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A TV flickered on and off from within the window of a small hole-in-the-wall store. It apparently sold all types of electronics, but the recent news, as broadcasted on the TV, had done a number on the economy and decreased foot traffic heavily turning a city that never slept into one of eternal slumber.

The white noise eventually found root in a nearby news station, featuring a man in his late 30s. A meteorologist, apparently. He spoke of the obvious catastrophic event, the recent volcano eruption which has hidden the sun and darkened the sky.

"We've never seen anything quite like this? Have we? Some superstitious citizens claim it is an omen of bad things yet to come. The volcano erupted a month ago, and still, Japan as a whole is suffering from its aftermath. People from all over have begun to call this period of time..."

The TV paused briefly before kicking back on.

"Black summer."
"Black summer."
"Black summer."


A hundred different voices, one from the TV, another from a radio. There wasn't a single person within Fuyuki City unaffected by the event. Businesses that had been around forever were forced to close. Crime rates had skyrocketed. None of this was surprising but it left everyone wondering... when would it come to an end? Though it mattered to the citizens, it made no difference to those who had recently arrived within the city of despair. They weren't trying to solve mother natures mystery; they had a war to fight. But there was one man among them, though far from a new arrival; still a participant in the war none the less who wished to answer that question.



"What an unfortunate coincidence, Japan thrown into a time of turmoil right as the war begins..." He shook his head, "No. Not coincidence. Divine intervention." In his hand was a dancing wine of glass, swirling as he moved it in a circular motion, a tidal wave within a crimson sea.

The masters had been selected, the servants summoned. "A wish must be worth one's life. It is a gamble? Is it not?" He was talking to no one; himself aloud; perhaps God. Unexplainable really. He took a sip of his wine. "I hope to meet these prospects. The lambs God has selected for the slaughter. Surely the connection exists? A war founded on heresy and a black cloud that has plunged these sacred lands into wickedness." He sighed, closing the bible in front of him to reveal a stack of newspapers referencing the eruption. That topic of conversation was inescapable.

If all goes well, the heretics will take care of themselves. Well... until then." He abandoned the cup of wine, and everything else on his desk, footsteps echoing through the church.

It was a beautiful building, with a natural glow that poured through the stained glass in just the right way. He had walked towards this spotlight, his feet gliding across a velvet carpet and passing pew after pew; allowing that lighting to paint him in his best form. "Let night one begin..."
@ManyThings Okay! So a few things we need to tackle here.

I'd lower either strength or agility by one rank.

Theseus has not ALWAYS been seen as the Son of Poseidon, most stories called him the son of Aegeus which you chose to represent with a -, but I think we should knock that down to C to keep it realistic.

I also do not understand why riding is A+ when his story, for the most part, is not about riding/sailing, it is about everything between. If that is the case, and you wish to go with the ship as his main mount, you'd need the "Voyager of the Storm" skill and you could drop riding altogether.

I still believe he qualifies as a rider and that the sheet works, but I think a lot of the stats are elevated to an unrealistic and unfair level given his story.

The road to Athens is fine, it makes a lot of sense!

The affection of the Sea God feels more like a Noble Phantasm and less like a skill, I will ask that you remove that all together, or replace a current NP with that, even if it is an altered version.

Bravery is fine.

I think you should choose between the bull or the thread about these Noble Phantasms. Yes, some servants have Three Noble Phantasms but the most common amount is only having one! That being said, I'm not opposed to three, I just don't think BOTH of those are worth keeping. If it were me, and you truly want to run with the Poseidon aspect of his story, then I would get rid of both of those and do the affection of the sea god as an NP, and expand on that.

If you want the bull to be his mount and not the ship, then that changes a lot of stuff as well! So I'd pick the ship or the bull, but the ship is probably the more solid option.
@Vertigo Yes! Will need some minor edits just so it isn't game-breaking. While I know this is a canon character, and I personally won't be taking these rankings TOO seriously myself, having everything be ABABABABAB, can be tricky.

Charisma should be much lower than B, especially if he doesn't use it often. You've said it focuses on hunting giant beasts, so make Charisma C-D, or even get rid of it. Up to you.

As for his parameters, just mixing and matching from different canon examples would be preferable. Right now he's kind of a master of everything? Which I get it, he's a staple of the series, but everyone needs to be equal irp! Feel free to contest my suggestion but I would say:

Strength: B+ (A plus modifier against beasts, since that is his forte)
Endurance: A
Agility: C

This Arthur focuses on hunting beasts from what I can gather, so being fast and strong is necessary and fitting of his lore but you can't be good at everything! Having C-Rank agility balances out the physical stats a bit.

Mana: B
Luck: D

Emiya's Saber had D luck, I know it is a different version but I think that rounds the kit out a bit.
@XerxesIsVerd This is really cool! Interested to see what he can acquire with Conquerors Privilege, would make for a fun game. I don't see anything wrong with it! As usual, I had to google who you made, your knowledge of random historical kings never ceases to amaze. You can go ahead and repost this in the character tab.
@Staked Also approved
@Duoya This is a really cool concept! I really like it. Go ahead and post her in characters, great work. Fun read. She took an eye for an eye to the extreme, and never held up her end of that bargain...
Also for those of you lurking, not in the discord, if you want to make a Caster just let me know. I would rather just play a master than play both!
@Cu Chulainn That's a great idea

https://discord.gg/bGQpsxYanZ

Here is the discord link everyone, for faster communication purposes and idea help!
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