January

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@Eviledd1984 I still need you to add a clear line telling me what his crown is in his costumed form. And also to add a line clarifying exactly what the weapon is. I would prefer these changes made before you put the CS into the CHAR tab.

Since this is becoming a general problem, I'll update the "CHARACTER SHEET" section of the OOC to reflect this.

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@SimpleWriter Well, it's up to you. Just get all the changes done before playing since it'll be harder to swap out characters you didn't feel like playing once people are interacting with and invested in what you've made.

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@SimpleWriter Yeah, it's a buff. Ethereals aren't really big attack types with the exception of Pride, but Pride has its own drawbacks. And she takes more damage, not the allies.

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@Eviledd1984 Oh I keep forgetting things. I'm putting an upper limit on his size power. He can get about as tall as a five-story building and that's where it stops.

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@Eviledd1984 Looks mostly fine. The katana you mentioned will be the ‘real’ weapon of the Crown but otherwise his fighting style is fine. Mention clearly what the crown is on his outfit, then go ahead and throw him in the CHAR tab.

@SimpleWriter I’m tweaking the first skill to be long-duration to affect allies, too, so they get the defense buff as well. Second skill is fine, but limiting it to melee range only. Third skill I’m tweaking to a short-duration buff that increases hers and ally dexterity but at the cost of taking more damage. If you’re okay with the changes, add another star to her Dex stat and throw her in the CHAR tab. She also can’t use any skills concurrently.

Oh, mention clearly what her weapon is, because certain Crowns can have misleading ‘weapons’.

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@Ruiner You can get the crown at a young age, yes, but it's unlikely a child would survive unless an older Crown was around to help them. Let me know what you're planning and I'll see if we can make it work.

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@Renny Looks good!

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@Renny First impression is he's a bit overpowered, but since the Crown of Pride is meant to be stronger on average I'll tweak his power up ability to be short-duration, like a minute of the buff before he needs to rest and wait.

Also tweaking that AoE explosion to be a massive-radius debuff rather than an explosion. All enemies hit by it are severely weakened for several minutes and can't move. Ethereals are more of this buff/debuff/distract/confuse/etc. type rather than direct damage.

His beam can stay.

Gonna nix on the mind control of humans. I'll say he can influence them like a sort of subliminal messaging and they have a high chance of doing what he suggests, but it's not perfect mind control.

Since all his skills are high-energy/should be high-energy, I don't expect to see him use very many of them if any during a fight aside from his buff skill. I'll impose that none of his abilities can be used concurrently to even him out a bit.

Drop a quick line making it clear what his weapon is for me, and if you're good with the changes you can drop him in the CHAR tab.

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Looks good. Add it to the roster when you’re done with the finishing touches. Oh, remember to add in the description of the transformed state what the crown is on his head. It can be his mask, yes.

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@Eviledd1984 Hit me with it and we can iron out any kinks. The basic gist of your idea shouldn't be in danger.