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Alana Colt


Location: Camp Half-Blood, Dining Pavilion




While pondering why her sister was being quiet, Alana casually followed where the other nemesis child was looking at and found a certain Ezekiel on the other end who also looked at Aella and the guy turned comical within seconds taking refuge in Kiera's shadow... sort of. He hid behind her. She made a rather unimpressed expression, seeing the usually annoying competitive and filled with minority complex son of Apollo act like that. 'Hiding behind the back of a girl from another girl who sort of has a crush on you...' she sighed in her mind, looking at her sister. Seriously what was she seeing in him? Like he could be a decent hang around, but Alana couldn't comprehend why Aella had a crush on the guy.

Frankly after seeing him hiding behind Kiera, Alana wondered if a punishment wasn't in order. Well not her problem really, but she wasn't sure how Aella would take it. Then she heard noise and turned around to look at the source, finding the cute little Ash and her equally as adorable brother Arthur. They were being all cheery and noisy with Ryland. Ahh youth... It was nice they were well though. She didn't like the idea in pulling them into the CTF games though. It wasn't of some misguided notion that they couldn't take it. Ohh the two little ones had the fighting in them, they would do well, it was more the fact that even if they could fight, she was of the opinion that putting children in mock up wars was not cool. Not cool at all and she didn't like it. That said they presence was going to be a boon non the less even if she didn't like them being dragged into it. Children should be having innocent playing time, not mock up trying to kill each other time. She sighed and looked back at her sister.” Aella... if you do not not pay attention, I'm going to eat all your breakfast right from under your nose~” Alana stated reaching to snatch some of it. She was doing it to mostly snap her sister from focusing on the Apollo's offspring. Usually no one who got liked by Apollo ended well in history. She hoped Ezekiel wasn't going to bring the same fate to all the people he comes to like though. Hopefully he wouldn't inherit the all my crushes turned into flowers or something gene of Apollo.

"Vampires." Aliana replied calmly when asked what she has fought before. She then turned to the woman who quite clearly looked exotic along these parts. She gave them a name, so the half vampire nodded." Name's Aliana, pleasure to meet ya." She replied and turned her attention outwards to the surroundings as the carriage soon enough came to a halt and she exited, taking in the decaying town or whatever was left from the town anyway. This was quite literally a horrible location to live... She was amazed people still stayed behind at this graveyard. Most sane men and women would have long ago fled from this... cursed land.

Her attention then fell on the person who was approaching them. One by one they were called forward, given something and then being told something in hushed whisper. When it came to her turn, a potion with purple liquid was handed to her, her very existance was revealed as a heresy and then she was shoved away. Damn rude! It's not like she chose to be born this way! She took a breath though, steadied herself and put away the potion, a gift was a good thing no matter what it actually did. She was going to figure it out eventually. Could save her life... or not, it could go either way really. The half vampire was really curious about the man though... He must hold some amount of power to be able to act like that, but she couldn't put her finger on what exactly he was. Finally seh concluded it was not really her business and left him to deal with the paladin woman.

She turned her focus on the town again. The place was half decayed and half ruined as far as she could see. Buildings clearly showed signs of neglect, the windows for example long since had been crudely boarded up. Pondering their new locale, a question rose in her mind. Sure they would venture from this place out, but they couldn't quest without stop or rest. They would have to return here, ressuply and recuperate before venturing out. Where would they stay in this place? Personally she could very well do with an abandoned house really. It wasn't a problem for her to do so. What she was most worried about was the possibility of a trader in this graveyard of a town. They needed one or at least something along the lines of traders. They would need the supplies of varying kinds from provisions to lamp oils and even weapons.
@Andreyich Good, thank you. I Know I was probably annoying pulling on small minor issues, but it's important principle here ^^.


