similar to Asgard in Marvel comics (of course called Olympus).
@Nitemare Shape: I have posted my old character sheets in the character tab (now that BBCode is supported, which allowed me to copy and paste the sheet). Could you (or actually anyone for the matter of fact) look at my color choices for the character speech and let me know if any of them are too difficult to read? I am pretty comfortable with Iron Knight and Wasp (see her hider in Raptor's CS), but I was not sure whether or not Arachne and Raptor's colors were too dark.
Create a Hero RPG Application

Character you have created: Aubrey Adkins
Alias: Arachne

Speech Color: Standard Forum Text, FireBrick (B22222)

Character Alignment: Hero

Identity: Secret, only known (eventually) by her roommates

Character Personality:
If you were to ask Aubrey to describe herself with one word, it would be religious. She grew up in a conservative Catholic household, therefore is a devout Catholic. To those who are not quite as religious as she is, she might come off as a little bit too much sometimes. She is also on good terms with her family. While her religious and family life might be extremely stable, the rest of her life is somewhat unbalanced. She is unsure what she will be doing after college, even though she is a senior now. While she was set to earn a teaching degree, she is unsure whether that is what she desired to pursue. Furthermore, a Sociology degree (as a second degree option was not going to give her many choices, either. She has already become burnt out from school (4 years in both high school and college), having major senioritis. Her romantic life is not quite as stable either, for she had already gone through several different boyfriends since her senior year in high school, some ending more or less gracefully than others.

One thing just recently has begun to bother her. Recently, she was injected with the same serum that gave the Raptor (Zac Wilson) and the Wasp (Kelly Brown) their powers. However, unlike those two, Aubrey’s physical appearance has not changed at all (besides the wrist spinnerets). Aubrey is unsure whether she would spontaneously morph into some hideous monster at any moment. What had caused her to react to the serum differently? Was it her minor healing factor? Or is it something else?

Aubrey has slightly above average height for a woman (five foot nine) and has an athletic (but not extremely muscular) build. She has blonde hair and gray-blue eyes.

Uniform/costume:
Costume Pre-transformation (I promise she will not have this costume for long, probably until I finish her origin arc).


Costume Post-transformation
I was considering changing the brown on her new costume to silver/gray, but I have not made up my mind yet.


These two images give an idea how the spider lower body human upper body combination looks like. However, they are only inspirations, not exact images for Aubrey. Costume on first is not what Aubrey will wear...



I actually have a drawing that should show what her costume would be post-transformation. I just need to add the hair and costume design and it will be complete.

Origin Info/Details:
Aubrey Rose Adkins was born into what most people would consider a normal life. She was from a middle-class family around the Columbus, OH. She was heavily involved with sports, was Homecoming Queen her senior year in high school, even went to college at St. Henry’s University, a liberal arts Catholic university in Columbus. Everything seemed to be extremely normal, until late January this year arrived.

Aubrey’s life was turned upside down when she was kidnapped by a mad scientist (same man who gave Raptor and Wasp their powers) and subjected to an experiment involving the finally stabilized serum. Luckily for Aubrey, the Raptor and Iron Knight had infiltrated (not coordinated) where the scientist was holding her. Now, since she has escaped from the clutches of the mad scientist, Aubrey must attempt to learn to assimilate herself back into her ‘normal’ life. Or is this even possible?

Sports have always been part of Aubrey’s life, especially during high school. When she was in high school, if she was not currently at one sport’s practice, she was probably running off to another one. While this had given her practice at juggling multiple aspects of life at once, nevertheless it sometimes negatively affected her grades. Once she got to college, she had to pick one sport and stick with it. She picked soccer (one reason why was that she received a scholarship at her small university to play that sport). Therefore, she had to drop the others and focus on soccer (and school).

Hero Type:
Muscle/Acrobat (i.e. Spider-Girl)

Power Level:
B. City Level (Ex. Spider-Man, Cyclops)

