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Current Anyone reading any interesting fiction right now?
28 days ago
Sparrow Envy happening here. Seven weeks till our school year is done.
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1 mo ago
So many greaat writes here ... who's going to submit for the Microfiction & Poetry contest #14 - new beginnings
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1 mo ago
Does anyone else crave the Likes, Thanks and Laughs for their Role Play posts ... or am I the only one?
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3 mos ago
Pi day today. What's your favourite? Blueberry, Apple, something else. Or maybe like Lady Arya said ... it's all irrational today.
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Call me Stryder, call me Brodie, your choice. I have been roleplaying for a few years starting in the time of the great pandemic. I have discovered I am a bit of a chameleon, always trying to match the length and style of my roleplaying partners.

Starting in the dark days of Omegle, I discovered that there were people interested in stories with a plot and something long term. Since then I have moved on, and hopefully forward, from one paragraph writing to multi-paragraph pieces that are carefully written and actually proofread.

I am just beginning to figure out the multi-character role play but in the past only focused on 1 to 1. In that style, I (we) have written role plays that have been slice of life, fantasy, dystopian, and more. The story has always been important, and the slow burning romance more valued than something quick and messy. As one partner likes to say ... substance over smut.

I have a few role plays going on with different partners but I am always up to meet new people, exchange ideas and create new stories. If you are interested send me a message here or we can chat more in Discord (just send me your details and we can connect).

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Me too, please.
@Bytebeginning to worry about you. Are you still here?
thank you ... I forgot there was a world before cable TV
Sounds interesting but ... (playing devil's advocate) if these people do not have television and are isolated from other communities how do they know television exists. Having never seen TV how will they know what types of shows to create and does this town, being so far off the grid, have electricity?
"Do you need the restroom key, sir?"


The voice wasn’t loud, but Brayden turned to the sound, thinking the question was directed at him. Catching sight of the voice’s owner, the veterinarian’s jaw dropped. Dressed in a top hat and a suit that Charles Dickens, or some 19th-century nobleman, might wear, the man had ashen skin and yellow, bloodshot eyes. Thinking this person was some antique store ghost, or maybe a mascot or some strange live performance, Brayden watched, waiting to see what would happen next.

With a hooked nose and bony fingers, the ghost of a man was focused on a younger man who could not have been more different. Well-dressed and confident, the younger person was the type Brayden often saw walking around the city, taking selfies in strange places and making sure every food they ate was recorded and posted online. For a second, he laughed, thinking about the social media influencer who had come into his clinic and wanted to post a TikTok video of Brayden and him saving a cat… reminding people that every cat has nine lives… something like that.

Before the younger man could reply to the ghost, a crash exploded from across the dark and dusty store, and the strange man began to shuffle off, muttering under his breath.
“Oh, oh dear! Are you alright? Oh, now you know why there was a sign to ‘ask for assistance’; we’ve learned something today…”


Interrupted by the events that had just unfolded, Brayden looked away from the man and noticed the others in the store. There was a girl, late teens, early twenties, with a skateboard rolling at her feet, a smile on her face. She was walking by the tall, ornate stand-up mirror off to the side, and when Brayden saw it begin to glow, he couldn’t help but think that this, like the man, was just one more antique store gimmick. Off to the right and standing by another shelf stood another shopper: a pretty woman with black hair and big, bright eyes. She had looked at the strange man too, but now her focus was back on the old music box resting in her hands.

Turning back to the tall shelf in front of him, Brayden began picking carefully through the implements one by one. Antique scalpels, bone saws, clamps, these were the things of old veterinary kits, outdated and worn but still very useful, dangerous in the wrong hands. Looking at the shelf above, there were stranger and more bizarre objects: glass jars with preserved specimens, organs, small animals things that didn’t quite match any known anatomy he had studied.

Curious about almost every item on the shelves, Brayden looked up for the strange character and called out,
“Excuse me. Can someone help?”


Seeing the man focused on the cleanup on the other side of the store, Brayden began walking toward him, a dozen or more questions already in his head.
Thanks Ricky. I’m hoping to get a reply in tomorrow. Just been busy. Thanks for watching over us.




Interacting with: none . Mentions: Callie, Dallas, Valen, Anna Lou (Lucas – NPC) . Location: His House, Downtown Pines Holler, Huskers


The copy of “Of Mice and Men” had been a gift, one that had unintentionally haunted him for years.

Lying in his bed, wrapped in an invisible blanket of morning heat, Elias stared at the leather-bound copy of Steinbeck’s classic. Sick in a hospital bed, his ailing father had given it to him one week before his passing, and still, years later, the book evoked feelings that Steinbeck had never imagined, a weight that Elias couldn’t seem to shake.

Sitting up, Elias reached out to the white IKEA Billy bookcase standing beside his bed and tugged the novella free from its resting place between a hardly used copy of The Elements of Style by EB White and William Strunk Jr., and the twice-read The Hate U Give by Angie Thomas, one of too many books banned here in North Dakota schools.

