Raineh Daze

Fate/Esoterica

Prana Burst and Magic Resistance come from the Mana Core/Factor of the Dragon side of things. By having one, all the others kind of fall into place. Saber lookalike is to meet the quota and to confuse Lancelot. XD

Tsuriai said
I made slight edits so her Servant wouldn't necessarily be 100% screwed by being paired with her. She has sub-par capabilities now but no knowledge with which to utilize it.

So... basically Waver in terms of power. :O

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Well, it's a repurposed piece of official art. Any other appearance would seem inappropriate. :p

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Lots of raw power, no good way to use it. Would lose to Kirei or Kiritsugu, probably Kayneth. I have no idea about Kariya. She seems to have bad luck with the letter K...

Master

Name: Yukimura Hanako
Age: 22
Gender: Female
Magecraft/Abilities: Hanako does not, in the normal sense, possess magic circuits. Her family, you see, was specialised in engineering their children to have 'better' circuits. In her case, they failed to do that, and instead gave her something far, far more potent: a mana core, and all the draconic baggage this adds on. Despite the near-boundless level of power, she is unsuitable as a normal magus; the mechanisms by which they control pana are vastly different.
This immense power does have a few benefits for other Masters: since Hanako exhales prana, there is never any shortage of mana in her vicinity for magus to utilise. It also makes her incredibly easy to pinpoint for those sensitive to such things, due to sheer power.
The excess mana is something that is hard for magi to capitalise on, however: both the fact she essentially is a dragon in human form and the sheer amount of mana means that... well, she's close to immune to magecraft, with the spells that all but the most exemplary throw around just sliding off to no effect.
Hanako's only 'active' ability is to release this energy in bursts, for the sake of greater agility or--theoretically--damage. Damage is only theoretical, because she owns absolutely nothing that can take the forces it gets swung with for more than a single blow without shattering.
She thinks this is some sort of reinforcement. It isn't.
Appearance: There's always one.
Equipment: She has a flat. It's full of cheap ready-made food, along with a few lengths of pipe, and a disturbing amount of specialised magical texts.
Personality: Surly and not too good at getting along with people, Hanako has a deep-running feeling of being out of place. Finding out what her family did as well as what she is has explained it, but still left her with no overall goal in life. Though in the Grail War because of the wish at the end, she has no idea what she would actually wish for.
History: Hanako was born as the heir, and final experiment, of an established magus family whose pride lay in outright engineering their descendants' magical circuits to be ever closer to some mythical ideal. It was an ability with a high degree of failure, causing them to end up with a lot of 'failed' experiments who lacked magical ability entirely.
Hanako was judged to be one of these failures, and given away to some 'mundane' family. They were of course, wrong in their estimation, but this wasn't found out until the worst possible time: their now-grown daughter had worked out there was something horribly off with her body, and hunted them down. Unimpressive magical defences failed to block this "stranger's" entry, and after a tense confrontation, she grabbed the research materials and notes she could find, then torching the building.
She doesn't know if anyone survived; they've lost any accumulated knowledge in the inferno by now.
Since then, she returned to essentially running a small-time gang and trying to make sense of the notes. Something called 'Reinforcement' keeps coming up, and she can sort of do the same thing, but it doesn't match the descriptions. The most recent batch of notes gives a template for summoning something of enormous power... Hanako has no interest in the further notes in trying to funnel that sort of power off into an unborn child to give them vast magical power. The sidenote about 'omnipotent wish-granting machine'? That's interesting.

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Um, there's one glaring problem here.

Despite not possessing magical capacity, her affinity is for bullets. Having been chosen as a Master and not possessing any magical capabilities, her Servant would be hindered because of her lacking in that department, suffering a deduction to their stats, although the specifics are not certain.

'Despite not possessing magical capacity'.

If that's the case, she can't be a Master. It takes mana to perform the summoning, mana to sustain the Servant, and mana for the Servant to act. Having no mana at all is more than a rank down, it's basically saying that if you're partnered with the detective, you don't have a snowball's chance in hell. Improper summoning can mess with ranks (Shirou) and classes (Gilles and Ryuunosuke), but lack of mana doesn't weaken the Servant, it just stops them entirely.

I mean, you can have no knowledge of magecraft and unremarkable Circuits, but you can't have no magical potential at all.* @_@

*Strictly speaking, this is inaccurate, but you'd still need magic to summon the Servant and would basically be powering them through human sacrifice.

