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@Rune, This is a fucking Beast. I wouldn't want to be this girls enemy, she's packing some serious heat.

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Here, still needing approval/critique of my Master, Caster, And Beast.

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@Xlegs
Dude, your Framework is awesome, and I love the special ability.

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Okay, I think Nidhogg is finally ready for duty, waiting for GM approval.

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Gnar The Missing Link said
Raijin, I'm really sorry... I'm not trying to be difficult here. :/ I'm just trying to be fair as best as I can so that he can fit in with the others on an even level, and I honestly truly appreciate you putting up with me. Sorry about the Special Ability, I was writing it up, and didn't notice that you changed it. The new Ability is actually a lot better, but change the "He can also make and carry larger, and more powerful version's of his matrix codes" to a temporary thing.And, if you want a variety for your primary, then I think that'll be fine- however, remove the gun-based weapons. He shouldn't have any gun-based weapons aside from his Special Ability.How does that all sound?

Sounds good to me. I can work with melee only and range added by special ability, plus I thought the boost being temporary was implied. I'll make that more clear in my edit. Also, I don't think your being difficult at all, if something is OP, or doesn't work in your RP, then you should have the right to criticise it how you see fit.

Tatsua Aiisen said
It's totally fine, really, nothing to feel sorry about. Everybody has to get a feel for things somehow, and we're all working together here to build the most enjoyable possible roleplay for everybody! Keep up that cool attitude, and I assure you that you'll be well liked around here, even if you do need to be corrected from time to time~!

Thanks, its been something that has had me worried in a couple RP's. But seriously, some people's responce to critique is completely over-blown, like the two guys who quit this RP. One for a character that anyone could tell wouldn't be accepted by a military installation, the other just for what was being referenced, I think. I seriousky don't understand why Asmodeus left, since it clearly states in the freakin' title what this is based off of, so id he didn't like the anime, why did he even bother.

Whoops, got into a bit of a rant there, sorry about that.

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Gnar The Missing Link said
@Raijin: Alright Raijin... There are still problems here unfortunately. The Pilot is perfectly fine, but the Framework, I believe, may need to be overhauled.I don't like this. It fulfills two roles; melee and ranged supremacy, and even though it can switch between them all, the weapon-grade would be on a level on a mass production level rather than on the experimental level like the others since the Nanobots are doing so much work. If you want, pick only one weapon, and one weapon only.After a lot of thinking, I've decided that something like this shouldn't really be on a Pointman, as it belongs more so as a Special Power, or on a Sniper or someone from the back lines. I'm also making a special note of this because you would be stealing the thunder of someone else's role.This is... very problematic. While I do like the idea of nanobots, I myself can seem many problems arising with it in the RP when certain fights do break out. Comparing that special ability to the others we have, it's VERY overwhelming, and it wouldn't make sense in-story for just one Framework to have such a power. I honestly think it would need to be changed to something else.Edit: Oh, and also, there's a limit to only one Sign-up per Player.

I was kinda going for a variety over power kinda vibe with the Omni-matrix, but if you really don't want it, than I'll think of something. I can see your reasoning on the second and will fix it accordingly when I cn get on a computer(currently using my DS, which has a character limit, much to my chargin, that makes it impossible to edit Nidhogg properly with possibly erasing some stuff). My only objection is the Special ability, for you see, I already changed it from what you have up there, at the behest of GreenGoat, so I don't know why you have my old one. As for the pilot thing, consider him deleted. Glad I didn't put anytime I to him yet. Sorry that I seem to suck at making balanced/not op characters. It must be a realpain for you to have to go over what's wrong with my characters multiple times, instead of just once.

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I fixed it, and caved a little on the Primary after rereading it. I do thank you for your criticism, GreenGoat, as it wouldn't be any fun to have an OP monster on the field, even if we are on the same side. Also, the codes that can be intergrated are only for weapons of a similar level as the other, plus the natural restction against anything outside of the Close to Mid range necessary for his position as a pointmen.

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I was going for a versatile, all offensive mech, though I do admit his last ability can be a little much. I'll nerf it a bit, but I'm sticking with the primary unless the GM says otherwise.