Holy Soldier

An Oriental Story [Martial Arts Themed RP] - LF Force Master

@CelticSoldierlol I don't know how I messed that up. I think I was looking at Milkman's CS thinking it was yours.

PRIES - Paranormal Noir RP [Always recruiting]

@FallenTrinityThere is no "works best." You're either role playing in this game or not. I don't care what you do. Regardless, this IS the game. The game just started. Participate whenever you want.

PRIES - Paranormal Noir RP [Always recruiting]

@FallenTrinityYou weren't approved yet when I wrote that IC post. You can be apart of that first mission if you want. Either way, this is the first IC post of the game.

An Oriental Story [Martial Arts Themed RP] - LF Force Master

@The Grey DustI'm not here to debate with you dude. You would be the only person to send me a character that encompasses all four gods, knows all six classes worth of techniques, and is trying to make Dark Chi a positive thing when it is clearly a negative thing in this game. You tried to rewrite this game with your CS. You didn't take what was already given to you and make a profile within those limitations, you just said "Fuck this, I'm gonna do what I want," and then when I called you on it, you wanted to make excuses, blaming the game and lack there is and just basically whine about it. If you were going to bitch about this game, then that should have told you from the get-go not to join. Because if you had that many issues with it, then why bother? I hope people look at your CS and use it as an example of what never to send to any game unless it was a God game because that would be the only kind of game a character like that would work.

PRIES - Paranormal Noir RP [Always recruiting]

@jumpadrawThis looks good approved.

An Oriental Story [Martial Arts Themed RP] - LF Force Master

@The Grey DustFirst let me say that I’ve seen this character before. I think in a tournament in the past that I’ve participated in on another site. So, I know he’s a premade that you’re trying to shove into this game.

As I was reading this CS, I had to wonder who were you writing this for? Obviously it was for yourself, but you were basically writing a story that 100% revolved around your character and everyone else just did not matter. This isn’t about the four gods or the four grandmasters, this story is about Wu Dan who is trying to be the Avatar. This isn’t Avatar: The Last Airbender. The Dark Chi in this game IS evil and it is like a slow disease waiting to inevitably take the soul of anyone who uses it, if that person didn’t give their soul to demons already just to acquire the power.

You didn’t even explain how he was 300+ years old, living outside human morality. I like that you got him involved on my character’s current story at the end, but this CS is just too Mary Sue. I don’t know why on earth you thought I would accept a CS like this. This CS basically was, “Hey, this is a cool idea, but I got a better one. Let’s make this entire game about me.”

Again, I have no idea why: 1) you wrote this much, and 2) you thought I would accept this CS when you were done. You should have just told me that you were going to submit a Mary Sue to me and I would have saved you the trouble because I would have said, “No man that’s not a good idea because I’m just going to reject that shit.”

It was a good story, but I’m not accepting this CS. Sorry. It goes against everything I believe in.

An Oriental Story [Martial Arts Themed RP] - LF Force Master

@FantasyChicIf you don't see a class under "Approved Characters," then I wouldn't go assuming that I approved it.

An Oriental Story [Martial Arts Themed RP] - LF Force Master

@CelticSoldierHe won't be super underpowered because as I said, we may get extras in this game. The four are the strongest characters, but each "class" has an advantage that the other classes do not have. So either way, depending on the class you choose, your character may still prove to be invaluable to the team. Again, it depends because if you choose to do PVP with any of the four, if their T1 abilities suck, then your character can be better than them even if this game says the four are supposed to be the strongest. However for PVE, just for going through the game, your character will be fine. I'm going to add this question to the Q&A.

Edit: I added this question to the Q&A, and I also answered it. I'm going to also let you know that because you chose Blade Master, and you are having your character not learn how to be a Blade Master from one of the four schools, then this means that ALL Blade Masters in the entire game to include NPCs will not have learned to be a Blade Master from one of the four major schools. This also means that you will have to explain where he learned his Blade Master art.

But the reason why this is, is because there are only 6 classes in this game. Which means I am allowing only up to 6 people in this game. Someone will make their class into one of the four schools. So as soon as the four schools are claimed, then two of those schools will not have taught the other classes. Unless I decide to have the school teach more than one class, which is possible. But this will depend on how many of the currently interested people choose to have their characters learn from the four main schools.

An Oriental Story [Martial Arts Themed RP] - LF Force Master

@wxps350I may have a full team when that happens and therefore, that may not be possible. This IS the OOC. Because all I do is copy/paste this OP over to an OOC. So everyone should treat this as not just an interest check but this is the OOC. lol

PRIES - Paranormal Noir RP [Always recruiting]

@ShaggyDoo0That's fine. I don't expect players to do anything other than introduce their characters. Because on my next post they WILL be doing something. Surprise, surprise!