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I am a Japanese-American (half-Japanese on my mother's side) with a twin half-sister. Yes, you read that right. To explain it real quick, during mom's monthly, she dropped 2 eggs instead of 1 after 2 (or more) guys took her to bed. Each egg was impregnated by a different man's sperm.

Anyways, I'm a kind guy who really hates fighting. However, if I have to stop a fight, whether verbal or physical, I will. I'm here to have fun and be crazy with my OCs, new characters and even some canons. So far, my favorite RP I've been in on the site is the Multiverse reboot. As a whole, the Multiverse was 6 years old. I love the idea and have even used it (with a few minor changes here and there) for a few LARPs with my local friends RL.

Other than RP, I am also a Wiccan Witch following the path of Gaia and a hypnotist studying the varying effects of hypnosis on various age groups and am always taking willing volunteers.

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Average weight? Surely he's only got one weight? Not only that, but he weighs 143... Tonnes?

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Is this deliberate? You don't really get composite long bows, they would be almost impossible to draw for a normal person!

You have a hell of a lot of spells, are you sure you're going to use all of them? I mean it doesn't matter if you don't (might as well have them just in case), but be really careful on what spells you use on players. For example if I were DM I would ban the use of charm spells on players, and to an extent alter self and stuff unless they are alright with it (ask them in the IC)

Also you keep 2 war dogs in your Robe? And is that a canoe in your pocket, or are you just happy to see us?

Overall I'm fairly impressed with your character, maybe a little more backstory would be nice (how did he get training as a rogue, a wizard and a warrior?)


Sorry for my absence. I do like your character@RokkuHoshi, however, there are a few things -

Firstly, if he was built for speed and not for strength, he wouldn't have an arsenal to supply the whole team. Especially not one that would include a long sword. He is way way too powerful. So you're going to have to pick, which do you want more.

As for the spells, there are quite a few I could do without, see @The Fated Fallen's comments.

5'2" and 143 lbs? Wow, he is me irl lol well, I may weigh a little more but, for a guy - that's TINY

I don't like the charm spell. And change self explains that he can change the little things, making yourself a while foot taller or shorter is not little. I'm 5'2", if I were to make myself a foot taller, I'd be an extremely tall woman. If I were to make myself shorter, I'd be a certifiable dwarf.

In short, I think he is way way way too powerful, especially for someone of his stature. I can't allow him as is, to join us.


Changed a few things. Any other spells need to be removed? Them, I'm not as worried about.

As for the rest of it, he has a build that suggests speed more than strength but the D&D character I am basing this guy off of is a fighter/mage/thief. He has been trained with all the weapons he has but is not a master with any. He is still young and still learning. Not to mention, some of those weapons he doesn't use often. Plus, Regina has more.

As for the Robe of Useful Items, I don't know how the items are turned into patches and put on the robe but once the patches are pulled off, they become the item pictured on them and are unable to go back on the robe. It states there are some places on huge robe where some patches have already been torn off, meaning those items have already been used.

I also forgot about the tapestry's magic. It works the same as a bag of holding with a twist. Firstly, it has to be hanging on a flat surface, such as a wall, then can only be used by the one who says the pass code.

Name: Maxwell "Max" Kilimal

Race: Half-elf

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Appearance: Max is five feet, two inches tall with a weight of 143, short, messy, brown hair, slightly pointed ears and a golden tint to his otherwise tan skin. He is thin but muscular, being built more for speed than for strength.

Clothing/Armor: Max wears a simple, brown tunic, green trousers, fur boots, a purple cloak that he usually keep the hood down on, a large pack on his back with a tapestry strapped to the bottom, a myriad of large and small pouches connected to the belt around his waist as well as both belts cursing his torso in an X. On his cloak are patches with pictures on them of various items. There are also 6 spots on the cloak where it seems the patches have been pulled off. Over his eyes are crudely made glasses with red gems that he looks through.

