TheDuncanMorgan

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@MacabreFox Thankyou for letting me know.

@PhoenixWhite I will keep that in mind. Don't worry about the RP at the moment, like I said to Twanny, your exams are far more important and I am more than willing to wait five days. Hopefully that may also give Cold hands some more time to get back to us. For the meantime I will continue working on the lore.

Also quick update: I have decided to greatly raise the total population of all the nations so as to make it more realistic, all other stats stay the same:

Cawanor: 1,200,000
Uzgob: 2,000,000
Ralda: 1,560,000
Raeldar: 1,720,000
Alenius: 1,570,000
Windermere: 1,500,000
Coruneon: 1,600,000
Glarmion: 1,500,000
Nash: 1,540,000
Orog: 1,500,000
Telmarion: 1,500,000
Thralreth: 1,800,000
Akki: 1,200,000
Sypius Plains: 1,700,000

Hope this doesn't cause any inconveniences? If it does please let me know.

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Indeed. It seems like it's exam season for a lot of people at the moment. Tell you what, if you are currently having exams then let me know the date for which they finish and we can work around those dates?

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@twannyman Right I was unaware that you were having tests. In which case don't worry about the deadline; your tests are FAR more important

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@twannyman Hi. Don't meant to push you but I will need your IC post soon given that I plan to move on to the next round of post by next week at the latest.

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OK UPDATE: I have finished my collab with @PhoenixWhite and she should have it up soon.

@twannyman How close are you to finishing your intro?

@Cold Hands It's been a while since we last heard from you. Just wondering when we can expect your next IC post?

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@twannyman Please feel free to post. I would recommend starting your intro post in Nyhem given that is where everything is currently happening.

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@Klomster I send you a PM know with a letter regarding your work order attached.

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@twannyman I understand. Autocorrect can be a pain sometimes :/.

Here are my recommendations. But remember it's your character and you are free to create your character however you want (as long as if it fits in with the lore and theme of the RP).

Childhood:
>Where he lived? Kingdom, settlement, was he poor or fairly well off?
>What adventure his father went on? (perhaps a adventure into the abandoned Dwarven cities may be a good idea)
>What was Gabanre view on his mother and father? did he love them, hate them, respect them, etc
>Where did he learn his sword fighting skills? Did his father teach him

Mage Circle:
>How did he find his time at the mage circle
>How successful was he compared to the other students? Novice, Average, Star Pupil
>Considering the war for the throne hasn't started yet it would have been more likely he heard about the death of king John and decided to become a mercenary then. Which would also mean he would be quite new as a mercenary.

Motives:
>What are Gabanre's motives? Gold, Power, getting a high position on the political hierarchy
>What are his morals like? Good, Bad, neutral

Appearance:
The picture you gave was fine, but maybe you could add things like his height and clothes, also you may want to change his hair given that outside of the world of anime blue hair isn't exactly natural :p.

Once you have made these changes send me a PM and I will check it over to make sure everything is fine. After that you will be free to add it to the character tab :).

edit: wow. Didn't know that angle brackets changed the colour :)

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@twannyman That is fine for a character and will work perfectly for the RP :). I would recommend doing the following things though:

1) Fire Magic is a type of destruction magic and the mage circle would have taught him destruction magic instead of just fire.
2) If you can, add in a bit more detail about your character's background.
3) Re-check grammar and spelling. I know this is a slight nit pick but it is still important.

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@twannyman Though I am more than happy for you to join the RP I will have to ask you to change your back story about the dragon given that Dragons are currently untrainable in the world of Formaroth. If you wish to base your story around being the first person to be able to train a dragon then you are free to do that. But I can't have you start the RP with a dragon already under your control, also if you are going to do that story line then it will have to be a long term goal and not something that happens right at the beginning of Gabanre's story. One final point; you may also want to consider how your character's story will feed into the main story of the RP (battle for the throne). Your story doesn't have to be directly related but if it isn't then Gabanre may end up having no relevance to the overarching story. Look forward to hearing back from you.