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The Spirits Within

Gah I need to banish my distractions.
Back to writing.

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Adorabadass said
"...Fucking OW!!! Now are you going to see that therapist or am I going to have to piss on everything you love then Concussive Force you out a window!?"Edit: My god is that an oddly adorable mental image. XD Any random stranger would think they hate each other immensely.

Considering their small sizes, it would be rather adorable to witness!
I think she'd appreciate his abrasive and rather loud "suggestions" - because there's no way she could ever be as personal and bold. I can imagine Magdalena often hitting him as she would with her late brothers.

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Sixsmith said
As for romance, I can certainly speculate who Roy would have had a potential past or current relationship with, if not a crush on, but I'll wait till everything's all set before things are committed to. I think Roy looks at people, first, as targets and, then (like all of his friends) as certain kinds of people in his life. He's underhanded, but I think he's not one to take anyone very close for granted just because he has such trouble finding himself and a place in life that he often latches onto certain people, especially in his own kind of way. He has a weird way of loving, I think, that doesn't seem like it, at all. But, I'd imagine spending that much time with these people, they've grown accustomed to the way he appreciates his loved ones.If that's any indication to how his relationships are with everyone else. @_@That's actually kind of hilarious. XD It's weird when something unexpected like that happens.

That's certainly an interesting way to describe it!

Adorabadass said
Trust me, Magdalena isn't safe from Freddy's motherly terror either. At some point he is going to sit her down and shriek at her to get help."YOU'RE MY FRIEND AND I LOVE YOU, OKAY!? NOW DO AS I TOLD PUCK AND AARON TO DO AND SEE A GOD DAMN THERAPIST YOU MOODY HAG!"

She was raised with five brothers, rather rambunctious hellions, she'd probably punch him square in the jaw as her way of saying "I love you too.".

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Well, considering the betterment of the story, I'll sort of speculate on how everyone comprehends what I've written in her character sheet — I can sum her up quite easily if need be, but for the in-character process, I'll watch how I write so as not to hinder anyone else. I'm aware that I write with a certain way, and it has gained me favour and then dislike. Basically, I'll try to play nice.

In regards to romance and how Magdalena feels about everyone else, well. She may hold fondness for particular characters because of their wonderful personalities, and I've decided to write on those as well, I'll expand on this later. But, I haven't given thought to whom, if at all, she may "crush" on, she is a bit eccentric. I can see some pitying her because of her literal inner demons.

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I'm laughing way too hard at this.
Lawdy.

Edit :

Prisk said No need to apologize. There is plenty of time.I’m sure that you get compliments regarding your prose on a regular basis. It is a bit too purple for my taste, but I’m not going to prevent you from writing the way you do. However, keep in mind that may not be within everyone’s comprehension—I just need to say it for the record. But, then again, this is the ‘advanced’ section. You are good on personality and biography.Your limit break somewhat reminded me of Vincent’s limit break in FFVII. It felt as if it was obscure due to the prose, but when I picked out the parts that actually describe what it does, it was quite clear anyway and anchored in two elements: fire and dark. As it stands now, limit breaks cannot really be ‘overpowered,’ as all of them instantly kill all enemies anyway. It’s just an aesthetic choice. So do not worry about that.

In respect of you, and everyone else, I'm willing to "tone it down" if you all would prefer. It's not the first time I would be asked to do so anyways.

And you caught me, I was at the point in game where I acquired Vincent and he gave me an idea, that and Dirge of Cerberus played a rather important part. Her Limit Break is inspired by such, but thank you for clearing it all up! I'll keep it as is and potentially add to it.

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Ah, Prisk, I feel the necessity to apologize for taking my time in completing my character. I think I managed to get myself caught up in researching on what I wanted her to be exactly and how she'll pan out over the story! I jot down my own notes in regards to character and plot points as well. But I've finished her Limit Break at least, but if I feel that it may be a bit much in conduits of power, then it probably is. I haven't asked for your criticism, yet, but if time provides it I'd appreciate it if you to take a look over what I've conducted thus far.

I won't be able to change and finish her until I get off work tonight however, so I require just a little more patience until I finally get done!
c:

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I now want to go water-sliding in a drainpipe, dammit.
Another thing to add onto my bucket list.

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Whoo, I pull a double shift at work and I have all this to come back to!
Well done everyone.

Now I'm off to poetically script the inner workings of Magdalena's Spirits - cue the orchestra and epic music.

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Prisk said
Good, the story is extremely long and epic, but now I'm nervous that it won't meet your expectations!

Don't be, I may have high expectations and hopes, but I have no doubt you'll meet them. With everything that has been constructed thus far, it makes me sort of giddy. Being an avid lover of SNK and Final Fantasy games [I played a bit of FFVII for nostalgia sake and to gather some inspiration] I'm looking forward to everything.

On a different note: I updated Magdalena with an actual image, expanded on her appearance a little, personalized her biography and tweaked her personality just a tad. I only lack the explanations on her Limit Break and her assorted spirits. I'll also be incorporating certain images so everyone has at least a visual of certain things - I think it helps, like what some are doing with their weapons. Which I'll continue on once I get some much needed rest and time willing, I'll get them done before I leave for work!
c;

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I wonder if anyone else puts a ridiculous amount of research into their characters. . .

On a side note, I've been listening to the entire SNK soundtrack whilst finishing my character sheet - I'm forging epic proportions and hopes for this role play.