Powers:
-Wall-Crawling: Arachne has the ability to create atomic attraction between herself and other objects, allowing her to adhere to numerous surfaces.
-Spider-Sense: Arachne possesses the ability to sense people’s movements through the miniscule vibrations she feels in the ground when people move and changes in air pressure. Along with an uncanny 6th sense that can detect danger (but not pinpoint it – Arachne must rely on the vibrations and air pressure for that), this allows Arachne to be quite an allusive target.
-Hybrid Bio-Mechanical Web-Shooters: Arachne has natural spinnerets in her wrists; however, she cannot eject them from her wrists like Spider-Man does in the original Spider-Man films with Toby McGuire. She can only pull the threads out like pulling out floss. However, Christopher Arthur III created a device that would draw the webs from her wrists and eject them, just like Spider-Man’s web-shooters.
-Superhuman Strength: Arachne can easily lift approximately 20 tons. She can lift more weight if she exerts herself. Arachne must also pull her punches against opponents without similar levels of durability and strength. When she “evolves” into her drider form, she can lift approximately 50 tons.
-Superhuman Speed: Arachne’s natural speed exceeds that of modern Olympic athletes. In other words, she could give Usain Bolt a run for his money.
-Superhuman Stamina: Arachne does not produce as many fatigue toxins while she physically exerts himself. She has to spend several hours under strenuous circumstances to feel impaired by these toxins.
-Superhuman Agility and Reflexes: Arachne is twice as flexible than a normal human, allowing her to perform acrobatic maneuvers that high-level gymnast would envy. Her reflexes are 20 times greater than an average human’s would be.
-Superhuman Durability: Arachne can take punishment that would severely injure or otherwise kill an average person. Arachne must roll with punches against her in order to prevent the assailant from breaking their limbs.
-Superhuman Sense of Equilibrium: Arachne can retain a perfect state of equilibrium, allowing her to remain oriented while crawling upside down and performing acrobatic moves.
-Resistance to Foreign Chemicals: Arachne’s metabolism allows her to be less effected by drugs and diseases.
-Immunity to Vampirism: Arachne has nothing to fear from the characters of Twilight...
-Superhuman Healing Factor: While not anywhere near as efficient as mainstream Wolverine’s healing factor, Arachne can significantly recuperate from injuries more quickly than they would otherwise normally take. She will eventually heal from any wound, however, the more serious the wound, the longer it will take it to heal.

Attributes:

Strength Level: 20 tons (50 tons when she permanently evolves into her drider form).

Speed/Reaction Timing Level: 30 MPH.

Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort: 3 hours.

Agility: 20X Human level (2x Flexible).

Intelligence: Average

Fighting Skill: Untrained

Resources: Minimal

Weaknesses:
-Vulnerable to Pesticides, especially ones targeted towards spiders
-Able to “run dry” of web fluid, if she uses too much.
-When she becomes a “drider”, she is vulnerable from attacks from behind because she cannot turn her body all the way around to deal with it.
-She is (over-time) invulnerable in body, but her spirit and mind do not have the same luxury.

Supporting Characters:
-Ashley Winston: One of Aubrey’s roommates. Half-Korean.
-Felecia Blackwood: One of Aubrey’s roommates.
-Kristin Harding: One of Aubrey’s neighbors and friends.
-Father Ryan: A mid-aged Catholic priest who resides in the Catholic Church on campus.
-Athena: Greek Goddess of Wisdom. Still feeling guilty about the transformation of the ancient Arachne into a spider, she has decided to provide her aid to Aubrey, whether or not Aubrey likes it.

Do you know how to post pictures on RPG boards?: Yes

Sample Post:Warning! Sample Post takes place after my planned story arc between Raptor and Iron Knight. Read at your own risk (although I don’t think there will be that much spoiling material in this sample).
Create a Hero RPG Application

Character you have created: Christopher “Chris” Arthur III (CA3 – pronounced like RG3)
Alias: Iron Knight. Also known by: Daedalos Mk. 5, Project Theophonos (god-slayer)

Speech Color: Standard Forum Text, Silver (C0C0C0)

Character Alignment: Hero

Identity: Secret, except to certain officials in STRIKE.

Character Personality: As a playboy billionaire, Christopher beats his drums at his own tempo. He’s business by day, party by night, although he allows his leaned back nature bleed into his business affairs. Beyond his business life, Christopher enjoys Greek culture and history, utilizing his companies funds to support archaeological digs in search of new finds in this field, even though they are rare. He is also protective of his half-sister, since she is his only family left (see Origin Info/Details for more info).

Uniform/costume:
Due to his side interest in ancient Greece (and history in a lesser extent), his armor has some influences from these time periods. The helmet in the suit shows this influence the best, since it resembles the helmet of the classical Greek hoplite. His armor also has an energy-powered long sword, inspired by the knights from the Medieval period. He also has a weapon what he calls the “Energy Javelin”, which was inspired by both the Homeric combat in the Iliad, where the Heroes would first throw a spear at one another before they engaged in hand-to-hand combat, and the Roman Pila, which would break on contact so that an enemy could not revenge kill with it. His armor has other, more conventional weapons, but these are the “out of the box” ones.

At first, I kind of struggled with what I wanted Iron Knight’s armor to look like. I knew I didn’t want him to look just like Iron Man. Furthermore, I had an idea in my head what I wanted it to look like, but I could not put it down in words or even draw it out. After a little brainstorming, I remembered that I saw my brother and his friend either looking at or making a website about Gundam Wing (I cannot remember which, I was still fairly young). Although I found out that they were giant robots from doing some internet research (but it doesn’t’ surprise me, since it is a Japanese show), I still thought it gave the robotic feel I wanted. I just would have to scale it down to human size (i.e. like Iron Man in a way). Therefore, I placed a link to an image that I thought could be used as an inspiration for the suit (but obviously not an exact copy).

