Metal Head

The Underwater world of Atlas: The Beginning

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I didn't mean to nitpick you into leaving the RP, Like Odd said the backstory doesn't need to be 100% right this second.

However if you truly don't want to put any more effort into reading the lore and developing a character that fits it I suggest sticking to the Free Roleplay section of the site.

This is Casual Roleplay where its expected to produce 1 or 2 paragraphs per post. Id expect at least that much in a backstory before its considered complete.

@Tsukai

Whoa whoa bro, I play in casual , so no reason to go low with the free comment especially after i said good luck and all , the backstory wasn't the problem of why i am dropping.
Leaving on a friendly terms, lets just leave it at that. 🤘

The Underwater world of Atlas: The Beginning

This isn't for me, i wish ya the best of luck on it tho 👍

Word association Game!

Angels

The Underwater world of Atlas: The Beginning

Is it okay now?

D&D 5e Rime of the Frostmaiden.

We all planned on meeting at the hall right?

@Chro2

Makes sense to me, breakfast and all...

Also, geeesh, some ppl are nit picky on misspelled words...not here, another RP i signed up for.

The Underwater world of Atlas: The Beginning

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@HEAVY METAL

So far, my suggestions are

Change "Wnere are you from" to "Where are you from"

and I strongly believe Calligraphy to be an Advanced skill. Odd, please correct me if Im wrong, however I'd like it to change from quick skill to advanced skill.

*edit*

Putting large pictures into hiders helps people look over the Character sheet a little better. I suggest this layout-

[Hider=Appearance] link image here [/ hider]
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Im doing the best i can with this crappy tablet, sorry

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@OddApproved
Updated, let me know if i need to change anything.

The Underwater world of Atlas: The Beginning

Too nitpicky for my taste, good luck on it, I'm sure it'll be fun for others. 👍

The Underwater world of Atlas: The Beginning

Hey ,I'm gonna drop Pops, and make someone different, surface dweller, Monk style.

D&D 5e Rime of the Frostmaiden.

JITTER

"Another five minutes...huh?" Jitter rubs his eyes, blinking them several times before slowly opening them.
"What am I doing here? , well I was sleeping, until you woke me up."
The halfling stood up, brushing the hay off his clothes, and outta his hair.
He reaches into his pocket, and lays a copper coin in the stable man's hand.
" A Meadowbrook always pays for his lodging my good man."
Jitter folded up his blanket and stored it away in his backpack.
"Thank you sir for the wake up call, have a nice day, as one can have in this miserable weather." said Jitter as he exited the barn, and walked to Mead Hall.
" I got three copper coins, wonder if I can get anything for that?" he thought to himself.
Opening the door, Jitter waved his hand to any patrons inside, as he made his way to the fireplace to warm up.
"Good morning all."