Weapons: Max has a katana sheathed on his left hip, an enchanted scimitar on his right hip, a normal scimitar on the right side of his pack, an enchanted longs word strapped to the left side of his pack, five daggers across his chest on each bandoleer, a sixth just over his shoulder on each, a silver dagger strapped to his left wrist, a trio of shortswords strapped to the back of his pack and a composite long bow with both flight and sheaf arrows.

Alignment: Chaotic Good

Skills/Abilities: Max is very fast and nimble, making for a perfect speedy distraction or silent shadow. He is more intelligent than he lets on, often earning him the nicknames "boy" and "child", but always seems to know what to do, even if he doesn't act like it. He can pick pockets, open locks, find and remove traps, move silently, hide in the shadows, detect noise within hearing distance, climb walls easily and usually recognize, if not read, most languages. He is very proficient with jumping between ledges, fighting blind, swimming, disguising himself and others, appraising many gems and artifacts, crafting his own spells, rope play, can craft his own bow and arrows, among other things, and is quick to pick up any new spell.

Magic: Max can use the following spells:

Affect normal fires: this allows him to make most flames in a campfire sized flame or smaller dance in any way he deems fit.
Alarm: he can set an alarm with a passcode on a door where a loud noise would blare if the door is opened before the pass code is spoken.
Audible glamor: ventriloquism.
Cantrip: this is used to change any small details, such as the appearance or taste of ones meal, or to create a small breeze just strong enough to sweep dust under a rug.
Color spray: a fan shaped spray of color pours from his hand.
Comprehend languages: he can understand any spoke language.
Detect magic: any magical artifact within thirty feet of him glows with its strength and color for magical class.
Enlarge: can make something up to ten times is size.
Reduce: can make something one tenth it's size.
Feather fall: slows the fall of anyone he casts it on.
Friends: a temporary gain of charisma, making people want to be around him more.
Magic missile: a bolt of magic that always hits its target though does little damage.
Phantasmal force: allows him to create a large illusion as a distraction, any who see believe it is real unless they try to touch it.
Protect from evil: evil beings are less drawn to him and anyone around him.
Read magic: can read a scroll without casting the spell on it.
Shield: blocks all magic attacks that do not require touch.
Shocking grasp: a small jolt of electricity shocks anyone he touches.
Sleep: puts target to sleep.
Spider climb: his hands and feet are covered in a goo that allows him to scale walls and ceilings like a spider.
Fire burst: a burst of flames shoots from his hands, hitting anyone within ten feet in front of him.
Fist of stone: turns his fist to stone for five minutes.
Copy: can copy spells from scrolls to his spell book without reading them.
Protection from hunger and thirst: can last longer without food or water.
Bind: can move any string- or rope-like items with his mind.
Cloak from undead: undead beings cannot see him, smell him or take notice of him at all.
Darkness: a 15' radius sphere of complete darkness surround whatever he casts the spell on.
Detect invisibility: can see the invisible.
Glitter dust: covers everything in a silvery dust, allowing for invisible enemies to be seen.
Knock: can break down a door.
Levitate: can slowly lift up to a maximum of 500 pounds for five minutes.
Locate object: can find anything hidden.
Obscure object: can hide any item without worrying of it being found.
Mirror image: can create up to eight illusionary clones of himself to hide with. They are destroyed once attacked.
Spectral hand: can use touch-based spells from a distance.
Choke: (think force choke)
Lightning bolt: causes a bolt of lightning to strike where he wants from his hand.
Wraith form: can become a wraith for five minutes.

Robe of Useful Items-
2 daggers
2 lanterns (filled and lit)
2 large mirrors
2 10 foot poles
2 hemp ropes (50 foot)
2 large sacks
1 potion of extra healing
1 rowboat (12 foot long)
1 pair war dogs

Backstory: Max was born and raised in a small elven community. When he was 10 years old, his mother gave him a gift from his father; a large bag of gold. He had. Been born as the illegitimate third child of a human baron. Using the money from his father, he enrolled himself in two schools. The first was a fighter's school to better prepare him for battle. The second was a school for mages, which he found more boring though did much better at.

