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5 yrs ago
Current Remember, nobody actually enjoys roleplaying if there isn't at least five shameful fetishes uncovered by the 2nd page.
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7 yrs ago
Somebody stole my mood ring. I don't know how to feel about it.
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7 yrs ago
Let's be honest, it's far more satisfying and challenging to actually imagine what a character looks like than paste a hundred gifs of a celebrity and call it good.
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7 yrs ago
So, a team of players who are good at playing as a team in a team-based game are individually bad players. Seems kind of silly when you put it like that, no?
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7 yrs ago
My goal these days is to have an RP that can actually finish, or the very least, last a few years. I see way too many die on page one to take chances
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Lowering the site's value since January 2012.


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@Sep Yay! I even bought tickets.

Sorry about not really being around guys, I have barely been on my computer lately due to this awful sickness. Work is demanding a pound of flesh and I am getting home two hours late nearly every night because my workload hugely increased after my supervisor broke his knee in half.

Also, 12 day work weeks suck when you are trying to get better.
RIGHT! NOW THAT I'M FINALLY in good enough health to post again, what should I do?!


All the drugs! :D
Ohey, I made a post!
~| Day 2, 11:52-12:19 GST |~
~| Aboard the Kaggath, Prison Complex |~


“One of the many points Master Sela and I found reason to disagree on.” Tolun Fi lamented, continuing his physical examination on the wounded Xid. “The fact she didn’t accept your personality and tried to twist it into something that was more comfortable for her and others is a point of contention that I rather take issues with. I let you pursue your goals and never once asked you to change your behaviour to suit my tastes because it is simply who you were, and the Jedi Order has no jurisdiction mandating the self-identity of its members. I was never anything more than the cold, unfeeling scientist that took little effort to mingle with others in the order. They accommodated me, as I did for you.”

He handed Xid back his shirt, satisfied his ribs weren’t broken. “While empathy is a good quality to have for a Jedi, it can also be used against you, like any emotion. You would be foolish to think the Sith didn’t take notice of your affections and began to use them against you. They know you’re easy to provoke if someone else’s well-being is on the line, and part of being a Jedi is having the wisdom to know that you will have to make hard choices that benefit the greatest number of people.

“I tell you, time and time again, that no one else has your skills and if you become incapacitated or worse, then it will be you who potentially doomed all of the captives to slavery and death, unreachable by the rest of our Order. So, ask yourself; is Shiri or even myself worth more than everyone else in this cell block? These are the kinds of choices I’ve had to make for years as a Consular, knowing full well that many have died and suffered from the results of my mediation between conflicting factions. I wish to save as many of our fellow captives as possible, and I cannot do that if you aren’t using your head. Stop giving into your emotions. You are becoming less like the man I wished to ask to be my padawan and more like someone the Sith can mold into an apprentice.”

Tolun Fi stood, gazing down from his towering height at Xid. “Figure yourself out, Xid. I expected so much more from you.”

He was preparing to leave the bunk room when the cell doors opened and several Imperial troopers entered, accompanying a maroon-cloaked human woman with a lightsaber clinging from her belt. It was another Sith Tolun Fi had not yet encountered, so he studied her with great interest. She wasn’t physically robust, which didn’t necessarily amount for much, considering how some of the greatest Jedi sword masters and Force users the Kaminoan had witnessed were also physically unassuming, but her escort of guards was notable. Some Sith came with an escort, others did not. Was she worried about being outnumbered or surrounded, or did she simply like having an intimidating presence at her side? There were many things to learn from this woman, and little enough time to learn them.

However, she approached Xid, Tolun Fi found himself grinding his teeth, silently pleading for the Sith to take anyone else. The last thing Tolun Fi wanted was to see his friend like this, and their last words having been so harsh. As Xid labourously left the bed and allowed himself to be taken by the Lady Sith, Tolun Fi called out to him, “May the Force be with you.” It would have to suffice, and with what some would describe as a heavy heart, Tolun Fi watched Xid be taken away. Needing to take his mind off current situations and do the equivalent of meditation, the Kaminoan walked at a leisurely pace to the broken med-bay and began the tedious, but relaxing process, of cleaning up.