Opening the front cover, he read the words his father had carefully penned. He huffed silently, knowing Thomas Petterson had never read the book, never remembered the quote his son tried too often to explain. “The best laid plans of mice and men often go awry.” It was ironic that that famous quote from his favourite book in high school had become the words which would exemplify his life, maybe even one day be engraved onto his own tombstone and final resting place.

Eli knew that the casual observer who might read the inscription would judge his father to be a good man, proud, loving, salt of the earth.

My dear son Elias,

When faced with the choice of being a mouse or a man, you have always been a man, making me proud in everything you do.
Your father, in life and death,

Thomas Rowan Petterson


But it was the lines he had scribbled onto the carefully folded paper tucked somewhere in chapter three that usually left Elias angry, sad, or filled with a range of emotions somewhere between one and the other.

Elias, I am truly proud of you and respect your decision to go to college. You will become the first in our family to graduate with a degree and the first to avoid both the mills and the mines. I have always tried to be a good man, but like so many men before me, I have failed in private much more than in public. You have always been there for your mother and your sister, especially when I was unable, and when I am gone, I want you to be there for them, the man I could never be. I pray that when the time comes, you will do better than me, for your mother, your sister, and the family that you will one day have.


Elias held the paper between his fingers and brushed his thumb against the crease lines that had worn soft with time. The words read like an apology but felt more like an expectation, a sentencing to an unseen prison that the young teacher would read time and time again.

Exhaling softly, Elias cursed the heat that filled the room, and although the temperature in the yard hadn’t reached 70ºF yet, the temperature inside was hotter than outside. The old AC unit, which came with the rental, had died a few days earlier, and although Amazon Prime promised next-day delivery, nothing had shown up on the porch, and the last delivery update said the unit was on its way from Asheville, the same as it had said two, then three days before. When the power went out, the stand-up fans stood like stationary flamingos, doing absolutely nothing to remove the stale hot air from his place.

Flipping over his phone and looking at the time, Elias saw the text from the head coach.

Football practice cancelled.

Then another.

Coaches meeting Huskers 2 p.m.

Expected temperatures were too high, and without power, there was no way for the players to cool off. Without refrigerators and running freezers, there was no ice to cool off the water, no ice packs for injuries, and the expensive cold gel packs were saved for games.

Inhaling deeply, Elias closed his eyes and felt his chest tighten. He had been back for months now, the prodigal son returning to Pines Holler, but he had been lying low, trying to avoid the people he had seen before he had left for college, every person to whom he had declared he would get his degree and move to the city. Maybe Raleigh, maybe Bismarck, who knows, maybe even somewhere out of state. He sighed softly and shook his head. “Yeah, the best laid plans of mice and men.”

With the mid-year retirement of Ms. Hilda Jenkins, the principal’s wife and lone English teacher at Pines Holler, Elias had come home to the town he thought he left forever when his mother’s arthritic bones had started acting up and his younger sister, Lila, had buggered off again and was spending more time on someone else’s couch than she was at the family home. The vice-principal had reached out to his mom, asked if Elias would be coming back, and although he was reluctant, the promise of a salary for a new teacher without a job was something he couldn’t turn down.

Finally rolling out of bed, Elias scrolled through his phone, checking his social media accounts and avoiding the emails that were usually nothing more than spam or alumni news. After the obligatory text to his mom and her standard reply, “Go have fun, don’t worry about me,” Elias dragged his feet, poked around the house, and finally pulled on his faded jeans and his favourite gray T-shirt. something other than the briefs he had worn to bed the night before.

Not thrilled with the prospect of a midday meeting at Pine Holler’s favourite bar and grill, Eli took his time. It wasn’t Huskers itself that bothered him. On a Monday night, when the establishment sat half-empty and quiet, he might have gone without thinking twice. But this was different. Huskers in the middle of summer, with the power out? The whole town would be there, everyone he had spent months avoiding.

And Elias didn’t want the questions.

Why’d you come back?

Thought you were getting out.

Didn’t you say you were done with this place?


He’d said all of that and meant it, too. After shaking the dust off his boots like it was something symbolic and final, Elias had said goodbye to the town, his family, and the friends he had grown up with since birth. He had promised anyone who would listen that he wasn’t coming back. And now here he was, back on the same street, in the same heat, driving the same roads like nothing had ever changed… nothing except him.

Driving through town in his dad’s old, battered black Dodge Ram 1500, Elias couldn’t help but notice the emptiness, the lack of movement, with only waves of heat shimmering upward off the hot summer road. Heading down Main Street and glancing forward, then right and left, Elias breathed in and something caught in his chest. Nothing had really changed, not in any substantial way. Since last summer, one or two stores now stood vacant, empty buildings with competing signs pasted on the windows: For Rent or For Sale. Take Occupancy Now. Pines Holler residents were always hopeful someone might set up shop, some fool might take interest in the town that was slowly dying, but other than real estate developers or surveyors, it seemed no one was coming. No one except him.