Constantin Kolev


Location: Regalia's Ship
Skills: Tretiy Glaz(passive), Fal'shbort(passive)


“Hmm...?” Constantin made a confused sound as his eyes followed where Regalia was pointing him at. His eyes locked onto the loony German that had the tendency to be mildly hyperactive as a really wild squirrel. His expression froze for a moment before his eyebrows relaxed and he let out a rather long sigh.” Actually after thinking about it... I'm not really surprised by this revelation now.” He stated and shook his head. It made some weird sense that of course Ludwig would be the one to know this.” Vill ask him...” He began saying, but then he saw how happy the guy seemed when he was talking to Hazel.” After he's done there and is free.” The fire walker concluded. No need to stop the fun of the guy really.

He returned his attention to the ongoing event now. Apparently they were wanting to bring their horses over to this ship and the other captain didn't want to lose the fare? After pondering this for a good few moments, Constantin reached to the completely logical deduction that this was not in his competence, this was part of the Great Bazhooli's duties and he wouldn't want to intrude on those. Thus he preferred to just sit here on this bigger ship and as closely to the middle and away from the corners as possible.

Though he was sort of really trying to not think of what was going in the Bazhooli's mind. Especially what he meant by that which he whispered. What followed could underestimatingly be described as flashy. Still it was the typical Great Bazhooli and he had nothing against it.

Then he turned to Fyror whom seemed to have figured where they've met. He looked at Fyror and then nodded at him.” Yeah...” Was his brief reply, not wanting to get into details... Especially the fact that Veta snuck away from them. Constantin still felt salty about that one. He had taken it quite hard that she didn't take any of them with her. The firewalker was really concerned about the well-being of his friend.
@Jaredthefox92@Rockerman403 ok after going through the CSs of you two again, I spotted the same issue. In the rules there's one Rule that adds an additional well RULE of a thing to be written down in the CS's extra section at the bottom. Maybe you two just forgot about it, but anyways. It's sort of as a confirmation that the Ruleset was read. ^^ Luckily the rule set isn't of the longest so it should be easy to spot which Rule Im talking about ^^.
@Andreyich Hmm *notices something he missed before in the CS* There's a certain rule in the rule list that concerns the extra section in the CS and a favorite character... rings a bell?


Amelia Payne

Location:Headland: F3(House Map) → F4
Skills: N/a




Amelia observed really carefully what was going on, partially because she was really concerned about Ash, partially because she was really concerned about her wellbeing in case Ash decides to throw something at her. She was careful to stay well outside effective range of his limbs and half hidden around the counter. She really didn't mean to stick a finger in the wound again! She lost her balance while she was pulling his clothing from the wound so she could cut the cloth back then, but apparently the metaphorical roll on the d20 was not in her favor this time around... again.

As Riley progressed through the improvised surgery, Amelia kept her close attention and it seemed like everything was proceeding more or less perfectly. She vaguely wondered if Riley had missed her calling, seeing how well this was going. When Ash was finally patched up, Amelia still keeping well outside range of being grabbed or kicked, albeit it would be justified given what she had done, sighed in relief." I'm sorry Ash... I really didn't mean to, I swear... I just lost balance there. Do you need anything?" She asked and looking around, maybe some food was going to be good for him.

Then again on second thought maybe she shouldn't get close to him for a while. She imagined that Ash probably wouldn't forget the wound poking for a while... maybe more than a while.


Flynn Jenkins

Location: P7Y-496: Village




Flynn had kept his ears open and listened to any sound that might be a proof of danger, but nothign out of the ordinary was present. There weren't any Jaffa that he could spot and those guys usually didn't stay hidden. Jaffa and the Goa'uld preferred to be rather open about things, after all what use was power if they couldn't flaunt it about? Still they weren't fools and could throw hell of ambushes when they wanted to do so and that was what he was concerned about. So far nothing spoke about an ambush and the road back to the gate if they high tailed it in straight line was clear as they had arrived by it and nothing was around during his scouting of the surroundings there. They also had a guy back at hte gate so if it opened and Jaffa arrived from there to cut their escape, they'd at least hear about it. Then they could probably fight their way into the ship and escape using it instead...