Some time passed, and after having most of the glass cleaned from the floor and sharp objects policed, Tolun Fi was busy extracting a blood sample and cleaning up the cauterization in hopes of reattachment of the amputated digit that had come from Alat, the fallen Jedi. Suddenly, his attention was diverted by the familiar metal scrapings of nimble robotic legs and Navi had perched itself on his lap. The Kaminoan looked down in surprise, blinking. “Navi, aren’t you full of surprises? I imagine you’ve been all over the ship looking for us.” The chirps and whirring were familiar enough that Tolun Fi knew Navi’s speech like a second language. He was there when Xid made the droid, after all. “Xid was taken by one of the Sith, a woman with a burgundy cloak. If I were to venture a guess, she does not appear to be the type to beat her prisoners senselessly, or so I’ve been telling myself. I lack a clock, but I estimate it was about 15 minutes or so ago since they left.”

He continued to work on the digit as he spoke, trying to look for anyone who might be watching that there wasn't a droid on his lap. He was facing a wall from the bench, so the nearest cameras were behind him, unable to see what he was working on. "If it isn't too much to ask, I do have a few favours I would like to ask of you while you're able to traverse the ship."
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We're going to confuse you and bring two timelines together that differed slightly.


"That's my secret. I'm always confused."
I'm going to try to have a post up over the next couple days, so try not to move the "Xid goes for a torture adventure!" subplot ahead until I had a chance to get a few sentences in, plox.
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whaaa! Why's everyone judging her so much? It was just a kiss! She's a stupid teenager!

Also, sterilizing the entire Order just because of a stupid teen seems a bit much, and plus it would give the Sith yet another thing to use to try and turn the Jedi. "Hey! you ever thought of quitting being a jedi and settling down? maybe starting a family? TOO BAD!"

I'm really not sure what I was going to say about anybody for this part of the challenge. How close can two characters be and still count as not knowing each other?


Tolun's just super grossed out by cooties.

But c'mon Shiri, keep it in your pants and stop corrupting the guy Tolun sees as a pupil. :[ If Xid gets hurt, who else is supposed to MacGyver everyone's way to freedom? And now Xid's losing his ability to be impartial because he's havig to deal with Shiri's bedroom eyes.

You're also stealing Tolun's biffle and making him do gross human things. Stahp! Jedi are supposed to be wonderfully free of doing disgusting mating rituals.

<3

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I just laughed so hard at this... it's not funny. XD


As far as Tolun goes, this might as well be a full blown temper tantrum.

Let the lulz flow through yooou.

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D'awww.

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Tolun and Koren are going to chastise both of them in two very different ways :P


Only person Tolun's going to chastise is Xid. He feels responsible for him. Most the bits like the sterilisation is mainly there for comedic effect. :D
~| Day 2, 11:34-11:50 GST |~
~| Aboard the Kaggath, Prison Complex |~


It was an uncouth explanation, but Knight Watchman Koren certainly had a succinct way of explaining complicated situations. Tolun Fi exhaled slowly, knowing full well that the extent of Nazca’s condition might not be known for quite some time, and it was unclear if she harboured any ill-feelings towards him for his part in Darth Nyiss’ experiment. He would have to take her through physical therapy to get her used to the robotic arm, but at the time being there were more pressing matters. Namely, the aftermath of whatever happened in the Medbay with the Trandoshan Sith Lord.

The Kaminoan turned to Koren when he spoke. He nodded deeply, with respect, to the Jedi Watchman. “You have my name correct, Knight Watchman Koren. I’m afraid I never made the rounds around the Temple nearly enough when I had the chance. But as they say, it is better late than never to make acquaintance. I had always intended to visit Manaan to expand my medical expertise, but perhaps after, there will be time. But for now, let’s-“

“Will someone...please untie me.” Xid spoke, his voice hoarse. Tolun Fi turned to the young Knight, the brilliant machinist he considered the only person close enough to consider a friend, and for once, his towering height made Xid seem a world away. The Kaminoan had rather come to relate to Xid on account that the young man seemed incapable of forming normal human attachments with people, nothing like he could with his machines, and both were engaged with their own field of expertise in a way that seemed cold and alien to anyone else. There was an understanding between them that had very suddenly found a crack; the young man was becoming reckless and emotional, incapable of following instruction. He was sacrificing his talents and their ability to save the Jedi captives in favour of throwing himself at death time and time again because he was incapable of controlling himself. Did he no longer trust Tolun Fi, or worse, no longer respect him? It was troubling, to say the least. Looking down at Xid, he could almost believe for a second he was looking at someone else.