During a trip with a few other students, one of the teachers' enemies attacked with a fireball. The teacher had teleported them to safety but the fireball had gone with them. Max had been lucky enough to have been teleported on the opposite side of a boulder from everyone else. When he rounded the boulder, he found his classmates dead and proceeded to loot them. He has since then been afraid of fireballs, though has yet to realize it.

While trying to find his way home, though heading the wrong direction, he ran into a group of adventurers who we're headed towards a nearby dungeon. Max decided to join them as he needed the experience, nearly got himself killed, laughed at by blink dogs, picked a lock nobody else was able to, only to see himself when he opened the door, and, eventually, found a key to another world.

After traveling the world for a month with the party, he left them to pursue his own way home, only to find another key which led him to Waeldeshore.
So... who's been kidnapped and why? And would it be plausible for Solaris and Sky to run into the kidnappers on the way to their next job? Seems like a good way to get them involved.
I feel sheepish... I'll get to editing.

EDIT: CS has been edited. I meant no disrespect towards any of the GMs and I apologize if any was perceived.
1.) A Nephilim it is.
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Yes, he is, he (and I) just prefer not using the term.

2.) What's seasons have you watched?

As my sister stated, finished 1-9, working on 10.

3.) The Demon Killing Knife also known Ruby's Knife isn't even a demon dagger, the knife was made by the Kurds and is one of a kind. We don't even know how ruby came across it. So that is a NO-GO and I will state as I did before. Demon Knives have no special abilities.

That is where you're wrong. I've seen Sam, Dean, Cas and a handful of other characters disarm demons and use the daggers the demons were wielding to kill demons. I don't know if it's because I'm farther than you but that appears to have something to do with it.

4.) If you did not read what I said before I will say it again. Sam(Seasoned Hunter), Dean(Seasoned Hunter), and Castiel (Powerful Angel) were almost killed by a Grigori. So why do you think that your character could do this?

Firstly, I remember nothing about grigori. Secondly, I've seen many angels with swords. I'm not just talking about Castiel, Bartholomew, Naomi and other powerful angels but some that were considered just grunts. Your retort?

5.) But you said it was Excalibur. Refer to your CS, also, there has not been in mention of swords forged by dragons. As of right now, we don't even know that Dragon's exist. So once again that is a NO-GO.

Yes, I did specify Excalibur. I can change the CS. It doesn't have to be Excalibur. But, here's a quote from my friend.

Actually, it is not Excalibur in the show but another sword like it. Excalibur is mentioned, though.

An eidetic memory serves well.

6.) Okay, first things, first it's time to shake ground in the 8th round. It's physically impossible for an Angel and a Demon to inhabit the same Vessal/Meat Suit. If a lady is already prego, and become in habited by an Angel or Demon it can not make the baby an Angel or Demon. Now if the lady was possessed by a Demon and a demon sexs it up it is possible but it's highly unlikely that the baby will become half Angel or Demon. The only thing that has proven that it's possible is the Anti-Christ, and that was a plot hole from hell. (No pun intended.) So once more I will say that is a NO-GO.

They didn't share a vessel. His demon father possessed the body of his angel mother, not a human that she was possessing. There is a lot I can do to change this character but AB and Furie have both allowed him, his first draft even, in an RP before, back when Bel was playing Sam.

In short, this character is denied. Now I am willing to work with you on fixing this but you have to
stop seeing what you want to see in my review. If it continues I will ask you to leave.

I see your entire argument. I reply with my own. It is called debating. I am rather good at it.
Name: Solaris "The Jack of Trades" Nightwing
Age: 35
Birthday: 1-7

Magic: Solaris can use illusion magic as well as small amounts of fire, ice make and requip.

Illusion: Solaris can make anybody see or hear whatever he wishes. He prefers to use this over his other types of magic as he doesn't care for physical combat as much.

Wind: Using this type of magic, Solaris can use small tornadoes to either give himself short-range flight or knock his enemies off balance as well as create gusts of wind to do a long-range concussive attack.

Earth Make: Solaris can create shields, barriers, walls and other obstacles to prevent his opponent from reaching what they wish to get to if needed.

Requip: Solaris has 1 set of armor known as the Alicorn and a single sword known as the Winged Horn.

