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mickilennial
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TakaOkay, so I've finally finished Kanon... But there's something that kinda irks me a bit. I'm guessing this character is still a WIP, but as of now, Kanon seems a bit OP to me. If you guys could give me any feedback, that would be amazing 
(Also I might get a reply up in the IC tomorrow or at like one in the morning because we all know sleeping is fucking dumb)
“I’m just a normal person with a few more quirks than others.”
Name: Kanon Nakamura
Nickname/Alias: n/a
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 15 y/o, July 4th
Age Appearance: 17 y/o
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Parents: Kaori Nakamura (mother) and Hibiki Nakamura (father)
Length and build: Tall and rather skinny, standing at 5’8
Weight: 127 lbs
Favorite weather and season: Cold days during the winter when the snow begins to fall.
Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Organization: Shinobi Forces
Clan/Bloodline: n/a
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Earth
Appearance: Kanon is a tall, yet very thin woman, with bony wrists and elbows. Her skin is pale, and she has thin, light brown hair. Underneath the large hood that darkens half of her face, Kanon’s eyes are a large, striking green, yet have some sort of calm and serene feel to them. She also doesn’t really seem to change her appearance as often. Her signature sky blue hoodie and black shorts are the usual for Kanon, but the most astonishing moment is when she actually takes her hood off, revealing the rest of her face to others. Kanon also wears tightly fitted earplugs to protect herself from her own attacks.
Personality: Kanon is a very cool, relaxed and easy-going individual, and really enjoys the company of others. She doesn’t think much of her inability to hear at all, calling herself ‘a person with a few more quirks than others’. She also teases others lightly quite often, and is always up for a laugh. Her cheerful and playful personality makes her seem pretty silly and childish, but there are those rare moments when Kanon becomes totally serious and unwavering. Although she appears to be quite tomboy-ish, Kanon favours girly things, especially stuffed toys. She’s also rumoured to have a collection in her closet but shhh, it’s a secret.
Kanon is also very passionate, and doesn’t let any sort of limitation stop her in her tracks. Her passion is not ignorance though, as Kanon uses her intellect to decide whether or not to retreat a fight or not. Underneath her laid back nature, Kanon is a very serious and analytical girl, not taking any shit from anyone. She has a strong devotion to her close friends, and so, if those close friends are threatened, limitations will mean absolutely nothing to her.
History: Kanon is the first and only child to Kanade and Hibiki Nakamura. Her mother is a regular citizen and nurse of the Hidden Leaf Village, and her father is working Jonin. Aspiring to become a powerful Jonin like her father, Kanon enrolled into the Academy at the applicable age. She would often train with her father on his days off and, eventually, discovered her own unique fighting style at the age of ten.
Fascinated by her discovery, Kanon continued to enhance her techniques, training for as long as her father allowed her. She would even occasionally sneak out on some nights just to practise this lethal fighting style of hers. Combined with her excellent chakra control and intelligence, Kanon was able to create a fighting style that enabled her to manipulate sound.
However, this form of training came with deadly drawbacks. At the age of eleven when she carried on practising different sound manipulating techniques, Kanon began to notice something. At first, she didn’t think much of it, and took medicine for a while to ease the pain in her head. Then, the effects of her taining gradually got worse. Even her sensei had begun to notice her poor hearing during lessons, and advised that her father took her to a doctor. At the hospital, the doctor had instructed Kanon to stop her training completely, saying it could damage her body severely. Her father immediately agreed to this, and stopped Kanon’s sound manipulation training.
The girl remained persistent, though. She would sneak out at night to train in the forests, causing her health to diminish. One day on the way home from the Academy, she had bumped into a couple of older kids and quickly ignored them, rushing off home so she wouldn’t stir up any trouble. She wasn’t able to hear as well at the time, so, once she had walked a few good metres away from them, Kanon wasn’t able to hear their calls at all. The kids took their anger out on her since she wasn’t able to hear them, and was further made fun of for her inability to hear at all. Even though she was now in close range with them and able to listen to every word, the kids continued to hurt Kanon. In a fit of rage, Kanon fought back, only to get herself and the other kids critically injured. Clapping her hands together, she used the so called ‘super technique’ she had been secretly practising, deafening Kanon completely.
