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I never said as much; I asked for a few more details regarding it as a whole. Clarification was nice, yes, and I appreciate you putting in your time to do so, but with the group as it was I wasn't sure if it'd fit in with the group mechanic. The way I see it (and given how people are), your character would be ostracized from the get-go, which I don't believe would be conducive to much of anything I had planned. I ran through multiple possible scenarios when I saw your character initially, and barring a few OoC actions it'd have been very hard for him to have joined the group easily, or at least without large incident. The fact that Cubone's char was making spears and your character was a giant bipedal wolf...

Look, I'm sorry about not being able to accept you; I really am. But I honestly found a character that would probably be hunted down (and cause the party to be hunted), as well as being unable to step foot in almost every town to be a tad unusable in this RP. My apologies for taking up your time.
Ah... I... Why did you put it in the Accepted Forms even though it wasn't accepted...?
._.;;

Sorry to say, but... @The Roman07, you got edged out in the end. Your character felt a tad out of place at the end of my deliberation, as compared to the alternative. I also liked the idea of having a gender balance a bit more, so that an a couple other factors pushed it in favor of @VitaVitaAR. Sorry.

As for @VitaVitaAR, you can place your form in whenever.
Hm... okay, let's see here...

@VitaVitaAR:
-Some sort of... Well, height would be useful. A general estimate, at the very minimum, would help immensely.
-I think history could be fleshed out a tad more; another paragraph or so should do it. Things like place of birth, where she lived, and all that other stuff would do quite nicely here.
And... I think that's all my comments.

Now, @The Roman07, that's not necessarily the case now, seeing as how I've still gotta run checks over again. As for critiques...
-Can I ask if you could separate the images from the text so it isn't a giant jump from looking from the middle of one sentence to the other half of it?
-'WolfBeast'... That's... Okay, so what difference is there between a transformed werewolf and one of these, then? I'm not seeing one, and if someone's picking a race I need to flesh it out on my own to make it fit within the story as an established one. Eventually, of course, but still.

That's all I can see as of right now. I think a party of 6 will do fine, but 7 is definitely pushing it. I think one slot will be available, considering how I project this in the near future.

@Tokki Yes, I am COMPLETELY on board with that. Two posts in between makes for good pacing.
Marcus was pleased to hear the voice of another person in the area, but the man who it had come from didn't exactly calm him much, if at all. The tattoos patterned across his tall, muscular body made him hesitate for a moment, but the fact that it was English- clear English, no less- that let him let down his guard. maybe this simply WAS an elaborate prank, planned by his peers to cause him to freak the hell out.

That was most certainly not the case, though. In fact, it was more likely that this person, given his question, was caught in the same situation; why else would he be asking him for information?

"Nah, got no clue where the hell we are, nor when the heck we arrived here. Doesn't help that the place has absolutely zero landmarks to give us any indication of where we are." Marcus responded, walking closer to the man as more people around them seemed to making up around them. The older man, who, to Marcus, seemed to be some sort of rancher, was already at work making some sort of weapon. Through Marcus was about to ask where he obtained the shafts for the spears in the first place, the sight of the next person- if she could even be called that- caused him to check his eyes to see if they were working correctly.

"That... That is... A fox girl. Okay. I'm... Pretty sure this is some sort of joke. Gotta be, right?" he asked himself incredulously as he looked at her.
Moving animal ears. Check.
Moving fox tail. Check.
Well. Something was definitely weird here. Hopefully, he wasn't the only one seeing this; the ol' rancher-looking guy didn't seem too fazed by it at all.
@TokkiQuite likely there will be, but things may get muddled depending on who's reacting to who. I'd say that there should be an established order (generally), then have exceptions when only one person is being referred to and only one person and it calls for their response immediately.
What do you think?
Alright, good to know. I guess signups will remain open until either a) there's another person or two or b) the RP hits page 2, whichever comes first. I think that's a good estimate of closure.
Alright, if that's the current majority opinion, then I'll open it for another person or two for a tad longer.
@SadCubone: My apologies, though, but since Tokki mentioned the possible addition of another person or two I'd like your opinion on the matter as well.
Yeah, I guess. Was hesitating about the deer, then I remembered gazelle existed.
Though... I guess that among that grass you'd find some sorta plant that would look like sticks, so I'm not gonna go against that either.

Edit: Hm... Actually, gotta ask the people who are in the RP right now: do you think that the current group size is fine? Five people was enough in my head, but you guys might have differing opinions and I kinda wanna hear them out and all. Since we're still on introductory posts as of now, this is probably the best time to ask.
Okay, let's go straight to 2 here; I had stated in the introductory post that there was grass 'as far as the eye could see', which implied that the group was deep enough into the center of the plain that leaves of such a size would probably not make it there (you know, because physics).
As for 3... 'sea of' would imply the grass to be of relatively decent height, and even then it's basically a tinderbox even if you do try to contain it. One slight breeze and one little flame moving a bit too far and BOOM, whole place is ablaze.
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