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New Atlantis, Atlantis

The sound of knuckles rapping against the door of Sue Storm’s quarters interrupted her concentration. She looked up from the book of Atlantean history she had borrowed from Namor’s personal library to see the figure opening the door. It was Namora – Princess Namora, as she was referred to by her subjects – and from the look on her face she was no more pleased to be speaking to Sue than she ever was.

“The king requests your presence, surface dweller.”

Sue sighed, placed an ornate golden bookmark on the page she was reading, and closed her book. Ever since she had arrived in Atlantis, Sue had been reading all she could about its history and culture. There were tomes Namor kept locked away in his library that predated the Great Deluge. It had taken a while for quarters to be built to her specification but now she had almost settled she found the reading therapeutic. She had left her old life and its many problems behind. Though Namora seemed to enjoy making a point of reminder her she didn’t belong.

“You know, Namora, I don’t expect you to ever like me, but the least you could do is use my actual name from time to time. Which is Susan – or Sue – for what it’s worth. Not that you didn’t know that already.”

“Your presence in New Atlantis defiles our great capital. I do not know what power you have over my cousin, but I do know this – I do not trust you or the ‘advice’ you give him. Your loyalties are to the surface world, not ours.”

They exited Sue’s quarters and made the long way out through the Hallway of Sorrows. It was called as such because it marked the spot where Shalako had been murdered by the Mer-people some nine thousand years ago. Every guard they walked past knelt down on one knee, fist touching the ground and head lowered in reverence at Namora’s presence. That particular detail of Atlantean life was still something Sue was struggling to get to grips with.

“Sometimes you talk about the surface world as if it were another planet.”

In one hard, unforgiving look, Namora made clear to Sue how little she thought of the people living above the waves. “It might as well be.”

Once through the Hallway of Sorrows, they passed through the Great Hall. Sue had never seen anything like it. Every surface was coated in gold. The chairs, the tables, even the immaculately clean knives and forks that lined the tables shone with a light so blinding it could blind. The hall had been home to some of the most dramatic moments in Atlantean history – among them Guy Gardner’s mock-trial the last time a surface-dweller visited Atlantis. Though Sue knew better than to mention that particular incident in Namora’s presence.

“The way I see it, what’s good for Atlantis is good for the surface world. I’m here to help foster peace between our two worlds, Namora. The kind of peace that will keep both of our peoples safe. Surely that’s a good thing?”

“There is an Atlantean saying,” Namora said as she shoved open the hall doors. “Those that want peace must find it at the end of a trident.”

Once through the doors, Namora left them to swing back in Sue’s face without a care. Sue caught the heavy doors in time, having learned to expect such things from the princess, and used all her might to keep them open long enough to slide through and jog after Namora.

Once she’d caught up with the princess she offered her a knowing a smile. “We have a similar saying on the surface world, funnily enough.”

The last leg of the journey the pair made in silence. Climbing the tower to Namor’s study was no easy task, not even for one of Namora’s sturdy Atlantean constitution. It was, of course, designed to be difficult to reach. Though Namor was no great reader he valued his privacy almost more than anyone Sue had ever met. The brash, aggressive man she had met on the deck of the Pegasus had proved to have hidden depths. It was why, despite herself, Sue had agreed to stay in Atlantis far longer than their ‘arrangement’ had required.

A dozen guards stood sentinel outside of the king’s refuge. As was custom, they knelt before Namora and the princess gestured to them to return to their feet. As she reached for the handle to her cousin’s study the door opened and an unfamiliar man stepped through it.

Decked out in black and purple armour, the man offered Namora only a smile. His face was hidden behind a silver cowl with orange lenses covering his eyes and yet Sue could still sense that there something unusual about the man. It was only then that she realised that unlike the others, the man had not knelt.

“Princess.”

Namora nodded nervously and stepped out of the man’s path. He smiled at the princess again, though his eyes showed no indication of warmth or kindness, before sneering dismissively in Sue’s direction. With that the armoured man disappeared down the tower’s stairs, taking four of the guards with him, and Namora gestured to Sue that she should step inside.