Slowing down for the two locals crossing the road, he gazed out the truck window and recognized the law office where Callie Shaw was working. Other than a nod and a quick wave from his pick-up truck, he hadn’t talked to her since his return, but the woman was unmistakable ... hippie goth, flowing skirts, jewellery dangling from her neck and wrists, and rings on her fingers. While her father was trying to find housing for souls in heaven, Callie was more practical, helping locals find affordable housing here on earth, mainly around town.

Nearing the bar and grill, Elias took a look at the parking lot as he drove closer. Most of the spots were already taken, and the only ones left were farthest away from the doors. Recognizing some of the cars from school, he could see that most of the coaching staff had arrived, and Mr. Robert Jenkins, the principal, must have already been there for hours; his car was up front, only a couple of stalls from the entrance of Huskers. Having seen the way Jenkins schmoozed and worked the system, Elias was surprised the principal and coach hadn’t had his name painted on the concrete with “RESERVED” written underneath.

Parking far from the entrance and out near the chain-link fence at the back, Elias stepped out of the car, and the hot air surrounded him again. It wasn’t more than a couple hundred steps, but in the midday heat, each step felt like two, and if he wasn’t used to the heat after close to thirty summers in Pines Holler, he was sure he’d be sweating.

Pulling the door open, Elias felt a gust of cold air slap at his face, and for the first time in days, he took a deep breath and felt a sense of cool relief. Standing inside, Elias glanced at the faces at the tables and the others serving them food. He knew Lucas from around town but had never really gotten to know him. He frowned when he saw Dallas’s ex-boyfriend, Valen. He had heard the rumours going around town about the Cop, but it was his own history with Dal made it hard to like the guy. When he saw Anna Lou standing near the bar, Elias actually smiled. He remembered her, dark hair, big brown eyes, one of the few people everyone liked back in high school. He’d been no different.

“Coach,” a loud voice boomed, interrupting his thoughts. And when he looked to the sound, Principal Jenkins was calling him over with a nod. With Jenkins sat the four other coaches, and even though he was out of the midday heat, Elias felt like he had moved straight from the frying pan and into something worse.
@Stryder BC Did Brayden bring his dogs? I don't see any mention of them in your post, but I thought I'd check anyway.


I didn't mention them but can easily add them in. They could be waiting in his SUV or at his side. Whatever helps the story.


OK, working on my next post as we speak!


Looking forward to it.
Standing outside the shop in the middle of Nowhere, Dr. Brayden Pointe recalled the conversation that played out earlier in the day.

“I tell you, you have to check out Intriguingly’s,” the old man began.

Carefully examining the Black Lab standing patiently on the floor of examination room two, Brayden had listened to the grizzled ex-Marine who had brought the dog in for its annual check-up and the most recent booster of rabies, Bordetella, and some other vaccines.

“There’s no place like it. It’s got some of the strangest things you’ve ever seen. Memorabilia from horror movies, things that look like they could be straight out of a coroner’s office. If you like weird and bizarre, that is the place to go.”


Brayden had chuckled and tucked the conversation away. He hadn’t planned on going to the antique shop, but when he found himself passing by after a long day at work, curiosity got the better of him, and he pulled his Subaru Outback over to the curb. Staring at it for a minute, Brayden studied the shop with its tall glass windows and the intricately designed lettering declaring the name of the shop: INTRIGUINGLY’S.

He bit his lip as he stared at the place. He had been up and down this road dozens of times, driven past twice a day on his way to and from the clinic. Why hadn’t he noticed it before?

Getting out of the SUV, Brayden stepped from the roadway onto the sidewalk and made his way to the shop. Even from outside the store, he now understood what the old man had said. Behind the glass was an old-fashioned Singer sewing machine like the one his grandmother had owned, an armchair, tattered and torn, sitting beside a trunk older than time. The framed painting of what looked like some more horrific version of Dante’s Inferno had caught his eye, but it was the skeletal display of a creature that must have been a dog that held his attention. With teeth longer than any he had ever seen and a shape that seemed unnaturally long, the doctor’s curiosity was piqued, and he walked toward the door and pulled it open.

Instantly, the young veterinarian was overwhelmed by the mixture of scents that attacked his nose. Dust and perfume filled the air, and the soft, eerie sound of organ music played in the background. Brayden almost left the shop, but wanting a better look at the bony specimen from the window, he took a step in, ready to sneeze.

Wanting to make a quick entrance and a speedier departure, Brayden walked toward the front counter, looking for someone who could help. Intriguingly’s was not well staffed, and the number of customers walking about could be counted on two hands.

When he almost sneezed again and felt his chest tighten, he was ready to leave the shop, but his eyes caught a display out near the back, and the doctor was hooked. More skeletal creatures lined the shelves and ornate cages hung from the ceiling with invisible strings, but it was the instruments and tools a veterinarian like himself might use, all from a bygone era, that caused him to stay.
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