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@Seirei No Hai
So, for review. She's good. Clearly focused on offense. Consider mentioning that it's a rare skill to have access to this many elements at a time, rather than a common one.

@Japanese Goblin
So your Archer is fine.
As for your master, can you at least identify what a few of the runes he uses are. So it's less a random bag of everything and more a set of somewhat defined skills.

@SoCSoD
Both are accepted, but maybe not use words like "absolute" in describing his armor, since we talked in private, and you said that's just hyperbole. That way other players aren't thinking he's invincible.
As for your master, consider some way to let him communicate with others. Since chatting with other players is a must, and you can't really use your own servant as a talker for you. (Since you are unlikely to be the Master of the servant you create, and I don't want another player feeling like they have to be responsible for translating everything to others.)
@Ashen One Alright, thank you for letting me know.
So, important announcement.

For anybody who has NOT finished their Master/Servant yet. You have until the 10th. And please let me know which faction your Master will be for. At the moment, we need 3 for White Faction, and 2 for Black Faction. White faction still needs Assassin, Rider, and Caster. Black Faction needs its Saber and Archer. So if you haven't let me know what faction you're on, but you've already decided on your class, keep that in mind. Since I'm trying to keep Masters and Servants on the same faction sides.
@Dezuel@Breo Thank you both for your interest. But this RP is full. Has been for a short while. The status is set to full.
By the way, there is a link for a Discord Group.
@ADamnFiddle
So, a good character. (Please use some of the coding to make the bio look more pretty.) Some of this stuff looks fine, but it might be a case of more dangerous in practice than on paper. But accepted for now. (If I missed something that's blatant bs, let me know.)

@Seirei No Hai
Protection from Mortal Wounds (Rank A) is getting a flat no. In a movie, game, or book where story events can lead stuff to perfectly end something like this, in a RP it just seems to be an excuse to justify powerplaying. "Of course I can dodge all 1000 projectiles or defend myself from a bomb in a split second. I have Protection from Mortal Wounds that means I can." I don't think you intend it to come off that way, but combined with your spear that will pierce any defense, it's kind of a case of "My defense is perfect and my attacks are unblockable."
The rest of his stuff is pretty much okay in comparison.
@Mega BirbI'll keep you up to date. Since you were 6 in the waiting list, and we only opened up 5 extra slots. There may be somebody dropping out, since they aren't replying to messages, so you'll get that spot if they haven't replied by the 6th. I will mention your interest in caster though.
@Japanese Goblin Cool, but we'll probably be having to decide who is on what team. Since it's going to be Nazi party affiliates versus other folks.

Empire of Stone | Jonin | Squad Two

TIME: Present Day - 9:00AM | LOCATION: Amegakure - Meeting Hall | INTERACTION: @Aeolian+@Syn


Was probably the first to notice the other between himself and Erika. A buzzing beetle told him one of the four shinobi he was looking for had been spotted. Scattered amongst the crowd, the Kinzoku drew no attention, and eventually gathered back to their master and keeper. They crawled in beneath his coat, and then burrowed beneath the skin into the network of tunnels carved into his body. With the last of them already bundled away out of sight, he turned with a smile to the approaching girl from Suna. He noticed her eyes first, a frosty blue, and the light blonde tinting of her hair. She was indeed a desert flower.

Reaching out, he took the flower, letting the stem spin between his thumb and fingers. Still beautiful and a symbol of peace apparently. "Peace is so fleeting. I guess that's why flowers represent it then?" He cooed out, teasingly at the over enthusiastic shinobi who sat by his side. His hand tugging on his cape so she wouldn't sit on it.
"Since the dawn of the ether itself, our threads had already been entwined. Only death may sever it now."
"Erika. Erika Yamanaka of the Church of Heiwa."
"Erika Yamanaka of the Church of Heiwa." He spoke when she did, matching her words and smiling back with a noble grin. It wasn't soft, but it wasn't hard either. It was confident, and turned up a little on the right side. "I hope you don't mind, but I made sure to read through the full file they sent me, and a few others. It wasn't much, but your church sounds fascinating. I recall a brief time where a member of the nobility tried attracting others to it. It wasn't successful, but it was fun to hear about." Tucking the flower into the brim of his coat, the insect shinobi couldn't help but chuckle. Just something about how perky she was managed to endear her to him instantly.

The opposite case was Shizuka Ichimi. Eita barely had time to speak as the wind child rushed right in. Speaking like a million miles and hour was too slow for him. He found himself swiping a hand about, gripping the flower when the breeze knocked it from his coat. Clearing his throat, he felt... Agitated, primarily from the clear breaking of his personal bubble. This didn't help that as soon as Shizuka rested a hand on the coat, the beetles inside his body immediately went haywire. Something was touching the host! Was it bad!? But before they could do something sudden, Eita acted first, by gracefully reaching down, and grabbing the Konoha Kid's hand with two fingers. "Well, I do agree that it's soft. You see, it comes from a mammoth beetle. My family fought several other bug clans to claim ownership of it. The fur that it grows during mating season is simply divine. And it breathes like you would not believe." Eita explained as he lifted Shizuka's hand away. "But, no touching. Though considering your introduction, your name is Shizuka, correct?" He added a coy little smile as he turned to both. "I apologize, I was unaware we were doing gifts. I should have expect that. But don't worry, I'll have something for both of you as soon as our fourth and fifth arrive." Honestly he was hoping Shizuka's lack of manners wasn't indicative of some probably in Konoha's social circles.
@Mega Birb Chances are we'll have another person from the interest check drop interest. Since they haven't replied to anything since initial interest.
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