As Sue shut the door behind her she noticed for the first time there was worry in Namora’s eyes – and despite the way she had treated her since arriving in Atlantis, she could not help but feel moved by it. She cast the thought from her mind as she turned to greet the king. Namor was sat behind a desk that had large, detailed map of the seven seas strewn across it.

“Welcome, Susan, I trust you find your lodgings satisfactory?”

“Satisfactory doesn’t do them justice,” Sue smiled. “You have been very generous to me, Namor, although I can’t say the same for Namora.”

“The princess has been known to bear grudges. Since Namora's encounter with the one you call Gardner she has developed something of a mistrust for all surface-dwellers. Rest assured that in time she will come to accept your position as my servant just as my other subjects have.”

Sue had two points of contention with Namor’s assertion. Though Namora’s disgust at Sue’s presence in Atlantis was more open than the average Atlanteans, Sue was under no illusions that they felt any differently about the subject. Even a king as powerful as Namor could not compel his subjects to love. The other issue Sue had – which she had addressed several times before – was with the word servant.

“Advisor.”

Namor waved a dismissive hand in her direction as if the distinction was completely meaningless to him. “Yes, yes, as you wish, Susan.”

Sue glanced down at map atop Namor’s desk. There were figurines in battle formations, big swooping arrows indicating troop movements, and in-depth explanations as to varying current levels in different battlezones. Though the Atlanteans possessed holographic technology that far outstripped the surface world’s, Namor was a traditionalist. In fact, from Sue’s reading it was exactly his traditionalism – and his considerable might, of course – that helped him capture the Atlantean throne.

Out of the corner of Sue’s eye she spotted one target on the map that was far away from the others. From what she could make out it was on the northeast coast of the United States, perhaps Maine or even New Brunswick in Canada, and it appeared a single cell had been sent there. When she strained to deduce more, Namor pushed the figures atop the map aside and stepped away from the desk.

“Who was that man you were speaking with?”

“His name is Orm,” Namor explained. “He is one of my most trusted generals. During the Glorious Reclamation, Orm lead the siege at Xebel that helped break the back of the incompetents sitting atop the throne. Atlantis owes him a great debt for bringing that den of iniquity to heel.”

Try as she might, Sue couldn't seem to put the worry she had seen in Namora's eyes out of her mind. “Your cousin seemed afraid of him.”

“She is right to be afraid. There is a madness in Orm’s bloodline. Atlantean children pass horror stories of his exploits at Xebel around to this very day – and with good reason. Orm’s cruelty is single-minded, obsessive almost. He respects no title, courtesy, or tradition. Only strength.”

Namor stood before the window of his study and looked out across it. From it all of New Atlantis could be seen. It was a city twice the size of New York, with a hundred times the life forms, and yet it was only a fraction of Namor’s dominion. It was clear from the way he stared out at his kingdom possessively that he alone possessed the strength to command Orm’s respect.

“He sounds like a dangerous man to keep around.”

A devilish smile crossed the king’s face that put the worst of Sue's worries at ease. “Perhaps, Susan, but only for the enemies of Atlantis.”


Sue wandered over to Namor’s side and joined him staring out at New Atlantis. It was beautiful. Perhaps she got caught up in the beauty or perhaps it had been so long since she had thought of the surface world that when Namor slipped his fingers through hers she did not resist. His hands were rough, but warm, and the gentleness he showed in pulling her towards him surprised Sue. The king was about to plant a kiss on her lips when she regained her senses and pushed him back.

Sue clumsily tried to change subject. “How goes the struggle against Black Manta and the Drowned? I overheard one of the guards talking about the attack on Tlapallan this morning. Apparently there were heavy losses? Perhaps it’s time that you considered the peace proposa-”

“There will be no suing for peace with fanatics that murder innocent people. That terrorist’s head will be mine. His band of followers think they can take refuge among the barbarians at Maarzon? They are wrong. With every day that passes, we learn more about their organisation and its movements. With every day that passes, the net encircles them more. As Poseidon is my witness, Black Manta is not long for this world.”

