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7 yrs ago
Current Alright, Inkarnate. You win the game of RP flex's, how does it feel? Do you feel like the hero you are?
7 yrs ago
I also bow down to you, Vox. You're still here and that's what counts!
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7 yrs ago
I bow down to you, Altered Tundra. Keep on keeping on, you legend!
7 yrs ago
I'm fighting my procrastination to try and keep my daily posts at 1.51 instead of 1.50. I didn't realise it'd be this much of a battle!
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7 yrs ago
Retail is just a cancer of the soul
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Haha! Finally something An-Hasst is really supreme at! He does more (height, muscle) with less (weight)!

His muscle strands must consist of some wicked sci-fi carbon nanotube material and for bones it seems he has found the concept of structural integrity forcefields instead of solid matter. Or he's a holographic demon in disguise who has already eaten 7,000 souls. We all know a soul is about 22 grams.

Just kidding while I'm ill and depressed...


It's valentines day, if someone's on this site chances are they are ill and depressed today (drinks more)
I hate to ask someone to assume the role of Gecko but can one of you kindly give me the jist of what's happened so far?


Well this is a story all about how an elven princess flipped our lives upside down! And if you'd like to take a minute just to sit right there (no, there) then I'll tell you all about how we became saviours of a town called Riverhope.

In an inn called The Hearth and Flagon our banners were raised and on the road we've spent most of our days, teleported to a grove and walking upside a swamp when a bog monster who was up to no good! Started causing trouble in our neighbourhood! We got in one little fight and a lizardman joined us and said "We're toates gonna go kill some dark elves."

Uuuuuuuhhhhh, I woke up seven minutes ago it's too early for mediocre improv like this

Let's start from the beginning. We got hired by an Elven princess because bad news was happening across the realm, essentially vampires and the likes were starting trouble and world-ending rituals because that's what they do. So we started off in hopes of finding some lizardmen who would be good guides and meeting up with the princesses half sister for more info. Luckily in a swamp we encountered Argon who was fighting a bog monster and beat the snot out of it (the bog monster not Argon)

After that we rolled on over to pretty much where we are now, meeting a captured Andred knight who sorta released a dragon or something along those lines and we are all debating whether to hunt the thing, talk with the thing or ignore it entirely because it ain't our business (the dragon, not the knight Jezebeth). I don't think I really missed anything?
@Sypherkhode822 With 'Excellent Prismatic Spray' what do you mean when you say that the light shreds through anything it passes through?
<Snipped quote by Sypherkhode822>

Some of my critiques:

- God mode online! So she's a mage, uses a bow, a dagger, has magic armour which also makes her strong, fast, able to see in the dark, oh, and she's a mage. Damn, my knight is starting to feel like a powerless little nobody.

- A bit too similar to my character. Wakes up with no memory but has a powerful gift, in your case, magic and an alternative personality, though in your case it exists in parallel with the original personality and not on top of it or below;

- So how much magic does she know? I take it that at 19, not much, right? Anyway, it wasn't very clear.

Hope my critiques helped.


I agree with all the above, I'm afraid. Though there are some things you could do to fix it

- The mask should be a lot less powerful, and perhaps more important to her character. Seeing in the dark is fine and perhaps it enhances her ability to cast fire magic (a more ungod-mode of saying 'immune to fire' could be that she can cast a really powerful fire-shield with this knowledge that other ordinary mage's defenses (including Alice's) would break down long before her's or something, but it isn't infalible and others can work with this). I feel like the reflexes and extra strength thing is a bit too much as well. You could say that maybe it acts sort of like a drug would to an addict, it steadies her and she feels better with it but it doesn't propel her abilities into obscenity

- Expanding on my 'more important to your character' it might be a good way to make it have more of an impact on your character. Whereas Jezebeth's thingy is more subtle, you could make yours far more audacious, maybe she is effectively two people in the same body, and the mask can talk or take control of her whenever it wants? Just food for thought, I don't want to hijack your character or anything

- It might be worth specifying the kind of magic she's good at, or a few typical spells she prefers to use. It's fine if you want to use more than that selection, but it gives us an idea of what she's like as oppose to know where we have absolutely no idea
Settionne spoke to the group as he moved over lace and buckle. The gist of it was that he believed that while the dragon was important, the groups current quest seemed puissant enough. She ran thumb in frustration more than thought over the back of her hands where she kept them clasped otherwise idle at her waistline. Everyone was refusing to consider the idea these events might be linked, and that if they are ambushed by the dragon as oppose to the other way around it would be a massacre! Trying to stop this dragon before it became a threat, or at least realising the true extent of it's threat could be integral to their original mission