The Alicorn armor appears to be heavy armor but weighs very little without giving up any of its protection. The helm has a horse head design with a small horn sticking out. On the back of the armor is a pair of wings embossed which can be used to fly when a bit of magical energy is pushed into them. The longer the flight is used, the more it taxes on the user's magical energy. There is also a horseshoe design on the inside of each wrist and the back of each ankle.

The Winged Horn is a shortsword which resembles a flattened horn with the guard resembling wings. In this state, they add to his speed a little and his strength a lot. With a small amount of magical energy, the wings can grow and the blade shrinks, followed by splitting in half, becoming a pair of tonfa-like armblades which increase his speed more than his strength.

Magic Level: A

History: Solaris was born and raised not far outside Fiore in a small kingdom known as Questra. He had been born a prince but didn't really care for the easy life of royalty. He preferred to be with the other kids, running and playing and getting dirty, until he was old enough to begin his battle training. Once he was old enough, he left his home to travel the world, learning more magic from multiple people, leaving the throne to his younger brother, Mari. During his travels, he found a young child which he adopted. He named the boy Sky. Shortly afterwards, while on a job to get money to feed himself and the child, he had come across a user of Ice-Maker magic. With a bit of training, he was able to do the basics, adding to his arsenal. He eventually found Phoenix Wing and began watching some of the members in a playful brawl. It wasn't long after that he decided to join them, further expanding his learning of magic. While in Phoenix Wing, he had gained some useful armor

Personality: Being a wise leader, he prefers to teach than to battle but can hold his own if needed. He is caring, compassionate and cautious. He often watches over his teammates as a father would his children, though tries his best not to make them feel smothered. He cares about everyone to an extent, even his enemies, often giving those who deserve death a second chance at life to pay for their crimes in other ways.

Guild and guild mark location: Phoenix Wing, left side of neck
Team Members: Sky Nightwing
Three Strengths:
1. Wisdom beyond his years.
2. Always on his guard.
3. Extremely fast learner.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Shies from a fight.
2. Can sometimes get distracted by random objects.
3. Has an extreme distrust of statues.
Greatest Love: Plays, operas and musical performances.
Motivation: Family.
Appearance: Solaris is a rather tall man with pale skin and navy blue hair with forest green and garnet red streaks. He wears a long, white, flowing coat with a solar design on each hip over his bare chest and white shorts, the tail of which reaches to just above his knees and the front opened to show off his toned chest. On his feet are a pair of light brown, almost tan, sandals with white straps, also having the solar design in the center of the straps.
Additional Details: (Was originally created as a female but my sister didn't like her)
@CaitsDid you look over my CS again? I changed his magics a bit.
CS edited again. All good now?
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Well, given that the rules/guidelines suggest unique original type of magic you could chose to create your own magic, to replace it with. There's a reason why that rule exists-so as not to have everyone with the same or similar type of magics.

I get that he is supposed to have all types of magic. I just don't know if that is Strickly logical-yes you can learn magic but there has to be a predisposition to being able to use it, I think.

I'm not trying to be a bitch. I'm just trying to make sure there aren't a lot of people with the same magics.


No, I completely understand. I can swap them out.
@rokkuhoshi while I like your CS, I did ask if it was possible to not have ice make magic as there is a few characters with that and fire magic too.


Then what would you suggest exchanging them with? He's supposed to have multiple types of magic, hence the "Jack of Trades" title.

@RokkuHoshi
I also feel a bit uncomfortable with the multiple types of magic. But I'll allow it and see how things go with it. Also, you mentioned that Solaris adopted a boy named Sky Nightwing and is Solaris's team member. Is there another CS for Sky that I missed, possibly from someone else because you mentioned that you and Kaze were going to do a conjoined post?


Yes, KazeXDZ. He and I are joining together. He was accepted already.

As for the multiple types of magic, he was supposed to be shown to be an intellectual, not a brute. He learns quickly and can pick up different types of magic with a little training, but he never masters any, not even his illusions are completely mastered. He's just very good at them.
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