Namor strode back to his desk and took his seat. His mood had shifted, as it so often did, and it was clear from the way he was scribbling onto some parchment that his appetite for conversation had gone. Sue's excitement had given way to guilt, but now dread had taken its place. As she stared out across New Atlantis, she couldn't help but feel that things in Atlantis were going to get a lot worse before they got better.
If only to present the other side of the argument here, I have a good portion of my season planned out – twenty-eight posts sketched out to date, with about half of those fully written in the break between Season One and Two. I wanted to tell four very different (albeit interconnected) stories with the Fantastic Four this season and there's no way that would have worked without extreme planning on my part.

I almost always entirely plan my posts, if not my entire season, out. Yet I manage, as I did last season, to factor in interaction as and where it makes sense. So there's certainly no right way of doing things.

SHIELD Outpost Nineteen, New York

It was the middle of the night and a routine arrest during a guns bust had resulted in the acting director of SHIELD being woken from her sleep. The cause? An eighteen-year-old boy named Michael Holt. Maria Hill stood behind reinforced two-way glass watching the young man who was currently handcuffed to a table. By her side was Reed Richards. The hair around his temples had greyed somewhat and he looked to have lost some weight but otherwise he seemed in rude health. In fact, he seemed positively excited by the prospect of sitting down with Holt.

“You want to explain to me what’s so important about this kid?”

“Michael Holt is much more than just a kid, Maria. He scored higher on SHIELD’s APTI-SMRT test than I did – on his first time of trying.”

Maria made next to no effort to disguise her tiredness. “Is that meant to mean something to me? Because I’m drawing a blank.”

“The boy didn’t even finish high school. Can you imagine how intelligent you have to be to produce the kind of technology he does without the benefit of a proper education? It’s incredible.”

Reed could barely hide his enthusiasm. Had he not been so focused on Holt, he would have noticed that the tone of his voice had managed to rub Maria the wrong way. Reed had never been a field agent, or law enforcement of any kind for that matter, so the technology was fawning over was still abstract to him. He had never seen it used up close and personal on innocent civilians like Hill had.

“No, Reed, I think ‘criminal’ is the word you’re looking for on this one. Did you read his file? We picked Holt up selling weapons out of his friend’s to some small-time crooks. They were planning a heist. People could have been killed using the weapons he designed.”

“I’m under no illusions about the boy’s past,” Reed saif a grimace. “But it’s not his past I’m interested in, Maria, it’s his future. There’s still time for Holt to turn things around with the right guidance.”

The super scientist meant to provided that guidance. Richards was listless for all of about a week after the Fantastic Four had gone their separate ways, but he soon found his calling. It had been the message from the other Reed Richards that had given him the inspiration he needed. He drew up a list and saw to it that it ended up in Maria’s hands before the hour was out. Michael Holt was at the top of it.

“You know, when you told me you wanted to start a school, I thought your intake would be a little more distinguished.”

Reed looked to the acting director of SHIELD with a grateful smile. “Does that mean you’ll let me take him?”

Hill let out a weary sigh.

“It means that if Holt so much as forgets to pay his cell phone bill, he’s going to be seeing in his twenties from the inside of a padded cell in The Raft. If I agree to this, there can be no mistakes. Do you understand me?”

Reed considered the statement. Everything that had gone wrong for him and Ben, Johnny, and Sue since they had arrived in this world played through his head – being tortured in Latveria, the incident with Namor, and Hector Hammond's destroying not only the Baxter Building, but the timecraft too being chief among them. He figured he was due some good luck. And if anyone was worth taking the risk for, it was Michael Holt.

“No mistakes,” Reed promised. “You have my word on that.”

Hill signalled to a nearby SHIELD agent and Reed followed after them. He could feel butterflies in his stomach as the agent unlocked the door to the cell and gestured to Richards to step through. Holt turned expectedly towards the door and scowled in Reed’s direction, who in turn responded with a collegial smile and sat across the table from him.

