Gardevoiran

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@Starberries
ya did good chief. move it on over. I'd also expect this character would have a slight weakness to fire, being a vampire an all.

@Horrid
You're accepted, mister Decidueye man.

@Cuccoruler Lucky for you, I just got sent to prison after riding an ostriches into pecking an anthropomorphic wolf cop into death. I got an Ostrich feather on me. All you need to do, is plant it and you will have an Ostrich tree that lays 3 eggs per day and a bronze one ever week. For the tree to grow you need to spill 50 chicken egg yolks total mixed with mushed banana for it to fully grow.

*Extends feather*

Do we have a deal?

@Bishop

T R I G G E R E D

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@Bishop
I'm going to go under the assumption this character basically gets destroyed by any sort of holy magic. It's good so far, just make sure you add a few drawbacks to him for general reasons besides the holy weakness.

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@Ghost Shadow
It's alright man, no worries.

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@BCTheEntity@Kafka Komedy
Both are good so far for being works in progress, so I'm ok with them right now. Please notify me when they are finished though so I can finish the evaluation.

@Turbowraith
It's accepted, but please note his motivations for why he's with the party on this mission in the first place. He also seems like a character you would make, so there's that compliment.

Into The Dark: Tales of Maroleth

Are you guys accepting new people?

I'm thinking of a rather wild character concept that worked for a time in the past until a combination of my comparatively poor skills, poor RP etiquette and other things ruined it.

Basically, a shape-shifting demon that'd escaped annihilation by disguising herself as a human being. She grew fond of it, and decided to live amongst the many races. Every time she does this, she would throw on a disguise so heavy that her disguise would become substantial and she would forget that she was a demon... Only to emerge in a shower of blood and gore when her disguise's life runs out and she would remember that she was a demon all along.

I'm thinking her current disguise (at least initially) would be that of a human or Elven paladin or priest/healer.

What do you guys think?

@Darkraven

BRUTAL

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@Starberries
Vampires are alright, but make sure they're also a race that exists (Vampire Half-Elf, Vampire Dwarf, etc.)

@DracoLunaris
Alright man, that's all fine.

@BCTheEntity@Kafka Komedy
I'll take a look at the sheets in a bit and I'll respond when they're evaluated.

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@DracoLunaris
You can leave water-breathing up there. It seems like a good thing to have, albeit probably going to come in to play very rarely, but it'll be incredible when it does.

He's good in my book. Acceptance!

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@Cuccoruler
She's good now. I'm looking forward to having some comedic moments with her in the IC.

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@DracoLunaris
I'm unfamiliar with Vaulters, so bear with me. It looks good, but I have a few things I would liked changed about it...

The enchantment/mutation makes him stronger than a normal human, allowing him to run faster than he should in heavy armor and jump several meters into the air. His blows have more force behind them and he can rewind his crossbow considerably faster.

It seems a bit strong for a person to be that agile in a suit of heavy armor, even if you are a mutated guy. I'd give you no movement penalties, but no benefits either. You can move in heavy armor like it was a standard set of clothes if you were a normal human, but you definitely cannot jump more than (at the very most) 2 meters in the air.

As a result of his exploration Andrik has come into the possession of a number of magic artifacts.
A small iron bar that holds an electric charge that can briefly stun anyone stabbed with it. A leather handle protects the user
A talisman of virgo that can project a nigh invulnerable shield around him for 10 seconds. 4 uses before recharging.
A necklace of coral that lets the user breath underwater
A bracelet with an orange crystal that fires a cutting beam. 4 uses before recharging.
A rune covered metal flask that will refill itself every night with whatever substance it was last filled with. currently holds a potion that gives the drinker frost breath. 4 uses before recharging.

That's a lot of things that can work well when used in quick succession, especially the talisman. If you could add a catch to each of the artifacts, and also have it so that they're only able to be used one at a time, that'd be good.
I'm also going to say, make the talisman a one-use item, then a recharge. It's too OP how it is right now.

Currently I'm not accepting it, but I'll reevaluate it after you revise it.

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@The Wild West
You're good with one thing. If one of the creations is destroyed, it'll be a while before Ingrim can remake it. Start out strong, then get progressively weak from there.

@Cuccoruler
Minor nitpicking time! I like your character, but I have a question and a thing to tell you.

Question: Why are they going with Irthorne into this dungeon? What is her motivation?

Thing to tell you: "Humans" don't exist in this setting. They are instead called Tall Dwarves. I don't know why I wanted that, but I did. Wanted to tell you so you wouldn't be confused when this starts.