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We're also ignoring the reboot DmC, so there won't be a limbo or some other. Nephilims are in this game due to the Darksiders side too.
Look out. Veteran Badass Demon Hunter coming through. I'll get a picture later.

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I like this. I'm also even getting an Old Snake vibe, what with the whole dealing with age thing with meds and drugs.

Anyways, probably improve the formatting, because it was kind of hard reading through all of that, as good as it was. I had to actually go find where the weapons and styles and techniques started and ended, otherwise, this is a pretty quick acceptance. You're in.

That said, maybe I should consider adding techniques like Combo as well, since it was assumed you would do your combos anyways in-RP as a basic move.
You could probably just make it your Devil Trigger really. You don't have one yet.
That's actually a lot of Hellfire moves to start with. I would say start with the very direct stuff like Fire Breath, Fire Ball and Fire Pillar, and fancier or different applications like Fire Whip and Fire Cloak for later levels of Hellfire.

Plus Fire Cloak is pretty OP too, so I would say get rid of the heal. You are allowed to be healed when struck by fire attacks though during Fire Cloak, but not a passive heal. You should put the passive heal with your Devil Trigger instead. That said you can start with a Devil Trigger.
Probably if you had to put weapons, claws and fangs. They may be a part of you as physical parts of your body, but you use them for combat anyways, plus you'll want it for upgrades.

Otherwise it looks fine.
Within reason.

For instance don't make a giant manbearpig three times the size of a large man and call it a human.
We don't talk about that place here.
Most things appear to be in place.

I'll start thinking and discussing some starting scenarios.

We could start next week around there.
I mean at least it's almost 100% acceptable. Just some tiny adjustments.
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Also your character looks okay, but dangerously close to being of the Devil.

That's actually because of the fighting and partying. I notice characters of Justice tend to try and avoid fights if they can (based on characters appearing in the games), but if they must, they'll do it, usually with little hesitation. They're very resolve-driven people.

The partying can stay just don't party too crazy, but the fighting needs to change to suit the arcana.

Once that's done your character is fine anyway.

Also if you want me to design your Persona you're free to ask me, just PM me and we'll talk. I offer this to everyone who joins, plus their Ultimates.

I also feel you can find a better Persona than Angel. I think someone like Joan of Arc would suit your character for instance.
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