I wonder where @Dead Cruiser is.
I've been waiting for him to make some activity for Giovanna before I made my post.
I've been waiting for him to make some activity for Giovanna before I made my post.
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A sentence you wasted 5 seconds to read.
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Who came up with the idea to make our statuses quotes from philosophers, anyway?
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We could be doing something productive with our lives... instead, we're here.
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A random quote from some philosopher that we'll forget in a few moments.
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*looks over cs*
And so he does. Alright then.
And so he does. Alright then.
Where did the swords come from? Why does he even have swords? He can shoot electricity.
Also, I edited my post earlier to have Horus hack the mothership's database for the layout of the ship.
@SugarRush I think so.
@SugarRush I think so.
Alright fine I'll drop the subject @KriticalKrab, but don't think I've forgotten it.
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I did at least have him take the hit and he clearly made the exclamation of being hurt, but I can post next with him feeling the injury. Also in my character sheet I clearly stated that he can release enough electricity to combust his enemies. He has huge reserves of electricity
Yeah I was still willing to accept him having a near-unlimited amount of electricity to fire, the problem was that he was also quite resistant to injuries that would normally incapacitate regular human beings. I expected Bolt to be a Glass Cannon; instead, he's a Lightning Bruiser, which your CS clearly does not indicate.
Also, why does he even have a Ferrari? He can fly on a metal surfboard.
Which also beings me to the subject of electromagnetism. Do you even know how the process works? I know only a smattering on the topic, and even I think the way you use it is a bit outrageous. It's one thing to be hovering over the ground a few inches, and another to be flying across the sky. Then again, cartoon and comic book logic does not always translate well in real life logic, so...
Anyway, that's my take.
As funny and possibly appropriate as this is, now is not the time for this. We are having a srs discussion.
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That there is my srs face. We are srs face people and must act srs.
But seriously, this is serious.
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but it's just a car, it's mot like he repaired some insanely powerful weapon the guy. I feel like your problems would be more reasonable under a different circumstance. Also how is he a Mary-sue? He's done nothing OP.
I have mentioned surviving an explosive laser bolt to the chest without any significant injuries, if any, as well as releasing huge waves of electricity without becoming even remotely tired.
Yeah, and I'm not even mentioning the grammar mistakes, mainly because I'm giving him the benefit of the doubt there. You know, like, maybe English isn't his first language or something.
Really, @The Patriarch? I didn't want to be the one to say this, but your posting style is... how do I describe it... convenient. Probably not the best word to describe it, but perhaps I should explain my reasoning.
The first thing I started disliking was when Bolt was shot by a security guard, but you weren't too badly injured due to a bulletproof vest. However, I was willing to forgive that since I myself have no experience dealing with bulletproof vests and shouldn't be one to judge about that.
Then Bolt was able to dodge Press' laser that targeted Bolt's bag of money. In that post you claimed that he "noticed the hero." How? Press and Bolt weren't exactly next to each other or even in front of each other when it happened. Still, I was willing to forgive that too, since there weren't exactly precise details about their locations.
Then on to the subject of getting shot by Press' laser. Bolt was hit by a laser bolt that explodes upon impact. And I mean EXPLODES. Bolt just shrugged it off like it was nothing. Bulletproof vest or no, intense training by the Shadows or no, Bolt does not have toughened skin or anything like that, so it shouldn't be possible for Bolt to not at least feel some lingering pain from that.
Finally, your latest post. Lifting a car, even if it is a completely totaled car, and your surfboard using electromagnetism? A guy that repairs a car in a minute? For a car that's practically been sliced into two? It sounds just far too perfect. Seriously, intense training by these so-called Shadows or not, He's still an adolescent. He's already been releasing massive amounts of electricity, and I highly doubt this car mechanic was right around the corner. Even if he was, repairing that kind of damage in merely a minute is quite outrageous. If it were that easy for anyone to do, Press could have done it himself.
What I'm trying to say is that you seem to be trying to make your character as unbeatable and as perfect as possible while barely staying under the radar of Mary Sue detection. You use this whole "Shadows" story as an excuse to have your character be stronger than an average adolescent. Thing is, our characters are still adolescents. They still have things to learn. You seem to have had Bolt learn everything but restraint. Frankly, it's quite too much.
The first thing I started disliking was when Bolt was shot by a security guard, but you weren't too badly injured due to a bulletproof vest. However, I was willing to forgive that since I myself have no experience dealing with bulletproof vests and shouldn't be one to judge about that.
Then Bolt was able to dodge Press' laser that targeted Bolt's bag of money. In that post you claimed that he "noticed the hero." How? Press and Bolt weren't exactly next to each other or even in front of each other when it happened. Still, I was willing to forgive that too, since there weren't exactly precise details about their locations.
Then on to the subject of getting shot by Press' laser. Bolt was hit by a laser bolt that explodes upon impact. And I mean EXPLODES. Bolt just shrugged it off like it was nothing. Bulletproof vest or no, intense training by the Shadows or no, Bolt does not have toughened skin or anything like that, so it shouldn't be possible for Bolt to not at least feel some lingering pain from that.
Finally, your latest post. Lifting a car, even if it is a completely totaled car, and your surfboard using electromagnetism? A guy that repairs a car in a minute? For a car that's practically been sliced into two? It sounds just far too perfect. Seriously, intense training by these so-called Shadows or not, He's still an adolescent. He's already been releasing massive amounts of electricity, and I highly doubt this car mechanic was right around the corner. Even if he was, repairing that kind of damage in merely a minute is quite outrageous. If it were that easy for anyone to do, Press could have done it himself.
What I'm trying to say is that you seem to be trying to make your character as unbeatable and as perfect as possible while barely staying under the radar of Mary Sue detection. You use this whole "Shadows" story as an excuse to have your character be stronger than an average adolescent. Thing is, our characters are still adolescents. They still have things to learn. You seem to have had Bolt learn everything but restraint. Frankly, it's quite too much.
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