"Alright, casual now." He smiled as he led the way into the village proper with the two ladies in tow. The 3 of them were all armed, so he suspected nothing would go wrong on the safety front if it was only some villagers with pitchforks if it came to a fight. Though even primitive weapons could kill them with a lucky shot.

As they got closer to the center where teh crowd of people were at, he rested his hand casually on the gun grip, just in case. When they were right by the crowd of people, the locals finally noticed them and after a few brief glances filled with shock and surprise they shouted something in the local Goa'uld dialect which Crystal would vaguely be able to translate as ' They are here!!! Inform the Lord!' And hurry to open up a path.

"Ohh... welcoming party. Fun." Flynn muttered with a smile, seeing the people hurry to open a path through the crowd towards the ship." Keep your hands on the weapons..." He warned the two women with him as they walked through the crowd. The noise was rather grand and it would be near impossible to understand what was being spoken from the overlapping voices as people were all trying to get a peek at what was going on. At the center of the crowd by the big ship there was a big stone carved throne where a hooded figure was seated. They wore typical flashy robe and on their right hand was a ribbon divice. Still it was quite obvious this was a woman... He decided to go for it, if they had to, fighitng their way would be possible as long as there are no actually jaffa squad to cut off their path." We've come to ask if you've found Egeria?" He stated as finally the crowd all turned completely quiet. Aside sounds of nature around there was not a single human making any noise.

"Her light forever guides our path, warriors of the Tauri. My name's Kahlan, I've been expecting you since yesterday." She replied and shouted somethign to the people and they scattered in horror. hurrying to pick up valuables and leave the village. Flynn threw a glance at Crystal. What the woman had shouted roughly translated to ' Abandon the village, the Jaffa are coming to raze it'." Look I will be brief because I suspect that I've been compromised. There's a Ha'tak vessel entering the system that was picked on my ship's sensors. They will be here shortly. My ship's a deathtrap, I located an explosive device hooked to it's engines set to explode via remote detonation... " The woman stated with great unrgency, but was cut off by Flynn.

"Damn, I knew this was going to go wrong! The universe ravels in making our jobs hard!" Flynn cursed and looked at Crystal and Cassandra." The two of you are in charge of looking after her." He ordered and just before he could say anything else the radio came to life.

"Sir, the gate just activated, a massive number of Jaffa troops just came through! What should I... ohh shit they've noticed me!" The next moment the sound of gun fire and static came through the radio.

"Well shit..." He cursed." Change of plans! Cassandra, you help her fix that damn ship, Crystal, you're with me, we're going to try and stop them by the village entrance!" He ordered and looked at the Tok'Ra." Why on earth weren't you alreayd waiting for us at the gate then!?" He shouted.

"Because the gate's trapped too! I already checked it yesterday! The dial device's actually completely disabled and even the gate doesn't have power to be activated from this end, only incoming wormholes are possible! It was better for you to come to the village." The woman replied, earning another curse by Flynn.

" Damn, Cassandra, help her disable that bomb! Crystal, you've got permission to shoot on sight!" He stated and ran towards the road to the gate. Picking up a position behind one of hte houses.
@Rockerman403 K once you fix that you are free to throw him over to the character section. ^^
@Rockerman403 looks good. would like to see the personality expanded to 2 paragraphs though. Also just a question of curiosity is he a member of the Kirin Tor or independent?

@Andreyich I flipping like this guy!I might be a lil bit of a fan of drama and tragedy, but this guy is super cool. The Guy's pretty much done and ready to be transfered to the Char section. Just fix the minor coding issue down at the character quote. move the b tag right of the color tag. Not usre if that was hard coded into the CS, but yeah moving it it over should fix it and you can throw him over.

*goes to check if this problem is hardcoded into the CS*
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