Instead of saying anything he began to undo Xid’s restraints while Koren took Nazca to the central chamber for training, which was easily the order and stability Nazca needed after her ordeal. It was easy to admire her spirit and raw physicality; it was easy to imagine her coming back from any ordeal more or less herself. It was encouraging.

“Give me a shout if you need me.” Koren called, prompting the Kaminoan to nod a silent acknowledgement. He began to inspect Xid’s wounds, not speaking for some time. Before he decided to break the silence, the sounds of Imperial Troopers filled the room and Koren was taken away, presumably for an interrogation session. Tolun Fi made eye contact with Xid, staring at him severely. “If I were to venture a guess, if you were in any other condition, you would have thrown yourself at those guards to try and stop them from taking Koren. Tell me I’m wrong. Tell me you understand me when I say that the only way to help everyone is if you control yourself, because I am beginning to question if you are the same young man I had befriended and worked with for years. Where does it end, Xid? At what point do you stop yourself from acting and realize it is your talents that may be the key for everyone making it off this ship alive and uncorrupted. I trusted you to know better.”
Opinion Challenge thing:

Koren: Knight Watchman Omni-Ren is still young, as far as his species go, but it easy to see how he has earned his station. Resourceful, a calm mind, and a leader, he is one that does great credit to the Order and I dare say is one of the more ideal Jedis I have come across. This endless feud with the Sith has forced the Order to make due with far too many unsuitable candidates. If there is anyone who will be able to keep the less-experienced Jedi from losing sight of their tenants and purpose, it is most certainly him.

Darth Nyiss: Still an enigma, and I do not put it past her that she is trying to manipulate me, although I must admit her intentions and obfuscation of knowledge is tantalizing, but infuriating. This Darth wants me to assist her in her experiments, but it remains to be seen how much of my own experiments I can carry out without her knowing. It is a shame I am not able to smuggle Xid into her quarters; he knows how these machines work and what security features they offer. I should like to know what she is trying to do with Padawan Nazca, and I know her bed chambers are a treasure trove of discarded genetic material that would be rather useful. We will see what her game is, but for now, compliance with a believable amount of defiance should keep her guard down. After all, one can't appear too eager to take part in Sith experiments, even if there's a chance I can use it for the greater good.

Lord Sish: I haven't had the displeasure of meeting this brute on a name to name basis, but first impressions, as they say, are rather important. A Trandoshan that somehow rose in the ranks of a pure bloodline obsessed order despite being as far from human as one can get while still sporting two arms and two legs and a head, a curiosity. It is clear he sees himself as a warrior, and from his scars and signs of damage, he is no stranger to pain, and he seems to relish in it. I suspect from the gas intervention that someone monitoring wasn't impressed with his brashness, much to my relief. I'd hate to imagine what shape my future patients would have been in if he had continued on.

Shiri: A Padawan Twi'lik whom under other circumstances I would either have not noticed entirely or found her unoffensive enough. Now, it is nothing about her personality or her place in the Order, but she's a problem that suffers from her species' teenage hormonal drive to mate with whatever looks dashing enough and says enough nice things, not unlike humans. Her infatuation with Xid has compromised his judgement, and as he just proved, he isn't above reciprocating nauseating infatuation and doing stupid things to protect a girl he barely knows. So now, he lays battered and out of commission with considerable injury and he may not be able to perform if an escape attempt is necessary - or, if by chance I find a way to get him into Darth Nyiss' systems. Maybe instead of trying to find genetic markers for the Dark Side, I should have dedicated my life to defeating adolescent sex drives, then maybe Xid wouldn't be being brutalized on a daily basis at real risk to his life, and this Shiri girl could have amounted to something more than a tempest who might have doomed every captive on the ship.

If I were capable of a stronger emotional response, I might have done something rash, like insinuate her mother was conceived in Bantha Fodder and offer Xid the kindest of gestures; a full palmed slap across the face. But unlike these two, I will not indulge in immediate, fleeting gratification.

Note to self; If I escape from this predicament, petition the Jedi Order to make sterilization mandatory for membership. It is clear self-discipline and sense of duty has failed in a catastrophic way amongst the Order.
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