“Good afternoon, Michael. You don’t mind if I call you Michael, do you? Mister Holt seems a little formal and … well, given the circumstances, I don’t think that we need to trouble ourselves with formalities.”

Holt looked as bemused by Reed’s easy charm as he was by the super-scientist’s sudden appearance. “What the fuck do you want?”

“I want to help you, Michael.”

Holt nodded his head gently as Reed spoke. At first his dark brown eyes appeared as if they were fixed on him, but after a second or two it became clear that Holt was staring straight through him, almost as if he wasn’t there at all. He seemed agitated. His knee bounced up and down beneath the table restlessly as he tossed and turned Reed’s statement in his head.

“Help me, huh? Well, why don’t you start by doing what I told that dyke behind the the glass and getting me my fucking lawyer?”

There was no malice in Holt’s words. They were designed to shock, not to offend. Even his swearing seemed put on, affected for Reed’s sake, like a performance that Holt slipped in and out of with ease to keep people from getting too close to him. Reed had seen it before. Breaking through Holt’s barriers would be a difficult task – but he knew where the young man would end up if he didn’t manage to.

“The woman behind that glass is the only person standing between you and a prison cell.”

A derisive snort escaped from Holt’s squat nose.

“You think I’m afraid of doing a little time? I’ve got more family in prison than I do on the outside. I ain’t got shit to be scared of in prison. Go ahead and put me in there. Lock me up and throw away the key for all I care, man. Just stop wasting my fucking time.”

“That would an incredible waste,” Reed sighed. “You’re a very intelligent young man, Michael, and I think you know that. The weapons you designed? Quite impressive. Not perfect, but then again what is at your age? Some of my designs were as rough around the edges as yours.”

For the first time Holt’s guard seemed to slip – if only by an inch. Whether he knew it or not, there was a flicker of exhilaration in his eyes when Reed had mentioned his designs. Since SHIELD had gone public with the ‘return’ of Reed Richards and co., he’d barely been able to travel in public being mobbed. He was one of the most famous men in the world. Or at least, he’d assumed the place of one of the most famous men in the world. The regard that Holt held Reed in wasn’t his regard to own, but he used it to his advantage nonetheless. Perhaps sensing the ploy, the young man slunk back into his seat and shrugged his shoulders casually.

“Rough around the edges? What the fuck are you talking about? My designs are airtight.”

Reed smiled. He looked towards the two-way glass and made a gesture to the SHIELD agent waiting on the other side. The agent re-entered the room with one of Michael’s designs in hand. It was a handgun that had been confiscated earlier that night. Except instead of packing snub-noses, it dealt out the kind of repulsor blasts that Tony Stark had made use of as Iron-Man. Reed made a show of inspecting the weapon.


“Oh, I don’t know about that. The makeshift arc reactor you designed is impressive given it was made out of used car parts – but inefficient. These weapons wouldn’t have lasted longer than maybe a week or two. And then what, Michael? What would you have done when your customers came looking for a refund?”

Holt seemed tickled by the suggestion his designs were less than perfect. “See, now I know you don’t know what you’re talking about.”

With breath-taking ease, Reed took the weapon apart. In three swipes, he removed the arc reactor and set it down on the table between the two of them. Holt stared down at his weapon, now in several pieces, and gulped hard. Reed could sense the young man starting to realise that perhaps not everything he’d read about the world’s most famous super-scientist had been hype. In fact, most of it had done him a disservice.

He was about to ask Reed a question when the door to the cell opened. In the doorway stood the woman Michael had described as a ‘dyke’ only moments earlier – Maria Hill – and the SHIELD agent that had brought Holt’s weapon into the room. It was clear from the look on Hill’s face that this time they had designs on more than the weapon.

“Come on, Richards, it’s time to leave. The boy’s obviously not interested in joining your little school. I don’t know why you insisted on meeting him in the first place – I told you he didn’t have what it took. Do you believe me now?”

