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19 days ago
Current Ethical issues aside, AI prose is just really bad.
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27 days ago
She wanted to read, she wanted to write, but the main thing she wanted was something to fight
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1 yr ago
Make it clear that you don't need him to be reading Dante tomorrow. Also suggest it would be fun if you had a private language that you could use to mock English speakers in secret.
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2 yrs ago
Luckily history suggests an infinite ability for people to be shit heads ;)
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3 yrs ago
Achmed the Snake
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Early 30's. I know just enough about everything to be dangerous.

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Yria laughed. It was a bitter mirthless sound, like glass shattering. The music thrummed conclusively and the zero gravity dance above grew more intense. Sayeeda watched as items, dropped drinks and personal items floated to the sides of the zero g bubble and slipped efficiently into disguised collection tubes. Presumably they were stored somewhere and those foolish enough not to secure their belongings could collect them.

“Believe it or not there is little profit in double crossing you,” Yria said as she tapped her fingernail on a glass of some sort of fizzy liquor. The woman’s tone was slightly regretful. It was probably true, after the way they had marched into Gnorlaac’s lair and declared what they were offering. It had been a risky move, to let people know the treasure they carried, but it also meant Gnorlaac had to be careful about simply murdering them out of hand. It would be bad for business. There was no honor among thieves, but a certain ruthless practicality did prevail.

“We are willing to make the transfer provided you have the merchandise with you?” In lieu of a response Sayeeda hefted the case onto the table between them and cracked the lid. The precious mineral shone its soft glow. Yria lifted the lid slightly with a fingertip, revealing shaped explosive packed into the roof of the case. She arched and eyebrow at the pair of mercenaries.

“One can never be too careful,” Sayeeda said, her tone a touch defensive. Yria snorted and waved to one of her thugs who took out a datapad and began to type. Sayeeda felt a slight thrill imagining the money that was about to be deposited.

“The account number please…” Yria’s forehead exploded in a spray of blood and brains. A piece of bone traced a bloody line across Sayeeda’s cheek. The boom of a large calibre gun was deafening and people began to scream. One of the guards leapt to his feet upending the table in a spray of spilled liquor. Another grabbed for his pistol, pulling it free of the holster with a snap. Sayeeda swung the case by the handle, slamming into the temple of the would be gunmen. The thug collapsed to the floor a half a heart beat before three more booming shots ricocheted off the metalized floor nearby. Screaming panic spread through the crowd. A half dozen other concealed guns appeared from nearby guests. It wasn’t a coordinated ambush just other low lives who were able to beat the scanners.

“What the fuck is going on!” Sayeeda screamed at Neil as she pulled her own pistol from the bottom of the case. With a flick of the wrist she tossed the second weapon to Neil and dove sideways behind the low bar to seek cover.
@Naril I hope you feel better!

Holy Smokes @Penny That background scene is dynamite! Seriously, Bravo.


Thank you that is very kind :)
Dear Father,

I write to you to inform you that a Rebellion against the Empire has broken out on New Concordia and potentially the entire Eastern Cross. Imperial forces on New Concordia have been completely destroyed. All loyalists on the planet have been captured or killed. I believe that the Rebels lack the genetic codes to access the PEA network.

I have with me Solae Falia, a Marquissa and the sole survivor of the Falia family. The rebels are hunting her for her genetic codes but we have managed to get off planet. I do not know who to trust other than you but depend on you to help me to do my duty.

Solae and I are betrothed. I do not know if we will survive for this to be of import to anyone but ourselves but if I should perish and she should live I will depend on your honor to do all in your power to protect and support her.

Rene Quentain - Acting Captain General for New Concordia - Imperial Marine Corp

It was a cold and clinical letter Rene thought but even those few paragraphs had taken him the better part of an hour to assemble. His father was not a man to be swayed by emotion and everything depended on him taking the message seriously and acting accordingly. The message would need to be updated as they gathered more information but for the moment it would have to do. Rene didn’t know where or how they would find a PEA to get it out but taking even a small step made him feel better. With the a click he downloaded the message to a small memory chip and slipped it into his pocket.

“Mistress Solae is awaiting you in the cargo area,” Mia whispered with breathless anticipation. Rene started at the interjection. Some part of his mind had expected Solae to sleep until they reached the end of the jump, although now that he thought about it consciously there was no reason that should be so. The jump chronometer spun downwards like an hourglass counting off the hours and minutes until they dropped back into real space. The air temperature had already begun to increase by a slight but noticeable amount. Friction from the tiny proportion of the ship that interfaced with the material universe had begun to stress the cooling system. That was one of the normal limiters for jumps. Vessels that operated in hard vacuum could only handle waste heat by a slow process of radiation, or by dipping into an atmosphere or passing through another substrate, like a nebula to gain an assist from convection. In that regard bigger ships were actually able to jump further than smaller ones, their large surface areas allowing a more efficient radiation of waste heat. The fact that the Bonaventure was already heating up suggested that the drives could use a tune up, a task for which Rene didn’t even pretend to be qualified. Well if it were a perfect universe many things would have been different.

He found Solae in the cargo hold as Mia had promised. She was in the process of prying open an access panel that probably hadn’t been opened in their lifetimes. With a sudden snap the rust and void frozen seam gave and the panel crashed open in a cloud of dust. Stars above how had the vessel kept functioning for so long without even the pretense of maintenance. Solae peered inside the panel, evidently she either knew what she was doing or Mia had told her what to look for. Watching the stunning noblewoman work was a surreal experience, like watching a sculpture by one of the Masters come to life and start cleaning a floor. Rene suddenly remembered what it had been like for him when he had found himself in the Marines, exposed to a world of physical labour he had, until that point, only a theoretical knowledge of.

“Feels strange dosen’t it,” he said as he crossed the deck grating to where she stood.

“I didn’t think I’d ever get used to having to do things like this myself. I used to say to myself that I was the first Du Quentain to do anything useful in the last three hundred years.”


I also thought of a faerie changeling but its a little too similar to Morgan, except with more frozen death.
Kind of torn between my skeezy regular wizard and my skeezy illegal immigrant wizard....
Ok so Ellie can definitely provide some medical attention/wake Malone up, although I cant imagine there are much in the way of medical supplies about seeing all of her baggage was abandoned at the Jet Port. Prosaic as it sounds we probably need a walmart run to supply ourselves with food and equipment :P
I can neither confirm nor deny that Naril and I are the same person.
Of course I read my own stuff and wince at some of my work :P
I reread most of it today, some great writing!
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