Renny

Star Wars: A New Force

@AHeartlessNobody Im fine with that. Take your time.

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@Charnobylisk nice to meet you too :)

@ProPro I volunteer for tribute. Let Michael be the first that you ravage lol.

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@AHeartlessNobody that's exactly what it is :)

Star Wars: A New Force

@AHeartlessNobody I used him a little lol. I'm not as comfortable as I will be later.

Star Wars: A New Force

Ben Solo

Odette's voice slid through the close door, her knock was the soft beginning of her voice. The night before was...enlightening. Spending time with her, learning from her; it gave him a glimpse of the possible peace that he could obtain there. He had slept very little that night, battling with his dark and light elements respectively. From hating Han, to love his mother, to admiring his uncle, to feeling intense interest in Odette.

He turned to look at the door, the sturdy cushion he laid head on sunk in response. Solo felt her behind the door, felt her caution. She was very aware of how sensitive he could be. That bothered him slightly.

"I'm up." he answered her softly.

Not a second went by since his arrival had he not felt the light baring down on him. Along with an expensive hole barreling inside ever further, a dark spire if he had to put a form to it. Ben sighed as he sat up and twisted his body off the edge of his bed. The floor was chilly to him and his toes felt tingly. Minutes went by as he cleaned his face, pondered his place, and dressed himself.

He pulled open the door to his room, checked his cream short-sleeved shirt, took a look at the blue trousers he wore.

Luke felt his nephew's conflict and it pained him to think that he may fall. However, he was determined to never let that happen. Just as their was a lot of Vader in him, their was also a lot of Anakin in him as well. The light and dark melded inside him, they fought for control. Though he remained perfectly peaceful I the force as he stood up, he thought,

Han and Leia hasn't made this any easier for me.

"Good Morning, Ben. Today is your first step, you ready? he asked the boy as he entered the room.

Ben was rubbing the back of his neck as he strode inside. "Who knows, I'm just going to dive head first into this. And hope that my parents made the right decision to send me here."

Luke took his response in but didn't assure him. He knew it would do little comfort the confused boy. He smiled before sweeping his hand onto a round, primitive table and picking up dark, earthen robes. "Those clothes will do you no good here. From here on out, these will be your clothes. Its a symbol for the Jedi and when others see you, they will know your place in the Force."

Solo takes the clothes and with a raised brow asked, "I'm wearing sleepwear for a uniform?"

With a chuckled Luke placed his hands onto the sash on his waist. "Sleepwear? You have much to learn, Young Solo."

Ben glanced over at Odette. "I know a bit more than you might think," he said cryptically before heading back to change his clothes.

Luke stepped towards the door once Ben had left. "Odette, once he comes back meet me outside. I have to gauge his limits in the Force. We'll start off with the rock test. Do you remember it? Meet me there."

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@SoleAccord Well I'd have to se your character first but Michael gives everyone a chance. And yea, he like Hip Hope and RnB, he just likes Rock a whole've a lot better.

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@SoleAccord One of the inspirations for Michael's likes. I found it after running into a group called Starset. Unfortunately I haven't listened to all of their songs but the ones I have are dynamite.

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@Renny I'm just one guy, man. What matters is that you yourself are satisfied with your character, and that you're ready to thrust him into some difficult situations. And you didn't half-ass anything... like I'm going to >.> lol

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Well you're right about that lol. Still it felt good to have fresh eyes on my work.

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@Renny Maybe because my opinion matters to you, which is nice.

You put more effort in appearance and clothing than I did. Very descriptive. Very nice. Your personality is all over the place; I understood enough, but it's one of those things where I'd need to see how he acts in a roleplay to fully get. There's just a lot of things to absorb in those paragraphs. The Likes and Dislikes are diverse enough to appreciate and, while a minor thing, I did like that he doesn't enjoy sweets--don't ask me why, I just had to appreciate that the littlest thing could make me appreciate him more.

I thought the fear of vermin was funny, since working in the mines would probably have most people getting used to seeing them. Fearing Galatec is also reasonable, and could really add something to his development later as he fights.

History was straightforward and, believe me, I appreciate a straightforward history more than anything. It's probably the least favorite thing I ever want to fill in any CS, ever.

Talents, Hindrances, and the Bonus Round Section are all great stuff. I'm looking forward to seeing how you use him in the actual game.

@SoleAccord

You're absolutely right that I appreciate your opinion. I knew you'd tell me the truth and not sugar coat anything. Rather I felt like you wouldn't sugarcoat anything.

Thanks, the crticque was overall good so I'm feeling satisfied with him.

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@SoleAccord what do you think about Michael? I want your opinion for reasons unknown