She turned back to Urasen for his confirmation. "Don't look at me like that Alice, I'm not a druid. I'm a wizbear- I mean a wizard." What? Her fidgeting became still again as confusion and surprise shot through her mind. The man made a child-like spluttering sound in gesture that it was a slip of the tongue, but what could he have slipped onto? Her shock probably worked for the benefit of everyone else as she didn't have a moment to butt in, so he proceeded.

"Now, although I may not be a druid, I do know a slight bit about the rituals associated with nature and dragons and what-not. I can't honestly speak on the behalf of them though as I'm still very ignorant of the rituals, but the existence of druids within this forest is highly plausible. In any case we have to follow the advice my old grandpop gave me... 'Ursaren my boy, remember that an assumption is an assumption unless investigated', and as such we need to search this forest in order to properly find these druids that exist or don't exist and we have to obtain their help with this dragon. For those that oppose the idea of handling these dragons, we need to remember that if we don't handle this problem, there will be more monsters in this area that will hamper our progress before we can even accomplish this goal, and we have the problem of that same dragon attacking while we try and proceed, leading us to truly just be done there. I say we confront this dragon before continuing. Anyone else with me?"

Oh thank the gods she wasn't alone in her line of thinking. She nodded in agreement with Urasen's statement that an assumption remains an assumption unless proved otherwise or something. "I agree, my plan is a bit flimsy should we not find any druids or a Heart Oak. Argon, how well do you know the forest? Well enough to recognise signs of druids, or their territory for your people to avoid?"

Her line of inquisition was interrupted by their very loud companion, An-Hasst. "Alright. I suggest we speed this up a bit: I want everyone who -- by the power of all of his knowledge, experience and will -- wants to search for this dragon and either fight or try to communicate with it to raise his hand, please!" she waited to see how others would vote, more out of instinct than anything else. Anyone of class knew that opinions were like currency, and if spent on a failed cause it's value decreases and may even make the group cast her out. She worked her thumb across the back of her hand again.

He also turned towards the Elfen commander, requesting horses. She added her own argument to help him, "We're out of the swamps for the most part now, we'll take the woods slow enough and gain a lot of time on the plains." She hadn't been in the saddle for a while, but that sort of generalist knowledge was hardly that of an expert. "Besides, if we happen to get ambushed by that dragon some horses may be our only chance of escape." Vrettonnian cavalry tactics actually went into detail about how to counter a dragon attack, which is needless to say a similar way as to react to magic. Scatter as a group, and run for cover. That way any sort of fire breath and like will be far less effective. A secondary and all the more ghastly prospect might have also occurred to the commander as it did to Alice, which was the old saying "One does not need to run faster than the lion, one need only run faster than their friend." which seemed very relevant since a horse would be far more appetising to a dragon than some adventurers, no matter how muscled some of them are. The second plan might be a little too pragmatic for some, but Alice didn't make an addendum to what she said, leaving the idea hanging in the air

@POOHEAD189@Darkraven@BCTheEntity@Banana@Fetzen
Hey all!

This looks like a really cool game, and it looks like it's been running for a while (which means it'll probably keep going for another 3 years), and I was wondering if I could join the adventures of the gang?

I'm playing with the idea of being a Southlander and/or a hedge mage, whichever one works best.


Either would be great! @POOHEAD189 is the one who has the final say, but have you considered how your character would make their entrance?
*hits the initialization button on his Schroedinger's-cat-ification device and waits for the progress bar to hit 100 percent*

@POOHEAD189@The Fated Fallen I'll bail both of you out of your desperate situation! Soon someone will be un-dead and both of you can claim you were right! Captured alive and yet not alive!


Fetzen saves the day, this is what we pay you for
I'm getting to it... I'm just annoying to everyone around me. Though anyone else feel free to post here
Wait, how could someone ever confuse wizard and... Wizbear?
@POOHEAD189 YOU CAN NEVER JUST LET ME BE RIGHT, CAN YOU? OOOOOOOH NO!
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