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Yes you do.
Two girls, you're both accepted.

If you guys want me to draw and design your Personas, send me a PM. Note I also mention "design", so if you have a set in image, it will be a little different (though you will have a say and I'll try my best to keep what you imagined).

Otherwise you're both clear to place them in the Character section and post.

I suggest to start with, join a club, because everyone is in one. Today is Wednesday, so mostly Sports clubs are open.
Maybe you should try posting it in OOC for me to accept it first.

Please repost it here for me to check for stuff.
The way you describe looks structurally impossible based on that image. I can kind of imagine what you're thinking, and I don't think it's possible with the way you drew it.

The key to drawing transforming weapons is to draw tell-tale signs of how the weapon transforms, your weapon is drawn thick, curved, and thus inflexible so it is impossible to visualize the way you described based on that image. For instance, Ruby's scythe is largely folding, so there are a lot of bolts and screws on many of the parts, mostly around the blade where it folds out into the scythe blade, while the shaft and sniper barrel appears to be a slide-out type.

Of course they don't have to be easy to explain or even possible, so long as it is easy to visualize, like Coco's minigun/bag.

Being able to visualize it is the most important part, not just easy for you to visualize, but for others too. Because we can't exactly animate these things.
Okay, now the last bit to fix up.

Now the backstory doesn't really suit your character's personality, or at least doesn't explain it. Considering that childhood, she should be a pretty sombre person. So add some spice to it.

There's also your name, Exoris. Please note the RP is set in Japan, so please choose a suitable name, or go the way Itano and other players did, make them originally from another country.

I'm sorry if it seems picky, but I do really prefer it when things abide by the laws of the world that has been set out.
It's normal.
Hmmm, but it doesn't look like it transforms. Where does it? There are no seemingly moving parts that suggest it, grooves or folding areas, or even cascading or contracting bits.
Not to mention the way you describe it has nothing to do with how it seems to be used, which is like a giant double ended halberd.

I bet from the three words shotgun/surfboard/axe I can make a better weapon that seems to actually be used the way it sounds.
It's usually a path walked out of pride, and because of that pride, leads to an ironic end... Given that they do not change/have revelations at least.

The change you'll experience should be through overcoming your shadow, you know, the revelation that brings you off the path towards your demise.
Seems okay, still evaluating if Tower material or not.

EDIT: Okay, you're getting there, but not really. From wiki, "The Tower Arcana is commonly associated to overly arrogant, prejudiced and authoritarian organization, which walk to their own ironic demise."
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