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well that's rude, whole ice shards being thrown as a welcome

@liferusher care to make a duette of our intro or shall I follow your lead?
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Im waiting for my character to get accepted


I didn't notice you posted her lol
@liferusher

Howdy-ho partner you still with us?
Bastion


Soma crossed her arms but decided not to say anything, she didn’t too much like it when people just blindly accepted something without looking for the deeper truth; Soma wasn’t a ‘let sleeping dogs lie’ kind of person. Shaking her head, she followed the two back to the restaurant to get a second bowl of Udon figuring it would be quite sometime before getting another meal meant it would be wise to just eat up enough to tide her over. She ate with poor posture and struggled to use utensils, lacking basic etiquette and a general all-around loss of basic home training; though that is to say she didn’t make the attempt and where she was sloppy at first the girl gradually became more in control. Soma listened to the new girl talk obviously shy about talking to others maybe just nervous about meeting new people especially other magical girls.

“Don’t let it bother you until earlier today I hadn’t spoken to other magical girls other than my sister for seven years or so” Soma explained finishing up her second dish having devoured it just as quickly as the first filling up that black pit that had been growing in her stomach. “Their easy pickings by themselves but grouped up together can be a complete irritation for example being ambushed in the middle of the night when you just walked into town” rolling her eyes taking another few steps to the side, she wasn’t going to let that go for a long time something about Miso city screamed that something was hidden here.

In the midst of herself imposed irritation Soma caught the leftovers of Luna’s explanation “Fail to upho...oh I get it, you sure that’s a good idea, those girls seem to be very irritable” Soma explained planting her hands on her hips “I’m down to go anywhere and do anything long as it's interesting, I’m just saying might be a fight waiting”




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Ah, I think I'll wait till you have the Light girls crash the party and then execute a fight between Soma and Eve, Family reunion and all should be very tear-jerking

@TheWindel

Btw who is partnered up with Eve
cool now I need to figure out how to introduce her
@TheWindel@KoL

I believe thats everything


@TheWindel

More changes made and the Backgrounds been edited
@TheWindel

I legit just re-wrote her abilities like a minute before you posted lol I'll limit the water and change the last one
@Lonewolf685

Alright...so I to look up who Tobi is and I sorta agree and I can make changes to make it so it's easier to fight it but I'd say she's closer to Kisame than anyone else

The blood manipulation ability is exactly as it describes a self-imposed buff and blood flow is a good chunk of adrenaline, in fact, the way it is written is the exact method in which the human body triggers the rush in itself. To make it easier to understand the ability is the exact same as Monkey D. Luffy from One Piece's gear second skill

And the curse is it really all that different than a blessing if you switch the viewpoints? For example, if I called the ability Tidal's eye and structured the wording to be more like a blessing would you still say the same thing even though it sounds more light-hearted?

everything else...is understandable and I'll change it though the backstory is the core of the character and its personality I'll have to delete her and make a new one if it can't be kept mostly intact
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