There are several changes I would make to the suit. First, the Greek hoplite inspired helmet (it would look like a hoplite helmet, but there would not be any openings in the front, and there would not be a plume). I would remove the wing-like attachments on the shoulders, and everything below the waist would resemble Ultimate Iron Man more than the sample image. I would probably make the breastplate more flat and all the joints would have to be made so that a man could fit inside the suit. Also, the color scheme would be different shades of gray.

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Origin Info/Details:
Christopher Arthur III was born to Lexington Arthur II and Medea Arthur. The Arthurs were an extremely wealthy Virginian family, with its wealth tied both from inheritance from their ancestors and profit from the Arthur’s corporation, the Knight’s Corp. At age 16, Christopher graduated from MIT, specializing in Advanced Robotics and Electrical Engineering (he also picked up a minor in ancient Greek from a local college). Two years later, he received his Master’s. Christopher started to work in the Robotics Division at Knight’s Corp.

However, after his first graduation from college, Christopher’s life was turned upside down. His father had been involved in an affair for several years, which resulted in a child being born outside of wedlock. After Christopher received his Master’s degree, his father divorced his current wife and married his mistress. Five years later, a deranged Medea returned and killed herself along with Christopher’s father and his stepmother, leaving Christopher and his half-sister orphaned (who in their right mind would divorce someone by the name of Medea? That’s just asking for trouble). As a result of his father’s death, Christopher inherited both his family’s wealth along with his father’s company.

While Christopher did not have problem socializing with people through his life, he never allowed people to become extremely close to him, except for his childhood friend, Cynthia. While Christopher’s accelerated education robbed them of attending middle and high school together, they both continued to remain in contact. While Cynthia was by no means as intelligent as Christopher was, she was still quite smart for the average American student (top 5 in her graduating class) and she was a nice change of pace to talk to when you are constantly surrounded by super-geniuses. While Christopher desired that they became something more than just “friends”, but he did not want to risk ruining their current friendship if a romantic relationship did not work out. Even they went their separate ways, with Christopher running his father’s company and Cynthia becoming an Archaeologist, they still continued to find a way to keep in contact, even if it has to be emails and IM’s.

If someone asked him why he dubbed his armor “Daedalos”, he would give his usual response, that some terrorists in the Aegean held him up on an island and he created the suit to fly away, just as Daedalos fled from King Minos of Crete in Greek Mythology. However, this wasn’t the true story. Two years ago (from the beginning of this RP), his childhood friend developed a rare, but fatal and inoperative cancer. Christopher frantically developed his prototype robotic exoskeleton, designing it to keep her alive, while the chemotherapy, that would normally could not be used, destroyed the cancer. Christopher called the exoskeleton “Daedalos” because he hoped it would help free Cynthia from her cancer, just as Daedalos’s invention helped him escape Minos. However, Cynthia died before he could get his final product finished.

Shortly after his friend’s death, S.T.R.I.K.E. approached Christopher about his exoskeleton. They wanted Christopher to develop it into a mechanized armor that would allow normal humans to compete with the rising metahuman population, just in case something went out of hand. Since Christopher had already sunk a huge amount of his company’s resources into this project, he couldn’t say no.

Hero Type:
Power-Suit / Gray Matter (Super-Smart)

Power Level:
C. World Level (Ex. Flash, Superman)

Powers: Powers beyond the things listed in the “Attribute” (flight, strength, etc) will be listed here. Furthermore, Iron Knight can make revisions and updates to his armor to prepare the armor for different situations.
-Energy-based Sword
-Energy Pila
-Energy Shield: Iron Knight’s shielding must be activated to be used. Shielding must be lowered in order to use offensive weapons.
-Rockets and Missiles: Iron Knight has several different projectiles at his disposal to use against foes at a distance.

Attributes: Strength, Speed, Endurance, and Agility are at Normal Human levels when not in the Power Suit.

Strength Level: 100+ tons.

Speed/Reaction Timing Level: 100+ MPH; Flight: Mach 10.

Endurance at MAXIMUM Effort: Power Suit can remain powered for several hours. Due to the mechanical components associated with the power suit, the wearer of the suit does not have to expend as much physical energy as one normal person would if that person were doing the same activities. However, it still takes mental concentration to control the power suit.

Agility: 20X Human level.

Intelligence: Super-Genius

Fighting Skill: Untrained

Resources: Extreme

Weaknesses:
-Still a normal man under the suit.
-Armor can become overloaded if enough energy is pumped into the suit.
-Takes some time to prep suit for usage.

Supporting Characters (Does your character have a significant other? A mother? Friend? Who are they, what do they have to do with your character?):
-Veronica: Christopher’s half-sister. She is currently a freshman in high school.
-George: The Arthur family’s butler, helped raise both Chris and Veronica, especially the later when their parents died (“If Bruce Wayne and Tony Stark can have a butler, why can’t I?” ~CA3).

Do you know how to post pictures on RPG boards?: Yes (see last app).

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