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VitaVitaAR said
I... suppose to some extent that is the case and all, but, um... hmm. I'm trying to find a medium where I have something to write but it doesn't end with Midori trying to kill her shadow and an actual fight breaking out, um.


That's problematic, because I thought my observation was an incredibly good one. I mean, you can still do it and not end up fighting your own shadow, it just might take longer.

Just remember a Shadow is only waiting for you to say that it's not you, so the acceptance can either take a long time, or you reject it outright.
Kato should deal with his pursuit for his sister and the fact that she's left. Perhaps a fear that she probably left because she got sick of helping him all the time, thus leading to a self-hatred of being too weak or something. Shadows should address the most trying issues within a character. Need to examine every psychological effect of every event in their lives.

These are my observations.
Maybe you should think about why your character is obsessed with Akemi in the first place.

Maybe the obsession came from a desire to replace her dead sister, and is as twisted as it is due to a fear of losing someone dear again.

Your shadow would probably examine the part where your character is afraid to move on or leave Akemi for just a little bit in fear of losing the one who filled the large void in her heart that Keiko's death had opened up.
Haru Nyan said
She's watching Akemi..always.


Fixed.
That's about right.
Oh she's getting a partner. Excellent.
Also Dark Souls.

Git gud. I'm still so bad at it, I haven't put much time into it.
I have Tales of Xillia 2. Still need to play it. Will be in Japan soon so no PS3. Probably going to finish it when I return next year.
I vote first one. Second one still sounds like a dungeon theme.

Also who was next to accept their Shadow...? I know Savo was last.
Don't lose your edge though.
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