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Getting my beauty sleep, yo.

Since Leiden's playing the good cop and accepting everybody, I'll play the bad cop and annoy y'all with nitpicking.


It's my job to keep morale up.
@gcold, @Leidenschaft Finally, I think my character is ready. I have expanded his biography to include a reason for his name and updated his skills list and equipment. I have slightly altered the wording in the Skills section to make it more sensible.



That's better, I've no gripes with it.
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I dropped the first apostrophe in Varg, but I prefer the last one in t'uk, supposed to be a heavier drawl on the <u>, but I believe I did know that it meant wolf, I'm familiar with a lot of words like that, either way, it's still good to know what it means (: so maybe her name means Wolf-tooth?


I don't have a problem with that. You just have to say how she earned it, as she doesn't hail from one of the distinguished Clans like Grey-Mane or Cruel-Sea. Maybe she earned it somehow, but remember Nordic names are meaningful but simple, they don't insist upon themselves...mostly...it's common to see names like Thrice-Pierced, Once-Honored, Stonefist, names like that. They tell of the deeds and reputation, or any great wounds, even or just something about the person without being lel edgy like Beorn the Destroyer.

Even the most badass Vikings and Norsemen through history had underwhelmingly literal names like Snake-in-the-Eye(because of a curious abnormality in his eye), Boneless(because he was unable to walk) and perhaps the most famous, Lothbrok. Sounds cool in Norse, but it just means hairy-breeches because he wore pants made from fur.
@Oak7reeIt's not specified whether 1h-blade and medium armor are adept or apprentice. I'm assuming, due to wording, that they're Apprentice level. This means you have only one adept skill and no novice skills. Feel free to add in a few more skills in those areas.

@sovi3tSheet looks okay to me. Wait for Gcold.
Okay! Here is my CS! Let me know if anything is not to your liking, or if I need to explain anything else in further detail.


Nothing glaring in this sheet, I actually quite like it. My one nitpicky pedantic thing is that I thought that given name was in the Dragon Language or something. But then I found out it was just Swedish with apostrophes shoved into it. Varg is wolf in Swedish, just so you know, btw. Anywho, it's okay to take those apostrophes away. You have my half of the approval, now we must wait for Gcold to rise again from his deep slumber come the distant morn.
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God fucking damnit


Worked for me
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I see, that makes sense.

And I assume you approve of your own char, Leiden?


No, it's complete shit. I just don't want to really make the guy who made him sad, so let's just accept him and pretend we all like it.
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It's not very usual but I've seen some documented cases of child soldiers in WWI at the very least (as an example of child soldiers in legitimate armies, and not some African warlord's drag band). And 'camp people' were a thing, be they traders, washers, cooks or prostitutes.


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This is also true in real life.

@Leidenschaft Some minor nitpicks from me.

-In Nordic orthography, the palatal approximant is represented by <j> rather than <y>. Which means your guy should be "Jorwen" instead of "Yorwen". With that said, it seems like the old Atmoran spelling used <y>, so if you want to keep his name, add an explanation for that old-fashioned spelling.
-I doubt the Legion would conscript someone at the age of 13. Either he lied to join, pressured by peer, or taken by more unorthodox commanders.

@ClocktowerEchos Did you ninja in a skill? I swear there was one less...

@HHShetland Standing in this corner; hailing from Riften, Skyrim; the undercat champion; Tennant Ibnazh!



Feel free to add your sheet, Shetland.

@Sovi3t @MacabreFox Still reading, sorry for the wait guys.


It wasn't unusual for young men to be considered adults by medieval standards. He was pressganged into service and was a bugle boy who also mended shirts and trousers. He was 14 when he crossed into Cyrodiil, if that's worth anything. Also, I'll just change it to a J soon. Changed.
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I remember this local comic where an Undead officer serving on a floating galley whipping other undead slaves took up knitting because he was undead and eternity was really damn boring. Let the main character go after he taught him a different knitting style or something, can't remember very clearly. But the whole 'badass who loves tailoring' aspect just reminded me of that.


I've loved the whole idea of making a character who defies first impressions. I'm trying to move away from always playing the same ol' character archetype of relentless, brooding badass #23,407,567

I just want to play a guy with some honor who is genuinely friendly and means well for a man in the soldier's profession.
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