Reed stood up from his seat abruptly and placed a paternal hand on Holt’s shoulder.

“It was a pleasure to meet you, Michael. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavours.”

“Wait, what?!” Holt shouted. “Where are you going?”

“What was it that you said earlier? ‘Lock you up and throw away the key’? Well, I can’t pretend to be an expert in law enforcement but I believe this is the part where they do that.”

There was panic in Michael Holt’s eyes. For the first time since he’d been dragged in by the SHIELD agents, he appeared to realise the extent of the trouble he was in – and that he had squandered his once chance at redemption. He shouted to Reed as reached the doorway in a desperate attempt to stop him from leaving.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa. Just wait a second, alright? You didn’t say anything about a school. Look, I know I fucked up, man. I know that. I was only running those weapons to get the hell away from the group home they have me staying in. That place is a hellhole, man. I can barely breathe up in there, let alone think.”

Hill shot Reed an impatient look. He acknowledged it, but looked back towards Holt, and let out a disappointed sigh. Perhaps in preparation for his looming career change, Richards body language became less that of a scientist and more one of a teacher that had been let down by one of their students.

“With a mind like yours that is a great shame, Michael.”

Holt shrugged his shoulders. Suddenly all of the aggressiveness that he had been affecting began to melt away and the real Michael Holt came into sight. Instead of putting on a front or performing, he seemed to give true consideration to what Reed Richards was offering him – and what the ramifications of accepting it might mean. It was a welcome step towards progress.

“So if I go with you, then what? I gotta walk around in a dumb blazer and shorts? Because I think I’d rather do the time than sit in some dusty ass classroom looking like the Fresh Prince.”

“There won’t be any blazers,” Reed smiled as he extended his hand towards Holt. “And there definitely won’t be any dusty classrooms.”

A resigned look appeared on Michael's face and he reluctantly shook Reed’s hand. “Fuck it.”

The nod that passed between Reed and Hill confirmed his gratitude for her intervention. He had worried for a second there that he might not have been able to reach the young man. Saving the world wasn’t enough anymore, Reed needed to teach them – and to do that he needed a white knight. Though Hill had her doubts, Reed was sure he had found the leader his project needed in Michael Holt. For the first time, Richards spoke the name of his project outloud.

“Welcome to the Future Foundation, young man.”
Stark wasn't really well-established enough in the game to warrant being slavishly beholden to "canon" on this occasion.
This sounds like an excellent game.

All men of class and refinement should be interested in joining such a game. I say this as a completely neutral observer with absolutely no connection to the game, of course.
Morden Man's Journal. October 4th, 2018:

Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This OOC thread is afraid of me. I have seen it's true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over, all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"...

...and I'll look down, and whisper "no."
Why does it feel like you're all speaking in code or something? Was there a scandal? Did Wraith try and fuck Morden's wife or something?


I go away for one fucking evening and not only have you people invented a wife for me, you've fucked my invented wife to boot.
Oh Sonuvabi--

This is what I get for being nice and asking rather than just snatching @Master Bruce's toys off of him and pushing him over in the sandpit...


The last guy that tried that ended up ... well, you don't want to know.

Let's just say there's a reason no-one hear's from Dedonus anymore.
Not to be a complete cheat about it, but my general hope for everyone is two things: to have fun, obviously, and to continue to build on their characters. Obviously given the Year One setting, most if not all of our characters grew last season from one person into another, and I can only hope that it goes an even extra step further, because there's nothing I like to read more than a journey of progression that makes a true character arc. I think that's more important, even, than completing a particular story arc. If your character has reached the other side a changed man/woman, you've done well.

Also @Lord Wraith more sex scenes plz.


What you're saying is that maybe the real awards were the friends we made along the way?
#Magic

There's nothing wrong with off-topic chatter in the OOC thread but don't take the piss.

People live in other timezones and struggle to traipse through our usually quite fast-moving OOC thread as is without one word spam responses that don't contribute anything.
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