Kanon rested in the hospital for a few days, recovering from her recent outburst. The first time her father had visited her, the man broke down in tears. Hibiki had asked if Kanon was all better, but, now unable to hear at all, Kanon replied;
“Father… I can’t hear you.”
Theme Song:
Skills/Abilities: Kanon’s possesses incredible chakra control which she uses to manipulate sound for her techniques. She’s also highly intelligent, having achieved high marks in the Academy’s written exams. She isn’t a very able taijutsu user, mostly relying on her sound techniques to aid her in battle. Kanon’s stamina and chakra levels aren’t anything too special either, labeled as average for a ninja her age. She seems to have a certain, undiscovered talent for genjutsu, however. Surprise attacks aren’t her thing either, since she can’t exactly hear anything, whether it’s other people or herself.
Special Traits: Kanon’s greatest weapons are her intelligence and immense chakra control. She’s also quite fast on her feet too.
Jutsu:
Canon Jutsu: Basic Academy Techniques
Custom Jutsu:
Name of Technique: Crack
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Mid range
Nature Type: None
Handseals: None
Description: Clapping her hands together, Kanon uses her chakra to amplify the sound emitted. This may cause the target to feel dizzy, and, in some cases when the sound is loud enough, nauseous.
Weakness: Requires accurate concentration, or else the sound won’t be as lethal.
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Name of Technique: Shatter
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Close range
Nature Type: None
Handseals: None
Description: After appearing inches away from the enemy, Kanon snaps her fingers, using her chakra to amplify the sound emitted. Since the target is in such close range, the person may be knocked unconscious, or, in extremely rare cases where the sound is loud enough, killed.
Weakness: Requires great speed to perform without the enemy blocking the attack. If the user isn’t fast enough, it leaves them open to many attacks.
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Summons
None as of now
(Also I might get a reply up in the IC tomorrow or at like one in the morning because we all know sleeping is fucking dumb)
“I’m just a normal person with a few more quirks than others.”
Name: Kanon Nakamura
Nickname/Alias: n/a
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth: 15 y/o, July 4th
Age Appearance: 17 y/o
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Parents: Kaori Nakamura (mother) and Hibiki Nakamura (father)
Length and build: Tall and rather skinny, standing at 5’8
Weight: 127 lbs
Favorite weather and season: Cold days during the winter when the snow begins to fall.
Village: Konohagakure
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Organization: Shinobi Forces
Clan/Bloodline: n/a
Rank: Genin
Chakra Nature: Earth
Appearance: Kanon is a tall, yet very thin woman, with bony wrists and elbows. Her skin is pale, and she has thin, light brown hair. Underneath the large hood that darkens half of her face, Kanon’s eyes are a large, striking green, yet have some sort of calm and serene feel to them. She also doesn’t really seem to change her appearance as often. Her signature sky blue hoodie and black shorts are the usual for Kanon, but the most astonishing moment is when she actually takes her hood off, revealing the rest of her face to others. Kanon also wears tightly fitted earplugs to protect herself from her own attacks.
Personality: Kanon is a very cool, relaxed and easy-going individual, and really enjoys the company of others. She doesn’t think much of her inability to hear at all, calling herself ‘a person with a few more quirks than others’. She also teases others lightly quite often, and is always up for a laugh. Her cheerful and playful personality makes her seem pretty silly and childish, but there are those rare moments when Kanon becomes totally serious and unwavering. Although she appears to be quite tomboy-ish, Kanon favours girly things, especially stuffed toys. She’s also rumoured to have a collection in her closet but shhh, it’s a secret.
Kanon is also very passionate, and doesn’t let any sort of limitation stop her in her tracks. Her passion is not ignorance though, as Kanon uses her intellect to decide whether or not to retreat a fight or not. Underneath her laid back nature, Kanon is a very serious and analytical girl, not taking any shit from anyone. She has a strong devotion to her close friends, and so, if those close friends are threatened, limitations will mean absolutely nothing to her.
History: Kanon is the first and only child to Kanade and Hibiki Nakamura. Her mother is a regular citizen and nurse of the Hidden Leaf Village, and her father is working Jonin. Aspiring to become a powerful Jonin like her father, Kanon enrolled into the Academy at the applicable age. She would often train with her father on his days off and, eventually, discovered her own unique fighting style at the age of ten.
