@RyonaraGood job, I like her a lot - certainly something new in the group that's for sure; I have soem gripes with the whole Master wanting her to die so she could become an undead and be a better assassain in the long run.
It's not remotely feasible or likely; there is absolutely no prior inclination or knowledge to suggest that nay one will be cursed with the darksign -if any said that to me, I'd call them a bloody liar.
Anyway, it's up to you whether or not you can treat that as a lie from the teacher or change it, or do nothing - your character as a whole is good and it is approved.
@SnarfulblastExpand upon the Personality and the description please, the bio too could use some fleshing out as well as a spell check, you refer to hollows as hallows.
Try and make it as detailed as possible, and at least 2 sizeable paragraphs.
@BlackHoleKinOnce again you haven't put in enough detail in the bio and personality; don't just say you're making a new character and scrapping the old one, then continue to make the same mistakes that I asked you to rectify last time.
I'm sorry Black, but if you don't reach the standards I'm asking for when you fix this, I'm going to have to let you go; I understand that you may really want to do this, and it pains me to say it, but this may be to high a demand for your abilities.
@Lucius CypherThat's acceptable, thanks for changing things - you may move your character over to the CS tab.
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