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Rats in the Mall (A Nation Rp, now with Rats!)

@Irredeemable

Want to start that? My clan manufactures Boom-powder while your clan builds the cannons and we can trade them equally?

Rats in the Mall (A Nation Rp, now with Rats!)

oh, and being the scientists of the rat world, manufacturing this so-called 'boom powder' can be a long term goal of mine.

Rats in the Mall (A Nation Rp, now with Rats!)

Got an idea here:

A group of rats that have, instead of using existing areas within the mall, found loose brickwork, etc, and are masters at not only genuinely mining for raw materials, but also tearing bits of old tech apart and building crude but effective tools and machinery. Perhaps they could even subcontract to @ClocktowerEchos

@Irredeemable

Hey, based off of what you're thinking, our two clans would get along. Want to have a trade alliance between the Rats of the sky and and your group?

The Last Embers (Dark Steampunk/Fantasy)

@Mercenary Lord

I like the vibe, so just do evrything else that I talked about. Just don't change the music you already chose.

The Last Embers (Dark Steampunk/Fantasy)

@Mercenary Lord

Actually, I just listened to it several times, don't change the music that you're using just yet.

The Last Embers (Dark Steampunk/Fantasy)

@Mercenary Lord

Dude, that sounds really great. Here are some ideas:

1) Introduce the music in the background earlier.

2) Make that background music louder and more noticeable.

3) Have the metal sounds (which sound really good, just make them deeper in tone) flow with the music. For the first few seconds, make them random, then start to form them to follow a rhythm. After that, transition them into the rhythm of the background music. THat's when you raise the volume of the music to make it on par with the metal sounds.

4) I like the vibe, but if you can then make it a bit darker, please.

I hope that I'm not overstepping my bounds with this stuff, but I think that you are definitely on the right track. Also, longer would be nice....

Rats in the Mall (A Nation Rp, now with Rats!)

I'm liking the idea of having literate mice, which mine would need to be as they are mostly engineers, scientists, technicians. THey build for purpose, not beauty, and yet they find that which is purposeful to be beautiful.

The Last Tank Crew (Dystopian, Military, Action, Survival)

@Dynamo Frokane

Hey, I updated his Bio. How does it look?

Rats in the Mall (A Nation Rp, now with Rats!)

@Elgappa

So Hyped! I'm going to be the master of the skies!!!!

The Last Tank Crew (Dystopian, Military, Action, Survival)

@Dynamo Frokane

Yep, the backstory needs work, but I'm missing info on the lore such as a timeline of events. and other things. Do you think you can work on that?