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Rin said
I've always thought of him as Ancient Greek Batman, myself. XD

Batman does not have Servant stats. <.<

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Sorry. I was just... confused to look at Odysseus, and see a statline merrily level with Gilgamesh and Chiron, when... well, he's basically Ancient Greek Robin Hood, so I was expecting something more in line with that? ^^;

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I... have my doubts about that Archer. The stats and abilities just don't mesh properly with the identity; his statline matches the more overtly-inhuman Archers whilst his modus operandi and heritage would put him closer to Robin Hood or Emiya. His Luck is completely out of whack for a guy who spent twenty years just trying to get home, bizarrely. There's a buff from being favoured by a goddess--but no mention that two gods had it in for him before he could get home. Magic Resistance that grants near total immunity, then total immunity against things he explicitly isn't innately resistant to (succumbed to mental influence at one point in the story, needed a magic herb to resist transformation). Two of his NP's make me sad by essentially being 'things other canon characters have, only better' (and one of them is already in the RP, to boot) but the biggest thing there: no specific mention of his actual bow, but does have a bag of winds (missing: the west wind) that was in his possession for all of a day before his crew unleashed them and caused a huge storm that sent them flying back.

I'm... confused. It's like you got the identity, wrote up a list of strengths and weaknesses as well as reasons for both, then set about making all their mythological weaknesses and flaws into mechanical strengths. You've got the concept of a guile hero, but the statline and ability set has as much subtlety as Gilgamesh.

I'm sorry if this seems overly aggressive. >.<

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If I have some advice: the sword probably shouldn't specify exact restrictions on what stops its effect (Magic Resistance? It's not magecraft), since there are quite a few abilities that would negate terror. Eternal Arms Mastership makes its effect irrelevant, Bravery outright counters it, and Mental Pollution also gets in the way of such things. XD

Bleach - Legends

Held up by trying to finish a few abilities. XD

Yachiru fits into the rest of the 11th Division fine, though. :O

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Not At All Secret

Class: Saber
Spirit: Sir Lancelot du Lac
Master: TBD
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Good
Personality: Humble and polite--though he can be summoned as Berserker, underneath he is still the man revered as the perfect knight. What else is there to say? A paragon of chivalry consumed by guilt over personal failings, he will serve his Master faithfully.
Appearance: Possibly less black and more polished.

Parameters
STR: A
END: A
AGI: A+
MAG: B
LCK: B
NP: A

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: B: Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for him to be affected. (No Saber has below C-ranked Magic Resistance, and Lancelot has his ring)
Riding: A: All creatures but those of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast-rank can be used as mounts. This rank is high enough to have aptitude for the Rider Class.

Personal Skills
Eternal Arms Mastership: A+: Mastership of combat arts has reached the point of being said to be unrivaled in one's era. By complete merging of mind, body and technique, it is possible to make use of full fighting skills even when under the influence of any sort of mental hindrance.
Protection of the Fairies: is a blessing from Elementals; the capacity to increase one's Luck in dangerous situations. Activation is limited to battlefields, where it is possible to perform feats of arms. A-Ranked.

Noble Phantasms
Name: Knight of Honour
Title: A Knight Does Not Die with Empty Hands
Rank: A++
Type: Anti-Unit
Description: Allows the wielder to use anything that they can conceptually view of as a weapon as if they were a master that had spent their entire life training with it, even scraps of metal, poles, fighter jets, or others' Noble Phantasms. Normal items are raised to D-Rank Noble Phantasms whilst Saber wields them.

Name: For Someone's Glory
Title: Not For One's Own Glory
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit
Description: Hides information about the Servant, making it impossible to discern their identity or true capabilities through an unworldly fog. As Saber, he can use the ability to its fullest extent--and adopt the identity of others known for their combative abilities.

Name: Arondight
Title: The Unfading Light of the Lake
Rank: A++
Type: Anti-Unit
Description: A fairy-forged sword, and counterpart of Excalibur, it can take any attack without being scratched. Its effects are to boost Lancelot's parameters by one rank and double the effectiveness of saving throws (I presume this means his luck against such things as Gae Bolg is vastly boosted), but drawing it seals Knight of Honour and For Someone's Glory.