Fascinated by her discovery, Kanon continued to enhance her techniques, training for as long as her father allowed her. She would even occasionally sneak out on some nights just to practise this lethal fighting style of hers. Combined with her excellent chakra control and intelligence, Kanon was able to create a fighting style that enabled her to manipulate sound.
However, this form of training came with deadly drawbacks. At the age of eleven when she carried on practising different sound manipulating techniques, Kanon began to notice something. At first, she didn’t think much of it, and took medicine for a while to ease the pain in her head. Then, the effects of her taining gradually got worse. Even her sensei had begun to notice her poor hearing during lessons, and advised that her father took her to a doctor. At the hospital, the doctor had instructed Kanon to stop her training completely, saying it could damage her body severely. Her father immediately agreed to this, and stopped Kanon’s sound manipulation training.
The girl remained persistent, though. She would sneak out at night to train in the forests, causing her health to diminish. One day on the way home from the Academy, she had bumped into a couple of older kids and quickly ignored them, rushing off home so she wouldn’t stir up any trouble. She wasn’t able to hear as well at the time, so, once she had walked a few good metres away from them, Kanon wasn’t able to hear their calls at all. The kids took their anger out on her since she wasn’t able to hear them, and was further made fun of for her inability to hear at all. Even though she was now in close range with them and able to listen to every word, the kids continued to hurt Kanon. In a fit of rage, Kanon fought back, only to get herself and the other kids critically injured. Clapping her hands together, she used the so called ‘super technique’ she had been secretly practising, deafening Kanon completely.
Kanon rested in the hospital for a few days, recovering from her recent outburst. The first time her father had visited her, the man broke down in tears. Hibiki had asked if Kanon was all better, but, now unable to hear at all, Kanon replied;
“Father… I can’t hear you.”
Theme Song:
Skills/Abilities: Kanon’s possesses incredible chakra control which she uses to manipulate sound for her techniques. She’s also highly intelligent, having achieved high marks in the Academy’s written exams. She isn’t a very able taijutsu user, mostly relying on her sound techniques to aid her in battle. Kanon’s stamina and chakra levels aren’t anything too special either, labeled as average for a ninja her age. She seems to have a certain, undiscovered talent for genjutsu, however. Surprise attacks aren’t her thing either, since she can’t exactly hear anything, whether it’s other people or herself.
Special Traits: Kanon’s greatest weapons are her intelligence and immense chakra control. She’s also quite fast on her feet too.
Jutsu:
Canon Jutsu: Basic Academy Techniques
Custom Jutsu:
Name of Technique: Crack
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Mid range
Nature Type: None
Handseals: None
Description: Clapping her hands together, Kanon uses her chakra to amplify the sound emitted. This may cause the target to feel dizzy, and, in some cases when the sound is loud enough, nauseous.
Weakness: Requires accurate concentration, or else the sound won’t be as lethal.
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Name of Technique: Shatter
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Close range
Nature Type: None
Handseals: None
Description: After appearing inches away from the enemy, Kanon snaps her fingers, using her chakra to amplify the sound emitted. Since the target is in such close range, the person may be knocked unconscious, or, in extremely rare cases where the sound is loud enough, killed.
Weakness: Requires great speed to perform without the enemy blocking the attack. If the user isn’t fast enough, it leaves them open to many attacks.
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Name of Technique: Erupt
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Close range
Nature Type: None
Handseals: None
Description: Kanon claps her hands over the ears over her opponent and amplifies the sound emitted immensely. The noise is guaranteed to knock the enemy unconscious, and, if enough chakra is inputted, can cause the person’s head to explode.
Weakness: Requires extreme focus and chakra control. If not done properly, the attack will be ineffetive.
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Close range
Nature Type: None
Handseals: None
Description: Kanon claps her hands over the ears over her opponent and amplifies the sound emitted immensely. The noise is guaranteed to knock the enemy unconscious, and, if enough chakra is inputted, can cause the person’s head to explode.
Weakness: Requires extreme focus and chakra control. If not done properly, the attack will be ineffetive.
Summons
None as of now
